ARSHI FF: BONDED 4 D WombII (cr) THREAD THREE - Page 29

Originally posted by: SanchayitaM

OMG! What will I write. Firstly, thanks to my parents that I am 18 or I would have missed the most beautiful gutter-part in the whole earth till now. Standing ovation to u. My God!!! How did u do that? You are the best gutter-writer on IF. I am 100% sure about it. You broke your own record that u created in the gutter parts of BTFW1. You are amazing. Love u🤗0'2.

Originally posted by: Dilsay

Firstly thanks for the PM

No words to say how well you wrote the lovemaking scene here ,it was too good I could feel fire all around me ...😳 too hot to handle☺️ thanks dear for liking it and appreciating

Writers have their own mood to write certain kind of concept but I should salute you for writing so well in every kind and type you have touched so far... omg! i am touch. really. i always want to write stories which are different from each other. to be precised not same kind of genres. i am happy that i am being appreciated in almost all till date. i would like to explore some different areas as well. the toughest one for me was to write ONS2 as of now. but i am so glad that it is the most appreciated on amongst the current ones.

for these 2 updates simply mindblowing

you created the scenes so well that I felt I m watching a movie right in front of my eyes...as you might know that i am not a novelist, i write stories in simple language i always whated to see how i visualise it. and this is how i visulaise to write my stories and ya i am always comfy to write in dialogue format. but now a days i am trying it in a different way specially in mmb and ons2

superb...👏

hope to get the next one soon.. thanks a ton again

Originally posted by: sashhh33

dis was d most beautiful part i ever read!!!!!!!!

amazin appy!!!!

just loved it

Originally posted by: Black_Paradize

hahahahahahahaha seriously appy..before i comment on the whole update i want to tell u that em so damn dieing laughing right now...

this line "say you arnav is the best" made me laugh so hard ...seriously besties never change ... even in worse or the most strangest situations they find a reason to make us say They are the best LOL🤣...

and now comming towards the FF...OMG so damn hawt... see my eyes got burnt while reading... keep writting dude keep writing ..and the nighty was preety cute 😳...beautifully written.

meawo meawo...paro di...u know i was waiting to read the update...frm 2 days my net connection cut...n m hell busy...thn my luck is so bad...tht in versity i tried to log in online...but my versity net also disconnected...nw today fr few minm online n don't miss the chance read it...

excellent update loved it...

di one thing of ur specialty tht u portrayed the kissing scenes on ur all ff i really loved to read tht part.. there is a art of ur portraying kiss as like its more sweet...

i like the way u mentioned the bruise reason...

unconsciously they confessed tht they love each other...unconditionally...

they kissed like there is no tomorrow...kiss ker k pregnant...tht i thought whn i was in 6th standard...😆

arnav taken the promise of again love making...

hayee itni hot update the...it was all wet ...

waiting fr next part eagerly...love u paro di...