Arshi SS: A Mistake. Update#3-pg28

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Mahalakshmi Mathan

@melihoney

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

amazing amazing amazing dear. muaaahhh lovely update and thanks for the pm dear

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Priya

@Crazy_soul

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Amazing update dear!.really loved the way the story is proceeding.and i'm also happy that u have decided to extent the threeshot.
Felt bad for arnav,khushi and lavanya.bt then there is asha.the love she has for her baba whom she has nt even seen before that day.she remembers every single thing that khushi has told about him.just loved that child.

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jazz

@jazmeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

OMG

this was one of the best-est story i have eva read

i cried on the second part where asha said i like doin everything by my own as moma does as no one helped her. man i did cry

and the last part was jus awosome mind blowing

i knew laksh wasnt his son buh man i wish if was an acutal show to watch buh i loved reading it i am sure i wouldnt hav even enjoyed watching it this much

loved arnav's tumoril at the end when he thought they both were traiotrs and den how he convinced himself that he ddnt give them any choice other than betrayin him.

man loved it loved it

it was so emotional and heart arching

well done man

superb job

👏

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#194

and love i forgot to add can u plzzz pm me if u write more ffs plzzz i would love to read it man ur jus awosomeee

jazzz

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Chitra

@-QueenlyChitra-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

amazing lovely update 👏and thanks for the pm dear😊

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

I seriously love this so much!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!! P.S. I love the game of thrones signature you have!

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kiddy-kavya

@kiddy-kavya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Hey,

Shree PMed me this story of urs and dats hw i came to knw about it.

I can't believe that i could actually miss out on a beautiful story like this.

Beautuful concept, excellent twists and well done.😊

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Kurup

@Kurup

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Hey dude...This is the first time I am commenting on ur work, coz this is the first time i saw it, and the title interested me, and read all the 3 parts in a go and cant stop myself from appreciating ur work.

Ur wok of writing is unique. U have such a splendid style in ur writing. U just stole my heart with ur script...

Do continue and wenever u write and watever u write DO PM ME plz...Waiting eagerly to read all ur written work.