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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: segad
How do you express when you are overwhelmed? Touching, sweet, romantic, exciting, all at the same time.
Outstanding writing👏

Aw, now I'm overwhelmed! That's really sweet of you to say- I'm really happy you liked it and appreciated all the different elements that made up this update...it makes writing this FF totally worth it :) I really hope you will continue liking the upcoming chapters too... Thank you for your sweet comment :)

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#72

Originally posted by: indeedisa
I think, that if anyone walked in on me when I finished that last chapter, they would have immediately taken me to the psychiatric ward of the nearest hospital.
Cause I would be jumping up and down in joy with a goofy grin on my face.
I absolutely adored how you made Arnav so wonderfully humble , as he apologised for all his wrongdoings. And the way that Khushi forgave him was absolutely magical. Something out of a (sadly fiction) Disney princess movie.
And Khushi's little childish moment at the end. Melted my heart!!
Please update soon.
Lots of love
Celiza xox

AWW!!! Now I'm the one with the goofy grin across my face!! That's so sweet of you! I've tried throughout this FF to show the progression in character development of both Arnav and Khushi...making Arnav slowly relinquish his arrogance to accept his actions and their consequences while making Khushi better able to understand the priorities of life, her own feelings and his...so the fact that you appreciate and like the transition means the world to me!

And Khushi's moment in the end- lol, I was smiling away writing that bit, coz that is Khushi in her element- her inherent childishness and playfulness covering up how she is trying to cheer up an emotionally overwrought Arnav- so I'm really very grateful that you liked that particular bit :)

thank you so very much, and I hope you continue enjoying the rest of this FF!! xx- Nafisa

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#73

Originally posted by: sruthick
great update...they r back... d old KKG nd ASR

I'm really happy you liked it, esp the return of the old Khushi and Arnav :p thanks so much :)

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Originally posted by: seven_stars
ur writing style is amazing!!!

wonderful story

cont soon:)

Aw thank you so much!😳 Your appreciation means a lot to me- I'm really happy you liked it :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: summaiyasayed
luvd it

nice updt

thanks for pm

Thank you :) I'm glad you liked it :)

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Originally posted by: MrsRaizada101
The details were so frickin' amazing! You're really talented I'm really glad you kept writing! I absolutely loved the way Khushi explained everything to him and I loved even more how she put her funniness in the end. It was so cute! And the way you described Arnav's pain was heart touching. Great update!
-Abi ❤️

Heyy!! I haven't seen you around in ages!! It's so good to see you around :D

Aw, thank you *blushes*!! That's really sweet of you to say :) This chapter is particularly special to me, coz it marks the culmination of what this journey has been heading towards all this time- so the fact that you liked all the different phases of this chapter really means a lot to me :D

And Khushi's bit at the end is kind of like my personal favourite- I love writing about Khushi in Sanka Devi- mode :P

Thanks so, so, so, so, so very much once again!! Hope you like the coming updates too :)

-Nafisa

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#77

Originally posted by: anumber1
AHH! Loved every word of it! Especially the surpirse sanka devi-ness at the end. Superb!

Aw I'm really happy you liked it!!! Thanks so much- it really means a lot :) And lol- I enjoyed writing the Sanka Devi part more than the rest of the chapter combined :P So I'm reeeally glad you liked it :)

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#78

Originally posted by: akshiankita
amazing !!!!!!

Thank you!!! =)

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Originally posted by: Rabzooo
Omg that was perfect!!!!
I was close to tears one minute and laughing like crazy the next moment...
Expect khushi to ruin a perfect moment !!!! 😉 I'm sure many of went what the...there:p
Great update...khushi is so...nice...poor Arnav...he needed to hear that!!!
Loved it!!! Continue soon...and I think I don't miss Anjali...thanks to the screen space given by the cv's lol!!
I still love her!

Aw thank you so much! I'm happy you enjoyed the transition from emotionally moving to lightheartedness...I hope it reflects the roller-coaster ride of emotions that the show takes us on, though I don't know if I can ever recreate the magic of the IPKKND that we fell in love with. It really means a lot to me that you liked the different aspects of this chapter :)

And lol, I wouldn't be doing Khushi's character any justice if I didn't make her interrupt a potentially romantic moment :P That's the Sanka Devi Arnav fell in love with :) Thanks once again for liking :)