Arhi FF|Mohabat Door Jaane Na De| *Complete!* #3 - Page 62

Originally posted by: avantika_2012

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I was in ArHi-land after reading the update.

If you look round carefully, I'm sure you'll find me floating around there too...as it happens I spend most of my time wandering in Arhi-land :P

It was an absolutely indulgent...and swoon-worthy...definitely blush-worthy...also drool-worthy...and acidity (aka dhak dhak) inducing update. 😆 Just the way I like it! 😃

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!!!!! That was what I was going for, so thank you, thank you, thank you!!

I think all of us know that feeling of guilt when there is something that you're supposed to do and you even want to do it, but this small part of your heart (often the dominant one 😛) keeps wanting to do something else...or in this case, be with someone else. You feel guilty and selfish for thinking that way but then you can't control it. It was really cute how Khushi wanted to be with her Bauji but was disappointed that she would be staying away from Arnav!

*grinning like a fool* Yes! That's what I was trying to describe, and I am so RELIEVED reading this and seeing you agree! It's like you've read my mind (Again!!) and took the words right out of my mouth (Again!!)

I really loved the small moment there, at the end of the first part, where Arnav backs her against his SUV. You always write such moments beautifully...without any traces of vulgarity (thank you - vulgarity and I are not the best of friends and I live in perpetual fear of going too far :P ) and the same holds true for this particular update true but...yes, but...it was definitely hot, and if I'm not offending you then, sexy too! 😉 (*grins broadly* Nope, not offended at all :P It was sort of the intention, since things are getting serious after all, but since such scenes are still experimental territory for me, I'm actually glad you thought so!) And then you even managed to transform it into a cute and adorably funny one at the end of the scene!! How do you do it? Please remind me that you're for real! 😆 (Kya karoon? Khushi and Arnav are like that, nah - hot and intense one moment and cute and adorable the next! Hope the switch worked :D)

YES!! I'm definitely one of those who thought that ArHi's banter was abruptly cut off! Well, no, it wasn't abrupt...but tooo short!!! *wails* 😛 I want moreee...and fasttt! Ooo! It's going to get serious now? NICEEE!! 😉

Lol - I'm working on :D But is it weird for me to be happy that you want more? Coz it kind of makes me feel I'm doing my job right :P

Anjali's scene took me by surprise. Are you going to take unexpected turns? Something mysterious? Did you realise that I have high expectations? Am I putting pressure on you? Is that a yes? Oh, then I'm doing a good job! 😈 Hehehe!

Anjali...can't reveal much yet. But - oh dear. High expectations?? ***Pressure***fans oneself nervously*** What have I gotten myself into?? :S :P

The precap or whatever you call it...I'm guessing it's Khushi! Well, I hope see! *fingers crossed*

We'll see! Soon I hope!


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Kya? What more do you want? No! I'm not going to repeat that you're a brilliant writer...an absolute gem...your style is unique...there's perfection in every emotion you portray...etc etc. Ab hum thakk gayye baar baar bolte bolte. Aage se yeh understood hai! 😉

*blush*blush*blush*blush*blush*

If you're not careful my feet may never touch the ground again!

But THANK YOU!!! Have I reminded you recently that you're a sweetheart?! *hugs*

Originally posted by: hiahmed

welcome back. though i would just tell u one thing. dont let one plagiarist rob ur loyal readers of the pleasure of reading ur work. as it is the updates are few and far in bw; yet enjoyable. the relationship of arshi portrayed is beautiful

Originally posted by: -doe-eyes-

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

@Bold - I hear ya.

Anjali was a beautiful complex character who was never given her due.

And about the last part...I am grateful for support like yours and I dont think I can really give up writing...its just that the recent happenings around IF make me wary...anyway, what do you say to the fact that an OS idea is brewing in my mind somewhere... ;) :D