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FLGirl

@FLGirl

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#591

So glad to have you back on IF... I would have died a little if you discontinued this story.

THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU for this update. This FF is my all time favorite. It was not enough for me to read chapter 46. I missed the story so much, I read ALL the chapters now again and then I read this update. It was awesome to read like that.

I have a doubt. It must be from reading the last few chapters after 2am.. Did Kushi not wear the bangles that Arnav gifted to her for the outing? If she did, he did not notice? It is my sleep deprived mind talking.. sorry... When I wake up, I will go back and re-read the chapter where she gets ready to meet him for the surprise..the perhaps I will answer my own question

Please update soon. My favorite FF gets rare updates.. please please please update soon.

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#592

It is finally here!

A naughty Arnav flirting in public, I could swoon and die. And my poor dear Khushi, flustered and embarrassed and excited all at the same time..

But, he put her to ease, in his own unique way, turning on his charm on full throttle. Dear god, lovely!

This whole chapter, all the action would have lasted what, 15-20 minutes? Yet, you managed to take us through every moment, allowing us to relish it to the fullest. Delicious! Lovely update, Nafisa :)

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#593

God woman, you have no idea what your writing does to me. It weave a complex maze, pulling the reader up to the very core and whilst I'm reading, mesmerised at this flirtatious, charming Arnav/ Khushi banter, I simply end up gawking at the screen for a good one minute thinking, did it just end!? Anyhow, the rant being over, its was beautiful, their exchange, you writing, gorgeous as ever! <3

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#594

I am absolutely in love with the way this story is shaping up...You are a master story-teller, girl, take a bow.

I love your attention to the details that makes this story such a pleasure to read.

Loved the way Arnav and Khushi are moving forward in their relationship and their banter adds so much to this love-story.

And Anjali, isn't it nice to see her with a brain and also the fact that she is no longer afraid to use it and face the reality...

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-doe-eyes-

@-doe-eyes-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#595

Originally posted by: soppy
Okay...so ive like seriously read you ff like a billion times by now!...i think i can actually quote it!
When i saw that youv posted chapter 56 i seriously couldnt believe it!
Love your work ...i dont know how else to say this i love love love this story!
Please pm me when you update!
And also please update cul-de-sac

Eeeps!!! I don't know what to say!! Omg, I'm literally overwhelmed - I can't think of any honour greater than being told that you enjoyed my work enough to reread again and again, and I am seriously humbled by your kind, sweet words :D Thank you so much!!!!

I was literally grinning giddily reading your lovely comment - I am so glad you liked it!!!

I've sent you a buddy request - it makes it easier to PM people about updates :)

And will try my best to make some time for Cul-de-sac too! Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!

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-doe-eyes-

@-doe-eyes-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#596

Originally posted by: Nooro
Fantabulous...Awwweessoommee... I loved this one to the core...So Laad Governor is back in action...hahaha...His teasing n her reactions were cute n adorable...So Now story will take pace with Anjali's story n U will also show some ArHi moments...dont u..?? I really felt soory for ur work being plagiarised...Hope so IF team will soon work on this issue...I was really disappointed with with this incident but today I accidently got to know that u have updated it...I love ur writing..n Appreciate ur decision of continuing this FF...

Hey!! Thrilled and glad that you liked this chapter - especially the Laad Governor's moment with his wife :P Yup, you guessed right - the story will now progress with what's happening with Anji as well as more Arhi moments, and I'm glad you approve! Thanks so much for your kind and supportive words - I'm hopeful IF will take action against plagiarists soon, and we, loyal readers and writers, will never have to face this kind of situation again.

I'm very grateful for your support, and so happy you enjoy my work! I'll be sending you a buddy request, to PM you for coming updates, if you won't mind accepting? :)

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-doe-eyes-

@-doe-eyes-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#597

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar
Wonderful update, am so glad you updated, loved it, loved arnav and Khushi, loved his teasing and her feel shy and getting teased...loved his I can kiss you whenever and wherever...
What is Anjali upto! Please update soon!

And I seriously love your comment! Thank you so much for reading and liking and sharing what you thought about this chapter - I'm delighted that you liked it so much!! :D Thank you!!!!

About Anji...maybe there'll be a few more answers in the next chapter :) I'll try my best to post again soon :)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#598

Originally posted by: -doe-eyes-

Aap humein kyon thankya rahin hain? Likha aapne itna phantastic hai ki hum toh aise hi comment karenge. :p

I understand how a writer feels when a reader grasps what they were trying to say but you are such a fantastic writer that you provide ample clues as to get there. Also I know for one that you arent the regular writers on IF who will take out their mann ki bharaas on Anjali and thereby give her a proper characterization...so yeah. :)

Anjali, and for that matter all characters of IPKKND in general, were very well etched out with massive possibilities which were sadly left unexplored and many a times ruthlessly shunned. Glad to see you taking her out of that darkness and exploring some facets of her personality. :)

And I miss writing on IF too but somewhere I think some sort of saturation point (non fiction because of IPKKND ending and nothing else really catching my attention and fiction because of a variery of reasons) seems to have been reached relating to that...lets see now...thanks anyway for your kind words. :)

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-doe-eyes-

@-doe-eyes-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#599

Originally posted by: akshiankita
hey
loved the update

Thank you! Glad you liked it :)

Originally posted by: annieK
Arhi in love and beautiful rendering of their every emotion ... Loved it !

Thnx fr the pm .

for trying to meet our incessant demands for updates , thnx again dear .

Heya! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Thank you for letting me know what you thought about it!

Originally posted by: rati123
Just loved the romantic side of Arnav. I just hope it does not turn too serious too soon.

Thanks a lot for the update and the PM. Waiting for the next update.

Heya! I'm glad you liked the update :) Things will get serious, but I'll try to pace it so it doesn't get too drastic too fast :)

thanks for reading and sharing your views!

Originally posted by: udaymanyata07
thanks...loved it

Glad you did! thank you :)

Originally posted by: ruby-red
brilliant update and beautifully written

thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it :)

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-doe-eyes-

@-doe-eyes-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#600

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Aap humein kyon thankya rahin hain? Likha aapne itna phantastic hai ki hum toh aise hi comment karenge. :p

*blush*blush*grin*blush*blush*

I understand how a writer feels when a reader grasps what they were trying to say but you are such a fantastic writer that you provide ample clues as to get there. Also I know for one that you arent the regular writers on IF who will take out their mann ki bharaas on Anjali and thereby give her a proper characterization...so yeah. :)

Honestly if I blush any harder I think my blood pressure will rise. Not to mention my ego inflating to the size of my room and suffocating me :P But thank you, thank you, thank you! If you were anywhere near me I'd scare the life out of you with a back-breaking hug :P

Anjali, and for that matter all characters of IPKKND in general, were very well etched out with massive possibilities which were sadly left unexplored and many a times ruthlessly shunned. Glad to see you taking her out of that darkness and exploring some facets of her personality. :)

Yes, I completely, thoroughly agree with you. Anji in particular, in my opinion, was just plain abused as a character both on the show and as a result on the IPK forums and fanfiction. She went through the same ordeal as her brother, maybe even more so on a level because the tragedy happened on her wedding day, the day she probably dreamed about and fantasised, scarring her. She's just as damaged as Arnav, just dealing with it differently. The sad thing is she never got that shot at redeeming herself that Arnav got - and this goes for so many other people, like Mami, Akash - though Payal comes to mind more prominently. Maybe that's why Anji and Payal are two of my favourite side-characters to explore :)

And I miss writing on IF too but somewhere I think some sort of saturation point (non fiction because of IPKKND ending and nothing else really catching my attention and fiction because of a variery of reasons) seems to have been reached relating to that...lets see now...thanks anyway for your kind words. :)

I can understand what you mean, but I just have to say this - you are one of the very few, out of maybe three or four, writers that I've devoutly followed since picking up fanfiction here, and that's because there's a flair and a genuineness to whatever you write that' s very refreshing and addictive, kind of. Your characters are so well mapped I can relate to them instantly, language so lucid and clear it carries you away, and creativity that leaves me in awe every single time. I know that with the show ending and the plagiarism nonsense and the restrictions a personal blog imposes are all constraints but - you are a very, very talented writer who touches the depths of characters and makes them come alive like they're real, not just puppets doing what you want them to do. Please never give up on writing - it has more heart than the majority of what I've read on Arhi so far.