Arhi : This Time Forever ~ Chapter 6 ~ 18/03

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Ridhi

@ridizzz

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#171

Awesome update
loved it
i like all three couple's stories...
Avi- Anjali sounds like Arnav- Khushi's love-hate track
Payal- Akash track sounds awesome...i am glad you have develop their character...not leaving them in the background..as silent specter
Arhi...all i have to say...waiting for fireworks to happen...and i now sooner or later it will happen
plz cont. asap

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#172

Wow! In the second update itself u made evryone meet!
Liked Avinash. He's a bit like Arnav. Anjali dsnt dsrve him if what he is saying abt their wedding night is true.
So Payal left bcz of Arnav. Akash got in the same auto. But why did he get surprised??
Coming to Arhi..Arnav himself decided to stay away from Khushi. Pretty heroic, i must say. He knew where she is, he knew her number. But she unfortunately dsnt knw him nemre.
Khushi back to her KKG avatar. I'm xcited to c hw thngs move ahead..

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hararnav

@hararnav

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#173

Poor khushi she doesn't even know y people are staring at her like that...

Now Arnav's reaction would be priceless...

Does he know that she has amnesia?

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Devilways

@Devilways

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#174

Yay!!! New story. Great one.

For once i want to hear payal-akash conversation. I want to see him make his way back!

Brilliantly written! How long till he figures she doesnt remember him?

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#175

It's beautiful. Pls update soon, cannot wait for the story to unfold! Thnks for the pm.

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mon4u

@mon4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

Awesome concept. Please update soon. Can u pm me?

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#177

Loved this story.. Sorry for this late comment. So Khusi n Payal both walked out and Khusi has forgotten everything that happened in the last year. Akash joined the other group coz he's mad over Arnav for what he did and coz Payal left.. It's sad to see both brothers fight like this...
Anjali's story was sad also. Nani's thinking she's having a nice life away of everything but Anjali is suffering again due to her own mistake. I really thought Avinash was bad but knowing the truth i couldn't blame him.
But what i like most about this FF is the old Khusi is back.

This will be a chance to see the story from a different angle. So Arnav will rewrite some of the parts and that will be really interesting ...

continue soon...