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nikki1211

@nikki1211

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#911

i am in love with the way you write...also i am in love with your virat...he seems so genuine...and well you portray his emotions really well as well...his reactions wen he thought maanvi was leaving coz of him...awww...

love viru boy , its called loveee...and i really like how sorted maanvi is...

the beginning where she thinks of virat...and the kiss...i dont know why bt i really loved maanvi's noticing thta her lips had a different shade of red after the kiss...

awesome...

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rush007

@rush007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#912

superb update after a very long time, Plz update the next chapter soon. Thanks

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Aysha

@aysha1989

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#913

Hey sorry couldn't reply on the last update... I thought that you have got the offer when I saw your pm... It's okay you'll get the offer very soon...
Thank you for the wonderful update 😊

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Niki

@luvzindagi

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#914

Awesome update Zahara... I loved every bit of it
Manvi's confusion, Virat's helplessness over his past, Madan's anger, Vanshika's care for her bahus, everything... 😊
Thanks for the PM and please continue soon...

All the best for your Uni, I am sure you wil get an offer soon 😊

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zahara

@ZAHARA.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#915

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar
Its amazing dear...fab...bechara virat he was so embarrass...cont soon...n btw wat is uni?

Uni = University 😳

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@say_cheese

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#916

sorry i didnt cmnt on ur few previous updates ( credit goes to sem.exams ) vtw like the previous parts it was also a beautifull update !! esp. Virat's blurting abt their kiss was really cutely described...

thnx 4 the pm.
do cont. soon.

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zahara

@ZAHARA.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#917

Originally posted by: nikki1211
i am in love with the way you write...also i am in love with your virat...he seems so genuine...and well you portray his emotions really well as well...his reactions wen he thought maanvi was leaving coz of him...awww...
love viru boy , its called loveee...and i really like how sorted maanvi is...
the beginning where she thinks of virat...and the kiss...i dont know why bt i really loved maanvi's noticing thta her lips had a different shade of red after the kiss...
awesome...

Thank you so much! They're falling in love but it's not official until he tells her all his life story 😳

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zahara

@ZAHARA.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#918

Originally posted by: luvzindagi
Awesome update Zahara... I loved every bit of it
Manvi's confusion, Virat's helplessness over his past, Madan's anger, Vanshika's care for her bahus, everything... 😊
Thanks for the PM and please continue soon...

All the best for your Uni, I am sure you wil get an offer soon 😊

I'm glad you did! I try to incorporate as much detail and information on the family members as I can. :)

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zahara

@ZAHARA.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#919

Originally posted by: aysha1989
Hey sorry couldn't reply on the last update... I thought that you have got the offer when I saw your pm... It's okay you'll get the offer very soon...
Thank you for the wonderful update 😊

Unfortunately no :(

but thank you!

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zahara

@ZAHARA.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#920

Originally posted by: say_cheese
sorry i didnt cmnt on ur few previous updates ( credit goes to sem.exams ) vtw like the previous parts it was also a beautifull update !! esp. Virat's blurting abt their kiss was really cutely described...

thnx 4 the pm.
do cont. soon.

It's okay! Make sure you study for your exams first! Thank you so much though glad you enjoyed it! <3