FF: Tales of the Heart|VirMan|CH 1 - 23 (Thread 1) - Page 77

LOVE waking up to your comments! Will reply soon!! Xx

Originally posted by: nisha33

RES

P.S. going crazy because of the quick updates. THANK YOU!

how is it possible that with every update i want to read more and i yearn to read the next chapter!!?

i want to say update soon but that would be too selfish on my part.

gosh it was so good.

did virat attempt suicide?? damn maya.

can't wait for manvi to find out the truth

i loved how he is slowly getting attracted towards her, noticing her presence, smell. swoon

my fav line today was when vira wondering "why is everything so different with you around?"

thank you for the pm and super fast update.

keep up the good work

Originally posted by: RICOPUNK101

AyeHayee Zahara. Amazing updates and congratulations for reaching 100+ pages.

Now, look at me you update so fast I can't even comment on time. You update as fast as a superhero. Thanks for that. 😃😃

To the story now, Eeek!! I am blushing like a mad duck- Virat is having a Kuch Kuch Hota Hai session and its starting for Maanvi as well. I can't wait for their relationship to unfold.

Jeevika-Maanvi. You make me love them just as much as I love them in the show and Jeevika is so cuteee!!.

Jeevika-Viren- Their playful conversation. I loved that.

Dadaji-Virat- As we all know they aren't the best of friends in the show. But I loved how you put their relationship in this story. Adored the flashback.

You are such a lovely writer. Keep up the great work and I'll try an comment on time and Thanks for the PM.😳😳

-Disha

P.S What did Maya do?- And backstory of Virat, me excited!!!!

Originally posted by: arhifandebi

I just read the entire part ... I just ran out of words by the end..👏... The part where Virat was recollecting the times he spent with his dadaji was really very touching..😊.. It was so nice to see that Manvi yearned to comfort Virat...Even I was feeling so sad for him..😔... Circumstances drifted him away from his near and dear ones... It was really so sad...and thanks a lot for the PMs yesterday..😃..( Won't say anything more as I had promised to keep quiet😛)...and please please do continue soon ...Your FF is like a relief to me from the hectic studies...😊

Originally posted by: js1234

my gosh you are on a roll here! thank you so much!

As mentioned previously - your story is a page turner! the more you give - more we want!

Loved it all! understanding is developing nicely between them - and loved Jeevika! so sweet. M is way too mature for her age - she needs some spoiling!!!!

she had the yearn to comfort him

read d last 2 part 2gther

Just recently started reading this FF. LOVE IT!!!. I feel so bad for Virat tbh, can't wait to find out more about his past and hoping this will bring both Virat and Manvi even closer. Continue soon please and please PM me for future updates. :)

another beautiful

Thank you! *Writing next chapter* :P