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zahara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: ehmmbhrocks
oh no!they r having such a misundrestanding...both of dem r nt interested 2 get married 2 eachother den hw r they going 2 agree??? vry interesting.u r an amazing writer. iluved dis part❤️.thnks 4 d pm😃

thanks you! Well...you'll just have to wait and see :P

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zahara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: shona_virman
Lol Manvi touched him, poked him to see if he was for real? 😆 only Manvi can do tat... Luvd how she carefreely said in front of jeevika tat she hates royals... W8ing for da nxt chap now... Both virat n Manvi thinking else abt each other... Thanx for pm i hope u update soon:)

Yep! I got the idea from watching her poking him in EHMMBH ;)

And I've always thought of Maanvi to be blatant, she says things without thinking

(Don't we all??)

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zahara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: AngelicDemon
oooh...I loved this part!

Maanvi's thoughts ...LMAO 🤣

Your hindi is just...outta this world I tell you 😆

Update soon :)

Boo, my hindi is so bad 😭 "outta this world"? Hm hm, like what from Mars?

hehehee

I LOVE MAANVI! :P

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zahara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: Palkhi_08
Wow, just stumbled on this... and what an amazing story!!

LOVE it completely from point A to Z.

Update soon please, and do add me to your pm list!

-Luv Pari

Pari! Thank you, glad you stumbled on this 😆

And yep, I shall!

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zahara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: -Aswathy-
This is just awesome!Totally loved it...VirMan's first meeting was just fab..!Maanvi checking out Virat!😆Swamini seems nice to Maanvi..!Yeh kaise??😲Some royal fights are going to happen in future..!?😉Can't wait to know how they both are gonna get married...!!😃

PS:Have a request...Need some grand royal romantic scenes btwn VirMan in this FF..!😃😆😛

Lol, I'm just gonna say now...this FF will have naughty Maanvi (no, not in that sense 😆)... and a hating Virat. ANd yes, Swamini is nice! I don't like the mean OTT Swamini!

As for your request...You're going to have to wait...because they'll need to be some grand royal hate scenes first, and then some grand royal nok jokh scenes before the romantic scenes 😉

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zahara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: ITrustMyHeart
!Wow just wow! The whole concept of this ff seems some what similar to Dekha Ek Khawab yet different in its own way.
I regret myself for not comin across this amazingg ff of yours. The concept is fresh, and so are the characters! It'd be amazing to read Manvi settling down with the royals! And the guy Shiv seems to have a crush on Manvi! You know people who are closer to you and have known you most of the time have such feelings 😛 !

And, I literally cracked up reading the Vaseline lagata hoga line 😆!
Pinky is so bubbly, I love her! And I love Manvi's antics 😆!
What to say! You're writing is fab girl! Can't wait to see how'd Virat and Manvi would make up things between them, from hatred to love!
Virat's thoughts about women makes me feel he had a dark past!
OMGG If I go on telling, there're so many mysteries in this story!

Okay, I stop here! I babble a lot, I know !
But what to do, your story has made me to 😈 !

Okay, So do PM me whenever you update!
Eagerly waiting!

Omg! Can I say that your post had made me smile like a fool?! THANK YOU!

I loved Dekha Ek Khwaab (At first) but then got bored when Akash kept coming back...

Though, Tales of the Heart is about Maanvi marrying into the Royals rather than being born into one...Yes, Shiv will be a pivotal character in the future (not any time soon, don't worry!) and he'll be a total positive character, I HATE negative characters, so :P

Thank you so much! I'll PM you when I write more :) My updates are mainly Tuesday/Wednesday but I may have certain updates here and there...

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shaimah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

awesome update

loved it

continue soon and thanks for the pm!!

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zahara

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: vadhera
I was transported to their kingdom..It was magical..
I loved how Manvi couldn't believe it was Virat Vadhera the prince standing before her..Touching him to make sure she was not dreaming and her laugh before shutting the door on his face.
Both of them are argry and don't want this rishta..But fate has a different plan I think..Waiting for more..

PS:Jeevika is so cute in this..

THANK YOU SO MUCH! Yes, the title of the stage is called "A fated compromise" so you're right, it has something to do with fate :)