Kalarikkal House [3] - [Thread 4 link - p. 144]

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

awe totally creepy hope arnav can survive the curse...beautiful update...continue soon...

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pri3love

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Sensuous. This update is just awesome and I hardly have words to describe it. My skin is simultaneously on ice and fire. Their kiss was enchanting. It took me a moment to realise it happened. I didn't see it coming. Arnav is so into this place and Kashi and there is still some more time left. Kashi is also responding without any inhibition.

I wonder what you have in store for us. With you every update you weave magic where I am transported to the green lands and the magnificent house with all its stories and myths. The mysteries of the land unfold in each chapter and leaves me wanting for more. Eagerly waiting for the next update.

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N0306

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

"I think I will follow you to the Land of the Dead if you asked me to."

wow... beautiful beautiful update.. kashi fight of letting go of arnav so that he can be safe; her freaking out and keeping herself sane with the recent occurrence.

Arnav's spacing out in some parallel world.. his desire to have kashi.. actions say more than just desire or lust.. it speaks of eternity..

loved the way you have written devi.. you did it again.. amazingly beautiful chapter.. and the small scene where Kashi brings the baby under the shed to keep it safe from rain and then dread of never having her own.

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Swetyz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Congrats on the new thread
That's really an awesome update
Can't wait to read more

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DBZ-27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

a excellent update and congrats for new thread.

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fhussain237

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Congrats on the new thread

Edited by fhussain237 - 13 years ago

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fhussain237

@fhussain237

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Loved the update
Kashi's fear was well portrayed
The kiss was intense and hot
Looking forward to see kashis reaction to arnav words
Continue soon

Edited by fhussain237 - 13 years ago

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ashred12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Oh.My.God !!! d ending scene !! *faints*
to be frank, dis ff scares me...i get scared if it'll end up tragic... :(

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

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Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Omg can it get freakier ??? u scared the wits out of me while Arnav had noo idea that his shirt was on fire !! soo scary...and his last sentence was scarier !!

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Tanya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Wow,What a grand opening of thread3 !! Brilliantly written!! I am back from my onam holidays,so consider this fab update as my 'welcome' gift:) Thank you Devi😊

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