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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#481

very lovely😊

have enjoyed reading it, be it about the case or Riya and Shree or even Arjun and Rathore were so funny😆

and finally Arjun has guessed who is the boy Riya loves😳

Ab bechara shree ka kya hoga???😆

Please update soon😊

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50ShadesOfMe

@50ShadesOfMe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#482

Superb update!!
Loved Rathore's nd Arjun's convo!!
Everytime their plan needed Shree's help! 😆
Hope Anu tells her feelings to Shree soon.. Bechara kitna pyaar karta hai usey! 😳
Ahaan! 😉 So finally our super cop has connected the dots nd has found out who that guy is!! 😉
Waiting for the next part. 😊
Thnx for the pm! 😊

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Gorasiya Priya

@Priya_Gorasiya

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#483

sorry for late but i wait for ending my reading till this part for comment

i am new reader of your ff and i tell you that it was amazing i read it in two days all in one go it's superb you pen down it beautifully

great work

for 22nd part

it was amazing

i like the convoy of rathod and arjun they both thinking about the guy that anu loves and they Chet -Chat with each other

and yes now arjun join all the dots and now he sure that the guy is non other than shree

and now shree to gaya kam se i am waiting eagerly for your update

tnx for pm and update soon

this is for you

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Edited by 12pr - 12 years ago

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#484

hey Arjun figured it out!!lol..

ab sree tho gaya kaam se!!!

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#485

Simar this update was realy cool. Initial convo of the protective brothers was realy funny 😆 the most funniest thing was that they were planning to have shree's help to figure out the guy 😆 😆

Now who is Ganesh & actualy for what this chintu is stalking them?? This case too sounds good.

I realy liked the convo Riya had with Shree at SUV. She is actualy being buried by the secret. In one hand she has her love & other side there is her bestfriend. Lord save her otherwise she gonna be mad soon 😆 😆

Clapsss 👏 👏 👏 supercop has figured out Anu's love finaly,he had came across the most wanted criminal 🤣 🤣 poor Shree couldn't imagine his face when Arjun will come infront of him 😆 Its Riya who can save shree's back now 😆

it was very very very nice update. Update fast dear coz I realy want to see Arjun-shree aamna samna 😛

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#486

Hey ...

Amazing update ... 👏

Oopsss ... Chottu blurted the truth ...

How long does it take for ACP Raute to connect the dots ????

Like seriously !!!

He figured it out in an instant 😲

Can't wait to see the confrontation 😃

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Riya

@PrincessPatel77

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#487

Awesome chapter!

Loved it!

Haha, Rathore couldn't even say his sis is in love lol... loved that scene.
Yayyy! Arjun figured out who the guy is! Can't wait to see his reaction! Nd Rathore's too.

Anyways, continue asap

thanks for the pm

pm me

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Pisces_Gurl

@Pisces_Gurl

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#488

Great yaar...the story is going best...but plzz dnt interfere Sikander case again or put any harm to ETF...
U knw I actually laughed at the last part reading that how Arjun can miss soo important point abt her sister..n the way he remembered everything...
Now waiting for the two brothers come in action as protective brothers...but we know they will definetly like shree...
Waist ing for the next part...
Update soon...

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#489

Awesum wrk
loved it
really samjun want help frm shree rofl
shree ki help kaun krega ab
chotu too gud
band bjegi ab to shree ki arjun se wow
p.s. u r amazing writer dear
claps..!

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#490

Awesome update... Both brothers r hell bound to knw whom their sister hv fallen in love with... wat a plan asking Shree's help😆... Loved Riya Shree convo... Finally Arjun figured out who the guy is... all the best Shree... update soon...