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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
awesome os...make him blive her!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanxxx! Hope ur not getting bored! Part 5 will b up soon... Dont get mad @ me guys but next 1 th convo is mostly bw asr nd payal... Nd she is not th dumb kind in my idea... I promise part6 u will enjoy...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Arshiarnav1741

awesome os...make him blive her!!!!

thanxx! Ofc, he will believe, not b4... W8 nd read ;-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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YAY!!! half a century comments!!! M so happy! *hugs*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yay can't wait :D xoxo
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Posted: 12 years ago
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m not boring u guys am i? Nd next part u will c angry young woman in payal... Plz bear wid th next 1?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Continue soon.. its very good!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Yeah... Soon... But dont kick me 4 givin screenspace 2 payal
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Posted: 12 years ago
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(Credit for cover goes to arshy4ever 😊)
PART 5- ONE COIN, TWO SIDES.

Payal was in the kitchen when Arnav entered the RM. She looked behind him for Khushi and frowned when she couldn't spot her. She noticed Arnav and Nani exchanging a small conversatio and Arnav flew upstairs in rage. NOW what had Khushi done? She sighed and decided to go and talk to Arnavji once the curry was made. Fifteen minutes later, she switched off the stove and and went upstairs to talk to Arnav. Just as she neared his bedroom, Payal heard him say very angrily on the phone. "What the-?! How dare you Khushi-?"
Payal stopped where she was, hesitating. Was it a good time to talk to him? He seemed really angry... She heard his voice again. "Accha? Ye dialogue tumne kitni baar practice ki hai Khushi?"
No. He was too angry. She woukd talk to him later. But she froze in shock at his next words." Khushi, main iss drame se thak chuka hoon. Ghar aho ABHI. Aur shaq nahi, main JANTA hoon ki tumhare aur Shyam ke beech kuch chal raha hai iss liye mujhe tumhe Payal ke naam per dhamki deke shaadi karni padi!"
'Dhamki'? Then it struck her... The day Khushi and Arnav had married...continuous tears...her unusual silence... It all amde sense now... And THAT was why Arnavji had married her, little sister? THAT was the reason Amma had, for the first time, slapped Khushi. Tears of sadness filled Payal's eyes... Khushi had married Arnav for HER. Sadness was drowned by anger directed at Arnav. She huffed to his room and just as she was entering, Arnav said. "Khushi, call mat kaato. I am not finished-"
Payal knew just one thing at the moment... Khushi was in danger. She reached out to grab Arnav's phone just as he began to yell,"Khushi? KHUSHI?! Kaun Khu-"
Before he finished Payal grabbed the phone, screaming into it."KHUSHI?! KHUSHI? Kya-"
The phone went dead, and Payal stared at the phone in shock.
Arnav stood rooted to the spot, thoroughly confused. Who was Khushi talking about? Who was going to kill him and Di? And... And woh mujhse kya? His mind didn't let his heart complete the words.
Payal's broken voice pulled him back into reality. "Shyamji! Where is Shyamji?" she seemed to be asking herself... Panic lit her eyes.
Before Arnav could ask her how she knew that it had something to do with Shyam, she had already run out to Di's room. He heard her ask very calmly voice under control. "Di? Where is Jijaji?"
"Ye toh subah hi bahar chale gaye."
Payal was already out of Anjali's room walking out rapidly. Arnav stared at Payal, unsure whether to approach her but when he remembered how the first thing she had said was Shyam, he realize Payal would have answers. "Payal stop." He called to her. She stopped immediately, but did
n't turn back. "I need to talk to you. I-"
"Hum aapse koi baat nahi karna chahte. Hum Akash se milne jaa rahe hai."
He plead."Payal ruko. Varna-"
She whirled around and Arnav was taken aback at the anger he saw in her eyes. He had never seen her this angry. "Varna kya Arnavji? Aap hamari shaadi tod denge? Doosri baar?"
He hadn't expected this. "Khushi ne tumko bataya?"
"Nahi. Humne khud aapko iss baare mein baat karte suna. Dhamki di thi na aapne use? Hamaare naam per? Aur itna bada kadam woh tabhi le sakti hai jab mamla hamare shaadi ke baare mein ho. Aaj bhi usko lagta hai ki Abhishekji ke saath hamari shaadi sirf uske wajah se tooti hai... Kya mila apko usse shaadi karje Arnavji? Kya paya aapne? KYA BIGADA THA USNE aapka."
"Bigadne WALI thi," he said softly.
"Ji?"
"Meri DI ka sab kuch bigaadne wali thi."
Payal laughed humorlessly. "Usne aapki di ka sab kuch BACHAANE ki koshish ki Arnavji. Hamara sab kuch bachaane ki koshish mein usne sab kuch kho diya. Kitne sapne the uske...ek pati jo usse pyaar karta ho, jisse woh pyaar karti ho, ek sundar aur yaadgaar shaadi. Toot gaye uske sapne. Pehle uss Shyamji ne tode. Woh toh koi baat nahi, sapne toote per dil nahi toota. Aur ab? AAPNE. Aapne uska dil aur uske sapne dono tod diye!"
Arnav looked at her shocked. The words '
Aapne uska dil aur uske sapne dono tod diye!' stuck to his mind... SHE had broken HIS heart that night. What mattered more, was WHAT DID SHE MEAN BY SHYAM BREAKING KHUSHI'S DREAMS?! Memories revisited him.

*Khushi crying onto his shoulder. "Khushi? Tumhare mangetar ne kuch kiya kya?" Then the day she Anjali had introduced her to Shyam and how she had thrown a cold 'Namaste' on Shyam's face and hurried home and even refused to be dropped by Shyam. Then very recently, when she had, "Unhone sirf hame nahi, balki hamare purey parivaar ko dokha diya! Shaadi-shuda hone ki baat chhipakar humse sagaai ki..."

He hadn't believed her.Seeing the shock on his face, Payal told him, "Aapko bahut kuch nahi pata Arnavji."
They were still standing infront of Arnav's bedroom. "Mujhe apne sawaalon ke jawab chahiye Payal." He said quietly.
Payal replied sarcastically. "Ji kyun nahi. Khushi wahan khatre mein hai aur hum yahan baithkar aapko ek kahani sunae?"
Arnav got frustrated. "Khushi SHYAM ke saath hai... koi khatra nahi hai usko," he added bitterly.
Payal's angry face turned pale and panic-stricken. "With Shyamji? What is he upto NOW?" She groaned leaning against he barricade, feeling weak kneed.
"Payal?" Arnav asked unsurely. "He ALONE is not upto anything! Both are in it together! They are having an affair, Dammit!"
Payal's head shot up. "Aap apna haath aapke dil pe rakh kar boliye Arnavji! Kya aapko sach mein lagta hai ki Khushi itni giri hui hai?"
"Maine khud apni aankhon se dekha Payal," he said bitterly, avoiding the part of him that said Payal was right... Khushi itni giri hui nahi thi...
"Kya dekha aapne?" she asked, still cold. He told her, as blankly and emotionlessly as possible, about that night on the terrace.
"Aankhein kab dokha khaati hain, ye kisi ko nahi pata hai Arnavji... kisi ki bhi aankhein dokha kha sakti hain... AAPKI bhi..."
"Shyam hugged her! I saw them!" he said angrily.
"Did she hug him back? Tell me Arnavji... Did you see her hugging him back?"
No, she hadn't but "She asked him to leave Di!" Payal's eyebrow shot up at that.
"Usske baad? Usske pehle?" Payal retorted. He grew uneasy... He hadn't stuck around for the entire conversation. He replied back, avoiding the question. "I saw the truth Payal. I KNOW the truth," he said adamantly.
"Toh aapko ye bhi pata hoga ki woh hamare ghar pe Paying guest ki tarah rehte the?" Khushi had told him, but he hadn't believed her.
"Aur ye bhi pata hua hoga ki apne aap ko kunwara bolkar unhone Khushi se sagayi ki thi?" So this was true too...? Oh no! Arnav began to feel really sick at the memory of how he had treated Khushi.
"Aur aap-" she stopped abruptly, her eyes widening at someone behind Arnav. Arnav frowned and turned around to face his Di, standing with her eyes filled with tears.


PRECAP- "Hum jaante hain woh humse pyaar karte hain... Aapko jo samajhna hai, samajh lijiye. Hume koi farq nahi padta. Aur hum bhi unse bahut pyaar karte hain..." Kisne kyun kaha? catch up in the upcoming PART 6...



Hey guys! get ready for a major twist... It maybe too much, but I always hoped it would end up like this... also, I know this is full of Arnav and Payal, but that was necessary... And Payal's character is so not herself, but i had wished she was like this...
I hope you liked this and I also think you will enjoy Part 6 much much much more...
sorry about the English-Hindi switch :P Impact ke liye zaroori tha... :P
Hope I am not boring you :(
Edited by Dynamix215 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u guessed it right... ek aur twist hai though... might b a major 1 4 u guys...

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