SS: His Smiling Girl Part 10 updated on Pg 108

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Downhill

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Posted: 13 years ago

#491

waiting for ur next lovely update

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Mitalp142

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Posted: 13 years ago

#492

Aww, so cute, beautifully written.

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chavvi16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#493

OH MY GOD NK ABHI SE HI SUHAGRAAT NAHINMERE BHAI THAT WILL BE AFTER A YEAR WHEN THEY GET MARRIED DUDE YOU ALMOST GAVE A HEART ATTACK TO THE GUTAS DUDE AND WHAT PRAY TELL WILL ARNIE DO WITH A TOKRA
MAN IS THAT GUY FUNNY OR WHAT NO SERIOUSLY
SO KHUSHI YOUR TO EB HUSBAND WAS SEEING YOU LIKE A ICE LOLLY AND HIM BEING THE PARCHED CHILD WELL BE CAREFUL BECAUSE HE DOES WANT TO DO WHAT YOU SAID ABOUT THE ICE LOLLY EXCEPT DONT TELL HIM WHAT YOU THOUGHT THERE OKAY
SO ARNIE WE REALLY HAVE BEN THINKING A LOT ABOUT HER AND DREAMING ABOUT HER WOW THATS GOOD

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Akorshi Oroni

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Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#494

wow! so lovely update...

nw they r engage...

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afsha

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Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#495

Awesum OS

Read all parts

Loving hw Khushi is trying to knw him

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LyssaPie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#496

awww wow could this get any sweeter?

Damn I LOVED it!!!

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ducky_anne

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Posted: 13 years ago

#497

AWWW This was so cute! A year is forever! SIGH.

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#498

you've described the roka beautifully... amma's and buaji's worry about khushi coping with her changed circumstances was nicely done... and nk took the cake with his "Aap sab ka Suhaagraat (Swagat) he!" I can just imagine their expressions! akash leading nk away was nicely done... this akash seems to think on his feet rather than just dithering in the background

thoroughly enjoyed khushi teaching arnav to dance and their interlude at the poolside, not to forget laxmi barging into arnav's room!