FF: IPK: A Baby for my Di...Thread 1 Complete

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sandyjerry

@sandyjerry

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Fazila~
Precap: Khushi refuses Arnav...Buaji gets sick... Khushi has no choice but to accept ASRs offer but on her terms... What are Khushi terms...ill write it tomorrow...

Dont worry... this time it will be khushis deal..I wont let ASR win...😡

Do continue soon...😛

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@debby_11

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

i already cried buckets after yesterday's epi...now u made me cry...

i loved the way you wrote :)..

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rsood86

@rsood86

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

A VERY NICE OS AFTER LONG TYM...KEPT ME HOOKED...LUV TO SEE DIS TRACK IN THE SERIAL TOO...👏

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Kurup

@Kurup

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

plz this is reallly heart wrenching. I agree tat u r sticking to the caption of the tile of this show, but dont let Arnav win again, dont let a girl like kushi lose her womanhood in this way atleast in this respect. her dreams of marriage shattered atleast not this one plz...

let her fight and show Arnav tat she is no less than him and can win over any situations bravely without stepping back. I think u can convert this to an FF rather than an OS. Keep ur thinking hat on and think of making this an FF. Something like Kushi accepting but along with her conditions to which Arnav do not agree and then they get separated and they move on and she works day and night something such and after few years comes face to face where she is successful may b not as succesfull as him yet standing on her own feet without anyones help and despite all the troubles created by him.

Just a suggestion...accept or reject is totally up to u. I know I am nowhere near u with regard to to writing.

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Paramjit

@Paramjit

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Omg that was a beautiful story, after watching today this is another track that could happen. Oh man this was heart wrenching even i had tears. Arnav does not give garima or Khushi a chance to speak. Thanks for pm, please do continue. Update soon.