Ariya FF: Milenge ab Yaara: Part 16 @ page 44

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Vrutanshi

@kreya204

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#321

Its grt!!!
D way u've described is fabulous!!!
D way u've described d cases is just precise n perfect!!!
N d case in which riya was accused...OMG!!! It was described in a grt way!!
Every detail was precise!!
Also u gave d correct dialogues to correct person!!!
N u also built d suspence amazingly!!!
D emotional turmoils of riya!! Grt job!!! 👏
Also d confusion of arjun towards his own care,concern n jealousy towards riya!!!
Rathore riya bonding is shown in a v nyc way!!!!
Also chore masti wid riya was grt!!!
N dis case in sikkim!!! Its amazing!!!
Dis shiron is smthng we can say as weird!!!
N d way he behaved wen asked directly was dangerously weird!!!!
N shiron was actually flirting wid riya!!! He is a monk isnt it!!!
Nyways till here its grt!!!
Hope to read nxt part soon!!!
N plz pm me wen u update it!!!

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#322

hey this awesome story
why did u stop update 😡 😡
plz continue soon 🥺 🥺

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Kiruthika

@-Keerthi-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#323

Try to continue this ff .. One of the best ariya ff nd i really want to read it completely..

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Areesha

@Areesha566

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#324

plz update this story
its amazing

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Srushti

@cutesrushti

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#325

Read alll d parts of ur storjy...
They were just awesome...m speechless...
Plz continue soon...
Eagerly waiting... ❤️❤️❤️
N also u have a special talent of writing mysterious cases...
Keep it up 😊

Edited by cutesrushti - 10 years ago