Maaneet FF ~ Immeasurable Love ~ Pt9 Pg40| 5th Feb - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome story

loved it...

cont soon and pls pm me from whenever u upt ..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
amazing update...
loved it alot...

maneet talk was nice...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
so maa n geet became frnds...but all things r fishy arond maan...he is married...but wife?...he hav to tk food every two hrs...but why?

excellent n mindblowing update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Why do I feel Maan isn't really married?
Nice, their friendship is really fast.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 3

It was at around 10 am when I finally woke up after mumma shouting on me for the 10th time. I shouldn't have woken up at 5 in morning. This brother & sister took away all my peaceful sleep. I quickly took a small nap again just for 5 mins & then finally got up as I knew if I was anymore late mumma would actually kill me.

As I descended the stairs & entered the living room, I could see mumma was really angry. She & chachi both were in the kitchen & weren't talking to each other. They were not even looking at each other let alone talking. Oh Babaji.. lagta hai phir se in dono ka jhagda ho gaya.. Gosh.. save me plz mumma ke gusse se.

Mumma.. um.. Breakfast..?

She glared me through her eyes.. no no her scary eyes. I gulped. Geet.. aaj to tu chup hi reh le.. warna babaji bhi tujhe teri maa se nahi bacha paayege..

Wait for 10 mins.. ban raha hai nashta.. tab tak.. here, have ur milk..

She handed me the glass of milk. I made a face & was abt to ask her if I can skip the milk but her eyes.. I had to drink it.

After breakfast, when I noticed chachi was nowhere to be seen, I sneaked in the kitchen & asked mumma that what was going on.

Kya chal raha hai matlab? Nothing's going on.. chal ja jaldi se get ready.. aur zara phone pe kam baatein kara karo.. subha subha kis liye uthi thi..??

Wo mumma.. sunaina se hi to..

Beta.. tujhe pata hai na tere ghar wale kaise hain.. u very well know ur chachu will make a hype out of it.. n wahi hua..

Unhe kaise pata chala..

Subha naina bhi uth gayi hogi na.. she must have told him.. baat karni hi thi to kahin aur chali jati.. jab u know ki tere room me hi naina ko sona hota hai.. u could have gone somewhere else na..

(naina & manya are geet's chacha chachi's daughters.. naina share geet's room. )

Acha sorry na mumma.. aage se mai dhyan rakhugi pakka.. ab ye batao aapka chehra kyu utra hua hai..

Wo log tere bare mein kuch bhi ulta seedha bolege.. to chehra nahi utrega to aur kya hoga..

Mumma.. phir se wahi.. I have told u thousand times.. chaddo na un logo ko.. u know they will never stop all this.. I don't understand why on the earth u bother on the first place.. leave them alone.. wo to chahte hi hain na ki aapko bura lage.. u just behave as if ur deaf when they say something.. samjhi na..

Kabhi kabhi mujhe lagta hai mai teri nahi.. balki tu meri maa hai..

I giggled.

Ab kabhi kabhi maa ko bhi advice chahiye hoti hai na.. to beti nahi degi to aur kaun dega..

Acha meri maa.. ja get ready now..

Ok mumma.. jaa rahi hu..

Suddenly I came back.

Acha suno mumma.. wo na maine sunaina ke bhai se baat ki thi.. & wo almost mere friend bhi ban gaye hain..

Again the eyes, I gulped.

Ban gaye hain..?? Kitne bade hain??

I.. I don't know.. um, 18 I think.. I lied

Us se kis khushi me baat ki tune, can I know?

Mumma wo actually.. sunaina ke papa ki mentality sunaina & us ke bhai ke bare me is really disgusting.. to wo log baat nahi kar paate.. but mumma they love each other a lot.. Sunaina ke liye wahi uski family hai.. so just to help them.. u know..

Geet.. ye kya sab me pad gayi hai tu.. beta is sab ke chakkar me apni life kharab mat karna.. I'm telling u

Oh ho mumma.. crime patrol dekh dekh ke aapko har ek insaan pe shak hota hai.. seriously.. wo bahut ache insane hain..

Acha meri maa.. go now

After I got ready, I quickly had my lunch & headed to my room. I immediately texted maan.

Hii

Hey geet.. wats up??

Nothing.. mai bas abhi lunch karke aayi..

Itna late..

Late!!?? Its just 3 pm..

Geet 12 pm is lunch time..

Not for me..!!

Ya 'coz ur not human, right??

Wrong..!!

C'mon geet.. I'm always right.. & u will have to admit it..

U cant be always right..

We'll see that soon..

Sure, sure

Can I call u..??

Ya sure

I picked his call in one ring.

Hii.. his beaming voice made my insides to cheer up.

Hii.. kya kar rahe ho..??

Shopping..

Acha.. kya le rahe ho abhi..

Um, shirt dekh raha hu..

Acha tell me.. white or blue..??

White..

Chi.. nahi blue..

Chi blue is so.. ugh! My fvt color is white.. so.. but agar apne mann ki hi leni hai to why asking me??

Mine is blue..& ainvayi mann kiya to puch liya..

Ohh..

Hold on.. let me pay

Ok..

Hmm ab bolo..

Kaisa colour hai blue ka.. dark or light.. what kind of shade??

Um.. maine white li hai..

Wo kyu.. u said ur fvt is blue..

Ha fir maine socha.. jab kabhi mai tumse miluga.. to atleast tumhare pasand ka colour pehnu.. kya pata tum impress ho jayo!!

Ohh.. to mujhe impress karna hai apko??

Ghayal to kuch aisa hi hai madam..

Waise I'm already impressed.. mere fvt colour ki shirt li apne!!

Bas bas itna bhaw mat khao..

Kyu na khau.. mera muh hai.. its my wish.. mai kuch bhi khau..

Acha ji..??

Han ji..

Um, geet.. chalo we'll talk later, at night perhaps?

Um, ya sure but why? Kya hua?

Wo, mumma aa rahi hain.. mai unke sath hi market aaya tha.. so I have to go with her.. & unke shopping bags mujhe hi carry karne padenge na.. she wont be able to carry much weight.. so.. bye.. ok

Ok bye.. & ur too sweet..

I heard him chuckle & then he cut the call.

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Ok now a doubts clearing session 😆

1. Why maan has to eat something every two hrs??

- u will get to know reading the story.. next part. But anyways i guess most of u have understood. But geet has not.. 'coz she hasn't met anyone with this prob.. she's way too naive.

2. Is he actually married or is it someone's planning.. i take that someone to be sunaina..& why does his mother serve him when he is married.. where is his wife??

- he actually is married.. that is no planning.. why wud sunaina want to make geet n maan talk to each other when she knows he's married (she doesn't knw abt his personal probs i.e. d marriage related ones) n d age diff.. so its no plan of sunaina.. yes his mother served him breakfast.. he rarely sees his wife.. let alone her serving him.. dont worry.. it'll all be clear soon..

3. One more thing.. this is a real life story. I had thought i will fast fwd the story to the jaan janu scenes.. but then i realized if i do so.. i'll miss out the very impt components of the story.. they are very essential to build up the whole story..

Geet 15 & maan 25.. & they will be in a relationship soon.. & ofc maan wont let anything of that sort happen between them.. except small lip locks..

All i wanted to know guys.. is that r u fine with the whole concept.. mainly the age difference.. i want to know ur view guys..

But according to me.. age doesn't matter at all.. isn't it said that love is blind.. even scientifically it is said.. that when in love.. the part of brain that responds with negative thoughts just stops working.. so i think it doesn't matter at all..

& when i see those two people to whom this story belong.. so happy & in love with each other.. still.. i really think that all these worldly differences seriously doesn't matter..


Ok thats all with my bhasan..!! Enjoy y'all!

Love,

Mahima

PREV- Part 2 NEXT-

Edited by mahimak - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Me first in both the comment as well as "like"😆
Howz you my baby ??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

Me first in both the comment as well as "like"😆
Howz you my baby ??


I'm good diii 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
AMAAZING storyy. I just Lovve this story dear!
And the age thing is wat makes it more n more interesting n new😃
I just love reading it dear,
Waiting eagerly for the love story to proceed.
Nd also those Jaanu Jaan scenes to start,😉
Continue real soon
Jaldee Jaldee😉

Edited by 16anyaa.gurti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
ha its very lovely 😛
loving this true concept too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM

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