im not making any lame excuses for commenting late this time..
its the wedding you know..but its not very nice to drag it every single time as an excuse..
ok you can get mad at me..im giving you the full authority over it since im pretty sure that being mad at me would be the last thing you'd do...😉
oh gosh i love this family...
its pretty hard for 'em to digest the fact that asmi's all grown up and shes leaving 'em...
you know what,,you always have this filmy effect in your writing..
its like im watching a movie..(it was prretty hard for me to imagine arnav with not so young looks..😆.but hes an amazing father indeed🤗)
i just love the way asmi n ashar team up to pull arnavs leg..
and i adore the lines you bring out..they feel so natural..despite of looong appreciations,metaphors and similies,, its rocking to read some easy going dialogues with so much life embedded in 'em..here goes in case you needed some examples..
"Yes but then, fortunately I grew some brains." Ashar grinned.
"You did?! I could never have guessed that on my own!" Asmara replied with feigned shock.
"I didn't expect you to either! You see, you still haven't developed any brains and we're all waiting impatiently for the day you would." Ashar beamed at her while Asmara pouted like a kid.
so alive,scintillating and heartwarming...
(need to know the truth behind my craze over your writing??its because i suck at literature..i dont want you to be some wordsworth or shakespear writing all those crappy literal valued stuff...hell i'd whack you with full speed if you do..the blissfulness in your writing is wayyy enough to fill me with your liveliness !!!)
and with ''tata daddy'' you made me a cry baby..😭
( you know ,,wordsworths ''she dwelt among the untrodden ways'' isn't the only piece that could get someone teary eyed !!!)
you never fail to awaken the drama queen inside me..i used to cry over movies only ...but you make me bawl like a baby with some ss of yours...😲ufff shame on you Dilru..its pathetic to be so childish !!!!
ummm i was thinking about this ss lately..
im not very sure about me being ready to let go of this ss after 1 or 2 more updates..so how about turning this in to a FF??you know,,i could be really genius in making suggetions..😉
think about it...hmmm..
🤗🤗 (its a bear hug..sorta trying to make it up to you..its my way of apologising..)
now dont get mislead that i hate literature..i definitely dont..but you are the only person on this forum to awaken this chilled out mood in me..seriously fari thats why you had me glued to your work in the first place..you are so special to me..i hope you've already figured it out ..😃
Edited by claireDD - 13 years ago
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