New SS: Its Hard To Let You Go Part 5, Page 65 UPD - Page 29

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: V323

Now dude. Listen up, kayy?

I came online for a much deserved break... And then I saw you updated part 3. OHMAYYGOSHH <3

Ashar and his dad are JUST SO CUTTEE <3 ao are his mum and sister. I know this SS is about Asmara but ermm... ASHARR <3 i WANT HIM. <3

Two more parts?? YAYAYAYAYA!!! Thankyou so much Farii <3

Awww :') they made jalebies. Awww Ashar recorded it? Issmart hai, hello hi bye bye. Dude. OMFG!! love this!!!



Awww thanks V!! I'm so glad you're enjoying this SS till now 😳 and you're comments are just fabulous!! They ALWAYS make me smile like an idiot! Thanks hun 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Fan_ipkknd1

Farriii! 😃

omg this is brilliant! Loved each and every moment of it! It was so cute how ashar remembered ahsan and asmara's meetings and how he was the first one to figure out 😃
Loved the jalebi moment they had beautiful Fari 😃 plus ahsan sounds like a very nice guy too 😃

Continueee sooonnn 😳



Faiza!! Thank you for liking it hun!! I thought this one was a little boring with just Ashar thinking and thinking and thinking 😆

You found Ahsan nice?? Great!! 😃 Actually ppl wanted some light on his character so I decided to include some bit about him too 😳 Hope you like the next update as well 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SmileyStar



Tashuuu!! I love your revenge!! May you always reserve the first post in the name of revenge 😆

You know what? Before I got to know you, you were Ashum's really good friend, right? So whenever she would write a new OS, I would try to res the first post but your supersonic speed would always beat me 🤣 and I actually used to get a little annoyed at you for always stealing my place 🤣 🤣 🤣

OMG!? Is it???? I knew there was a lil bit of virtual fight going on between you two then for the 1st place 😆 But I didnt know u actually got annoyed
Now you know how I feel when someone res the 1st place in ur fics n I come online after battling assignments practs n lectures to find myself on 7th or 9th page 😆
Actually when you updated ASR jr I was online...but through my phone n it doesnt have the option of logging in...I was so mighty pissed off that I lost a golden chance of commenting 1st
Same story with this SS...
Dang it!!!! Why didnt I accept when my dad offered to buy me an android! I was worried abt my marks then n thought if I didnt get good, I'll forever live with the guilt of having an android but not good marks...*still sulking at not having accepted that offer*

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MashiatMimosa

<font color="#0000cc" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">aww it's super super super cute and emotional😭asmara is leaving the house and i feel like i m gonna cry on her bidaai as if she is my own sister😭it was so beautifully written👏i cant believe u r same person who writes the most funny FF too😆btw when i read the video camera for a sec i actually thought u r gonna say snakewa's back and he put the camera's in there😲but thanks a lot for saving me from a heart attack and ashar is definitely the best brother in world🤗😃</font>



Hahahaha you thought The Big Bad Evil Shyamo was back?? 🤣 but you're right! They way I've written it, it does sound like someone's recording all their actions secretly 😲 😳

Awww you've gotten so attached to this little family that you don't want Asmara to leave?? Yayyy! I'm sooo happy now 😆 Hope you like the next update as well 😳 Thanks Mimosa 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am only going to comment on part 2 as you made me cry throughout!
I was taking a break from my studies n came online through my phone only to cry silently on my bed reading each n every word that you wrote!
I hate you for making me cry...

How do you do that?
I cant write emotional stuff n try hard making people cry but end up making them laugh
*sigh* I seriously want ur n Tashu's writing skills

Each n every thing that u wrote was so heart wrenching...so heartfelt...
Were you thinking about own yourself n your dad while writing it?

Coz I cldnt keep my emotions in check n keep thinking abt me n my dad n the various times we spent together

You know I always get a headache after I cry n being a Cancerian it doesnt take much for me to cry 😆 But I try not to cry n ur emotional part silently made me swim in my own pool of tears 😆 River Munazza that is 🤣

I love you I love you I love you!!!!!

There! That sums up everything 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum



Omg!! Your dad offered you himself to buy you an android and you turned it down 😲 😲 *faints* 😆

Awww its alright Ashum! I love the way how you think so much about your studies! Please don't forget me when you become a famous scientist and deduce your own laws of electronices 😉

Chalo kuch nahi hota if you don't come in first! Your comments are still awesome enough to more than make up for it 😳 and kab tak farig ho? Before you have your next semester or whatever?? 😛

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SmileyStar



I think alot abt my studies? No! I only think abt my marks regardless of whether I study or not *sheepish smile*

Haha! Me, famous scientist? How I wish! But my frnds after coming to know I took up electronics want me to design new laptops n tablets according to their fancy n convenience

Here whenever I touch an electronic gadget my mum smiles n says, "Haan ab to electronics hai...tumko hi sab karna hai" n I wish to dig a hole in the earth n bury myself 😆
I get scared actually...everyone has high hopes from me n I only pray that I'm able to come true of their expectations...you pray for me too pleeej!

my phase 2 exams are from next month, n semester end in Nov most probably...
This year the syllabus changed so have the mode of conducting exams of Uni of Pune...otherwise till last year there used to be only one exam in Dec but now since they want everyone to pass hence this way...2 online exams n then semester end!!!

Zaalim duniya!!!! 🤣

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

I am only going to comment on part 2 as you made me cry throughout!
I was taking a break from my studies n came online through my phone only to cry silently on my bed reading each n every word that you wrote!
I hate you for making me cry...

How do you do that?
I cant write emotional stuff n try hard making people cry but end up making them laugh
*sigh* I seriously want ur n Tashu's writing skills

Each n every thing that u wrote was so heart wrenching...so heartfelt...
Were you thinking about own yourself n your dad while writing it?

Coz I cldnt keep my emotions in check n keep thinking abt me n my dad n the various times we spent together

You know I always get a headache after I cry n being a Cancerian it doesnt take much for me to cry 😆 But I try not to cry n ur emotional part silently made me swim in my own pool of tears 😆 River Munazza that is 🤣

I love you I love you I love you!!!!!

There! That sums up everything 😃



You know what I feel like doing right now?? I feel like pinching your cheeks and going Awww 😳 You're sooo cute sometimes!! 😉

Yes Part 2 was my favorite too though I wrote that one in a hurry cos V323 was forcing me to... but it turned out actually not so bad 😳

Yes, for some reason getting married and having to go through bidai has been on my mind so much these days!! 😔 You know when I think I'll get married Insha'Allah my brothers will be so small! They're actually not so small now but I find them so 🤣 The youngest one is 13 and the other one is 17 so If I get married at 23 lets say, they'll only be 16 and 20!! I feel like i'll miss out their childhood 🤣 My friend thinks I'm crazyyy 🤣

And yes, being an only daughter, abbu supports me a lot and loves me a lot too! So thats always on my mind when I write those scenes 😳 But I'm sooo happy I made you cry!! *throws a punch in the air* 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SmileyStar



You know what I feel like doing right now?? I feel like pinching your cheeks and going Awww 😳 You're sooo cute sometimes!! 😉

Yes Part 2 was my favorite too though I wrote that one in a hurry cos V323 was forcing me to... but it turned out actually not so bad 😳

Yes, for some reason getting married and having to go through bidai has been on my mind so much these days!! 😔 You know when I think I'll get married Insha'Allah my brothers will be so small! They're actually not so small now but I find them so 🤣 The youngest one is 13 and the other one is 17 so If I get married at 23 lets say, they'll only be 16 and 20!! I feel like i'll miss out their childhood 🤣 My friend thinks I'm crazyyy 🤣

And yes, being an only daughter, abbu supports me a lot and loves me a lot too! So thats always on my mind when I write those scenes 😳 But I'm sooo happy I made you cry!! *throws a punch in the air* 🤣



I am cute?😳 Thanchu! 😳

Oh good! V323 forced you to write...you always need someone to come spanking you so that you lift your fingers, apply some pressure on ur brain n string in your pearls of thoughts...

*virtually patting V323 for doing a marvellous job*

LOL! U think so much! But even I do sometimes actually since there are a lot of weddings going on right now in my family

My eldest cousin brother from mum's side is getting marries in Jan InshaAllah n everyone wants me to attend...they get bored without me *cheeky grin*

U'll miss out on your brothers' childhood? Acc to you then till what age are boys kids? Atleast 20 is fine na...Think abt me! M 18, my cousin brothers are hardly 10, 7, 5, 2 n 3...what abt them?

They'll never remember they even had an elder sister! 🤣 Coz we are only 2 sisters in my father's side me being eldest...n since I havent been to my native place for almost a year my chachu jokes that he'll have to to take my brothers to a museum to show them what an elder sister looks like 🤣

U evil lady!!! U r happy u made me cry??????

Fauzia diii! Look what one of ur twins is doing to the other!!!!

Zaalim duniya!!!

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