New SS: Its Hard To Let You Go Part 5, Page 65 UPD - Page 28

brilliant,...girl...

long long update and it was the best dear.
And sorry I was really late to comment.

Continue soon ❤️

awww... its such a cute family! especially ashar... i love the character :))) hes just like arnav only much calmer :D

Lovely! Awesome part 😳 Really nice 😳

wow that was amazing... :DDD

Read all three chapters in one go. Loved it. I had huge smile and moist eyes by the time I finished.

The minute details about the characters and their relationships, the funny interactions, emotional ones too, took my heart away.
The pain of separation described from each character's point of view are really touchy. I am wishing Asmara would cancel the wedding and stay with her family for few more years. ( that's really stupid but cant help) I cant see Arnav and family crying.

How very cute!

Originally posted by: tash10

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#660033">I am first 🥳Revenge time for not being among the first in Ashar's diary!!!🤣😉</font></font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#660033">2 or more updates – Me likey!!! 😃Actually I am loving the minute details you are giving about each and everyone which makes the SS even more interesting and crisp!!! So, having moreupdates means having even more scenes of thefamily, which I am so looking forward to!!!😳

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#660033">There are so many things that I loved in this update that if I would point it out all, I would be writing up the update itself!!!😆 I loved how you laid emphasis on Asmara being the life of the house, how she was a Khushi personified – bubbly and childish, yet mature when situations required it!!! And narrating it from all through Ashar's eyes added some kind of magical feeling that made my eyes moist!! 😳</font></font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#660033">Ahsan slowly creating himself a place within the family was so adorable!! Am glad you threw light on how Asmara met him, his brother-like relationship with Ashar and yeah, Khushi feeding him though accidentally was super cute!!!😃</font></font>

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<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#660033">This sentence "'But she'll be living so close by, We can always go visit her whenever we want.' He tried to pacify himself but he knew it won't be the same." had me so emotional!!😭 He is the BEST bro, wanting the best for his darling sister!!!</font></font>

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<font color="#660033" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">And the whole jalebi session was the cherry on the cake!!! Arnav and Ashar – the two man in action !!! 😆Aww, so adorable!!!Ashar teasing Asmara, and everyone feeding each other made it so Picture Perfect…I meant camera perfect!!! 😉I was grinning, and felt like crying out of joy at the moment I discovered that Ashar was capturing those blissful moments!!!!

Looking forward to the next update!!!😛

You are a rock ⭐️and I love you 🤗

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Tashuuu!! I love your revenge!! May you always reserve the first post in the name of revenge 😆

You know what? Before I got to know you, you were Ashum's really good friend, right? So whenever she would write a new OS, I would try to res the first post but your supersonic speed would always beat me 🤣 and I actually used to get a little annoyed at you for always stealing my place 🤣 🤣 🤣 but that was before I knew you!! Now I can never be annoyed at you! You're actually so sweet you make me feel like such a bad person 😆 🤗

You liked the update?? Didn't think it was a filler one?? I for some reason didn't like the 3rd one too much 😉 My favorite was the 2nd one! 😳 I've started writing the 4th one, will post it today Insha'Allah! Hope you'll like that one as well! 😳

Love you hun and your comments!! I can't now imagine my updates without your comment!! You're just plain awesomeness 🤗

Originally posted by: sweetysaran

<font color="#cc00ff">hey that was aincredible update...</font>

<font color="#cc00ff">i just loved it...</font>

<font color="#cc00ff">too much emotions and fun lovingscenes... mainly i loved when brought out ahsancharacter... that was mind blowing... their familyattachment...</font>

<font color="#cc00ff">i just loved it to the core...</font>

<font color="#cc00ff">thanks for expending this ss...</font>

<font color="#cc00ff">beautifully written...</font>

<font color="#cc00ff">waiting for the next update</font>

Awww you liked Ahsan's character?? I'm sooo glad!! 😳 Actually a lot of ppl wanted some light on him so I tried to include him too 😛 Hope you like the upcoming updates too 😳