D3 FF : Bereaved [Multifandom] #1 - Page 19

Heyyy ...i am loving this FF...its awesome ...the way u r unfolding secrets ...its mind blowing update dear...swayam's doubt on his friend was his frustration ...i loved this part

"I told you guys because I know you all from god damn eighteen years of my life. And I trust you all and I know you will never pity me for anything. Especially for this! I know you all will stand beside me as my support system, and believe me you all have! I know I can trust you and rely on you. But my new friends, I am not very sure of them till now."

Gunjan and swayam convo was touching...they are really close to each other ...the idea of cake and card was really sweet of the gang...sharon's reaction when swayam hugged her ...was magical...u made it heavenly with ur words:

"As if her soul had reached where it wanted to.

And as soon as he pulled out of the hug, she felt as if somebody ripped her soul apart.She felt incomplete."

Awesome part dear.👏👏👏..plz update soon ...i just can't wait for the next update... 😊

wonderful update nivi 👏👏

As i said earlier i really liked gunjan n swayam.Swayam share his insecurities with gunjan,it was really touchy they r truly bff..But mystery is yet to be unfold.So finally sharon say yes to shivam to make swayam jeolous,i hope sharon confessed her feelings soon to swayam as i don't want shivam n sharon as a couple for ever...
Precap is damm interesting,waiting for next part eagerly

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

I am glad you liked my update!

Next chapter will be posted after on mostly page number 40 / 42 ! :D

Keep waiting! 😉

Nivirti or i should say Nivi right...

I was in shock when Sharon said Yes to Shivam and even more when Swayam didn't even react to it !! Good to know ki she only did it to make him jealous !! Can't wait for the secret to be revealed in the next chapter !!

U again nailed it :)
Loved it !!
Nil proposed simmi n she said.. Yes!!
N sharon she said yes to shivam jus to mk swayam jealous but yt again swayam dint gt affectd which again pained my heart!!
Thoda sa to effect hona chaiye tha na !!
N I was also confused.. Y kriyaansh nodded in affirmativ.. They knew d best dat swayam loves sharon a lot th y.. May b coz he's goin to NY!!
Agreed gunjan is vry supportiv n she really cares fr swayam.. But swayam..he dun trust d louins..lik really.. He thinks tht they wid pity him.. He doubt thr friendship.. It pinched me..
N he is confused abt kriyaansh too.. This was more lik a shock to me.. I felt bad lik really bad!!
Bt its his opinion.. Lik on one hand he says tht kriyaansh r his bstfrns n he lives sharon n on d othr hand,he dum even trust dem to tell d truth jus coz he thonks tht they wud pity him..damn
Tnx to gunjan.. She took control ovr swayam!
Louins.. To b precise kriyansh got a cake fr swayam n a card jus coz they r sad infact vry sad tht swayam wid leave dem tmrw.. They wantd to mk it a special one n contrast to tht swayam do ny trust these friends of him.. Huh
How wud they feel when they wud come to knw..
I din knw y its pinchin me dis hard!! N dat swaron hug n sharon pov.. Haye..lovd it but gal ur swayam do not trusts u so... Yep.. I got tears in my eyes readin d update! N swayam wud lik to say one thing.. Connection ya kisi pe trust krne k liye its not a necessity tht u hav to know dem fr yrs..
So swayam disease is hona get reveald in nxt update..

Eagrly waitin!
Dun know y I hav ths feelin dat kriyaansh knows abt swayam..!
At d end.. I wud lik to say u write beautifully.. It always leave an impact on me..
Tnx fr d pm :)

heeyyy amazing post...do update soon...
want to knw the secret!!!!