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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

That was lovely! It was cute seeing Khushi all behki hui and Arnav showcasing his amazing restraint once again!! It was all aww...
Apt song for the whole scenario and the last line by Arnav was the clincher!

Edited by kritz11 - 13 years ago

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arhifrvr

@arhifrvr

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

omg...!!! The last line was bomb...!!!! =D

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sooryalekshmi

@sooryalekshmi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

that was so cuteee...

the last line by Arnav... I just love it.

The flashback part was good.
Thanks for the PM.

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Manitaa

@Manitaa

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Smita please start another ff.. OS are not enough.. Im greedy! 😃

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Ammaazzzing...i read it twice...thrice...u hav written it so welll...loved it...

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Spriha

@KaranShilpa:)

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

This was so cute! I love everything you write.. i think you're one of my favourite writers! <3 please keep writing.. thank you for sharing such sweet happy updates :)

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

wowww... tht was cute naughty sweet romantic n wat not... totlly loved it😳😳

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

have been visiting your os index hoping to see something new... thanks for sending me the pm about this Hilarious piece... a drunk khushi is simply awesome, as the kids say... usually arnav is the one who stalks khushi hoping to kiss her and here he's almost fighting her off, hoping to save his virtue 🤣! khushi's singing was adorable, especially the changes she made to the lyrics... so apt! arnav's care and indulgence of her was heart-warming to see... loved that he enjoyed their moments of togetherness, even though khushi was so out of it most of the time! the ending made my day!