#2SWARONFF ADDICTED 2 LOVE!UPDT NOTE+FIN PART pg42 - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update...plz continue it soon...!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey it was an emotional update..nd as usual aapka cliff-hanger..vaise u going to keep her alive na ? do update soon..nd srry fr commenting late..
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Posted: 12 years ago
sissy! first of all am really sorry for the extremely late comment! you know how it is!
coming to the update.
for update chapter 20:
how could Swayam fool around with Sharon when he knows he knows that they both are immensely in love with each other and what swayam said to sharon i totally agree with it anyone could fall for swayam's poker face he is just too smart to be predicted. he has his share of his secrets hidden under his rude statements too which are yet to be disclosed. i'm curious what happened in former time which separated them and tore them apart.
for chapter 21: what could i say other than that you are clever lass. you made the story turn 360 degrees in one go. Sharon lay there in the hospital bed fighting for her life while Swayam sits there on the chair helplessly with his head in his hands regretting what he had done to their almost perfect love story which though experienced ups and down yet managed to witness some amazing moments to cherish. i hope what the doc said doesn't come true because it couldn't be Sharon's last breath but her first breath to an entirely new life with Swayam.

you gotta be updating soon. please😳.
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Posted: 12 years ago
AMAZING UPDATE YR TRULY LOVED IT
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Posted: 12 years ago
So here comes the final part of the FF...

A BIG THANK YOU TO ALL OF YOU WHO LOVED MY FF...

This was my first FF and will always remain special to me...i won two times swaronian of the week because of this FF...

A special mention to all my friends NISH, JUM, SATNAM, HIMANI, SUKU,RUTU DEEPS,AMRITA, PRATIK AND MY LITTLE SIS ANANYA

LOVE YOU ALL GUYZ

Aur JUM aur NISH ka special mention mujse hamesha update mangne ke liye!!

last request guyz..last part pe plz lambe lambe comments dena...aur batana how was the whole FF.

HOPEFULLY ISS FF KE KHATAM HONE KE BAAD BHI SAB ISSE YAAD RAKEHGE!!

ONCE AGAIN A BIG THANK YOU FOR READING THIS FF!! XOXO

Edited by Nehal92 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 22

Swayam: what?? No it can't be doctor.

Doctor: i am sorry swayam, but we can't do any thing. Her body is not responding to the treatment.

It's like she has lost the reason to live.

Swayam : no plz... plz save her she is my life plz doctor... and he broke down crying.

Doctor: I can understand how you feel...maybe u should go meet her.

She has less time.

His each step weighed as heavy as cement block, with shaky hands he pushed opened the door.

There she lay lifeless covered with all the pipes connected to huge machines.

The sight killed him he died every passing second.

He sat on the bed near her, held her hand in his.

Swayam : I am sorry Sharon...please come back ...please...don't give me such harsh punishment...

Please come back to me...i never meant any word of it... i don't hate you shar..i don't hate you...

I never did...i was just angry...you are my life Sharon u mean world to me...

Speak up shar...speak up...plz talk to me...

I promise i will never hurt you again. I will never be angry on you never just come back once Sharon please.

I love you Sharon... i love you...

He kept his forehead on her wrist and cried his heart out continuously saying those 3 magical words.

Flash back

He was all determined to get back his love...for that even he had lied about his engagement to her.

He walked up to his mother to tell and involve her in the plan...

He stopped at the doorway when he heard Sharon speaking to his mom.

Sharon: aunty you don't need to be guilty about it it's all destiny.

Naina: no Beta it was my entire fault...i asked you to break up with swayam.

Just to save our business i had to do such a cruel thing.

Sharon: aunty what about that girl who was suppose to marry swayam... that girl eloped with her boyfriend after meeting with swayam.

Then her dad only agreed to the business deal as his daughter was the one who rejected the marriage proposal.

Sharon : i wonder why did she did that... swayam is not that bad.

Naina: You don't need to do this any more beta...i will go and tell swayam about this. I know you still love him.

Sharon: no aunty..there is no use now..i don't want him to hate you...and moreover swayam loves someone else...

Naina: what??

Sharon: ya he told me he is getting engaged.

Naina: na...he is lying...i know him beta...he still loves you like mad...he stopped living the day you left...

He just engrossed himself in work...but there not even a second he dint miss you...

Without you his life is incomplete...

But one thing Sharon..how did u breakup with him..

Sharon: i purposely made him over hear my conversation with simmi..where i said i don't love him and i am with him just for the money and status.

Naina: oh no!! I have to step in..i have to clear this you both are meant for each other.

Sharon: Yes we are!! But mom i will handle it myself...

I love him and will go tell him right now...

Naina: yes go now...but promise me no one will be my daughter in law except.

Sharon: i will kill any other girl if she tries coming near him...

Naina: wwow!! That's like My bahu!!

Sharon blushing hard hugged naina...she was happy that she will be with him forever.

On the other hand he heard this and felt betrayed by his mom and Sharon.

Swayam: i thought you trusted me Sharon...but how could you do this to us.

He walked away in anger and then all this happened.

PRESENT.

He felt a light hold on his hand...

He quickly jerked up to find her trying hard to open her eyes.

Swayam: shar..open your eyes...c'mon Sharon see i am here..your swayam is here.

She slowly opened her eyes and met his eyes.

Sharon: swa...swayam..

Swayam: yes Sharon (kissing her hand).

Sharon: what are...y..o.u doing here??

Swayam was shocked at her question.

Sharon: you..hate...

He quickly placed his finger on her lips..stopping her from completing the sentence.

Swayam: I LOVE YOU SHARON!!

You are my life Sharon... i don't know anything else i just know i love you and i am incomplete without you.

Sharon: I love you swayam...

He kissed her forehead...marking the beginning of their new life.

One year later

Smriti: i can't believe my daughter is getting married.

Gautham: My little daughter will leave me today.

Sharon: dad mom...i am just going the next house you will meet me every day.

Smriti: You won't understand how it feels.

They had a cute family.

Soon Sharon was bought to the mandap, where swayam was waiting for her. They performed all the rituals and entered the married life.

Later that night:

Swayam entered the room to find Sharon missing.

He turned around to find her standing near the window...wearing a strapless black lace night gown.

Swayam was awestruck.

Sharon: Are you just going to stare at me the whole night.

Swayam: woh..you like this...

Sharon: i wanted to save some of your time ..which you have wasted untying those heavy clothes.

Swayam: haan...

She held his shervani and pulled him on the bed with him on top of her.

He kissed her eyes, her cheeks..and then took control over her lips.

Lights Off

*****************THE END******************************

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update nehal loved it👏
finally u revealed the reason cz of wich swaron broke up😔
i was dyin to know it since the starting of the ff😊
all is wfll that ends well👍🏼
happy dat u didn't killed sharon,n the ff ended on a happy note 😃
but i was expecting more cliffhangers.why did u ended such an awesome ff so soon😭
merko naya swaron ff chahiye,jaldi😈
Hum is ff ko kabhi nahi bhulenge,kitna tadpaya hain tune updates ke liye.. n it was my fvrt swaron ff😔
Thanks for the pm!! 😃
Edited by cuteswayu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am so sad...this awesome FF came to an end...yar nehal...u could have updated after marriage part also...bechare pyar se rehte ...it will remain one of my fav FF on SWARON...i used to stalk this place since my non-member days...i am addicted to this FF...

Coming to the update :

Swayam's pain...the fear of loosing her...the love of his life ...was evident...loved his line:

Please come back to me...i never meant any word of it... i don't hate you shar..i don't hate you...

Finally you revealed the reason behind SWARON break up...sharon sacrificed for swayam's family...and loved her convo with swayam's mom...possessive sharon:

Sharon: i will kill any other girl if she tries coming near him...

finally the confession...

You are my life Sharon... i don't know anything else i just know i love you and i am incomplete without you.

& the first night...naughty sharon...loved her sexy attire ...swayam toh gaya kaam se...

loved her naughty line:

Sharon: i wanted to save some of your time ..which you have wasted untying those heavy clothes.

He kissed her eyes, her cheeks..and then took control over her lips.

Loved the end part...

Loved this update...m sad this is the end...this FF will remain one of my fav FF...i love your writing style...plz start another FF soon...

P.S- Thanx for the special mention...i love ur creations dear..keep writing such awesome stuff...👏👏👏
Edited by dips098 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I read this before getting the PM.😳
But last part It ended too fast Nehal. I mean you could have explained more on how she was saved, she had last few hours to live na?
Anyways so finally Swayam came to know the reason behind all the confusion.
And finally they got married and now will be together here after. What else do we all want
Good job. I loved your FF Nehal, right from the beginning till the end.

PS: One request, please start another awesome FF just like this na.
And update your other FF too😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am really sad this awesome update has come to an end. Have loved this update just like the title suggests i have been addicted to this FF and all the cliffhangers you gave us are going to be missed. To speak of characters in the FF along with SwaRon i loved Simmi. She always have been a true friend and one the angry Swayam made his entry Simmi always came to Sharon's rescue.
The way Swayam fell for Sharon and their cute tiffs in the beginning were always a fun read. The hot updates when Swyaam made Sharon go weak on her knees and blush hard were super awesome. Both their families were real fun. Rey and Kriya as a couple always made a nice impression.
Over all a perfect FF and this update with the start of pain in Swayam and the ray of hope with the slight movement in Sharon was nice. the final confession and wedding superb.

Now start updating the other FF real fast.
Edited by Sudha-SK - 12 years ago

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