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srknaik

@srknaik

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Really good. Can't wait for chapter 5.

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Usma55

@Usma55

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#192

love the fact that Payal stood up infront of her stupid hospital

love that Arnav still loves his khushi

i think khushi should be become really ill and depressed and to help her cope buaji would have to tell arnav about his child

hope anajli doesnt lose the baby

or when they go to the doctor to see if anjali's child is ok then the doctor could congulate arnav and tells him to look after khushi

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Mahi

@Mahi1219

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Fabulous update! It was so touching! Great joB!

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--drama_queen--

@--drama_queen--

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#194

amazing update...

i loved it.

continue soon nd thnx for the PM 🤗

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sargamfriends

@sargamfriends

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#195

first of all well written👏...second Arnav i cant believe it again...again he was unfair to her to be fair to his sister😡...Dadi and Anjali they deserve each other's company only🤢...Payal love her and her character👏...and now a very humble request lol please MAKE ARNAV WORK HARD TO GET KHUSHI BACK😆...and last but not the least...this is a lovely ff...

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kunav

@kunav

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

nice update...thanks for pm!! i want to see more of arnav-khushi!! This dadi really angers me😡 but i really like your work

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rukuswasthika

@rukuswasthika

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#197

i think now arnie is gonna ask for khushi's baby for anji

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

This anjali and dadi are gettibg out of hand.. but glad at least arnav shout at them... loved the update.. don't know what is gonna happen when kushi will come to know about this..

thanks for the pm and continue soon..

take care

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dorindakate

@dorindakate

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#199

Thanks for the pm...

Anjali falling...oh yeah, something else to blame on Khushi...doesn't matter that she's not even there...

Why doesn't Arnav man up and either kick Di and Dadi out of his house so he and his wife can live there...

Or him leave and go live where ever with Khushi?...

Waiting for the next chapter...

Edited by dorindakate - 12 years ago

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Angel13

@Angel13

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#200

Brilliant update
Arnav told the truth to that sheena or whatever
Oh damn that witch got angry but who cares
Arnav still wants khushi
He still thinks about her
What's up with that buddhi dadi and melodrama Annali??? Oh now more drama as she fell
Thanks for pm
Cont soon