~~ Love Ke Side Effects~~(Part-10*Pg-47)

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Adnan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: dostokedost
AWESOME PART 👏 👏 HOPE KASHISH SAYS YES TO HIM AND PLS FIND SOMEONE ELSE FOR TUSHAR PLS AND GIVE NAGAD SOME SENCE TO PROPOSE TO KIRPA MWITH MORE ROMANTIC WAY😆😉 😳NOT ON PHONE 🤢 PLS COOOOOOOOOOOOONTI SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON 😊 😛

Hey..thanks for commenting....i don't mind finding anyone else for Tusshar but he is alwayz after Kashish so he has to no other option then staying away frm her....and...Angad...wud surely find way to propose Kripa in a better way 😆

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Adnan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*
really nice part.... 👏

thanks for ur comments 😊

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Adnan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: KulBin
hey after very long time adi... so nice dat u finally contd... 😊 superb part... 👏 angad-kripa scene was very nice too cute... 😛 in all a gr8 part... 👏 bt seems u didnt got time to proof-read it... 😳 desnt mtr... 😉 gr8 gng.... 👏
will b waiting for next part plz do post it soon... 😊 as R-K gonna meet.... 😉

Hey....Kulbin...thanks alot for ur comment....ur comments are alwayz awaited...anyhow i rarely have tyme for continuing so reading it again is not possible so any mistakes are found then tell me i wud correct them....suggestions are alwayz welcome.....and....surely i wud continue soon....as R-K fans...wud be eagerly waiting......😳

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Adnan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: sun_423
adi me sooo damnn khush you continued.... 😃 adi the part was totally amazing... very very very amazing..main sach keh rahi hoon jab main yeh part pad rahi thi tho all through the part i had a smile spread all over my face... this part seriously made me enjoy very much.... i liked it very much.... i had a bhatisi smile on my face.... the scene between angad & rajeev showed the kind off bond they shared...such a sweet rishtha... then veena ka talking to anjali.....hahaha..mazaa aagaya... then anjali in kavya's room..kavya in towel... kavya ka ghussa....then anjali agreeing to marry kavya... all were too very sweett... & cutee....... 👏 👏
ab rajeev and veena talk.. angad aur kripa ki baat bhi pukki ho hi gayi......& then rajeev veena se keh detha hain ki he loves somebody par woh maanthi nahi.. tho veena says that u talk to her.. ab rajeev joh hain ek aagyakaari bete ki tarah kashish ko call kartha hain....he tells her he will meet her at the parking lot of the hotel...chalo yeh bohat achcha hua... rajeev , kashish milenge.... ab aayega kaahani ka asli mazaa... 😳
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ab please jaldi se continue karna...me will be eagerly waiting for the next part.... 😃

🤗🤗 🤗 🤗 Luved ur comments....Suri.....u extactly...see in ma story..wht i want me reader to see....each emotion...ur decribe it well wht i wrote.....😃 and....ab apnay kaha hai toh jaldi continue toh karna hi hoga na.....😳

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Adnan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#325

NEW ENTRY
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Nastasha Aluwalia (Shewata Salve )

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Hi i m Natasha i m 23 and i m a self made women...i like to be independent....for me ma work is most imp....i m a workholic....i get wht i want no matter wht....and No and Losing these 2 wordz are not in ma dictationary . There is nothing impossible...to do...impossible itself says IMpossible that wht i believe in

Edited by Adildagr8 - 18 years ago

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Adnan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#326

LOVE KE SIDE EFFECTS
(Part-10)

Recap : Kavya and Angad confess there love to Anjali and Kripa.....Rajeev tells Veena that he loves sumone....he wud tell her....if she agrees...he calls Kashish and asks her to meet him...

PARKING LOT
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[Rajeev is waiting for Kashish in parking lot....but Kashish is no where to be seen he calls Kashish ]
Kashish:Hello !!!
Rajeev:kahan hooo.... i m waiting for u...
Kashish:hmmm just a min..
Tusshar:kya howa ?
Kashish:meri frnd ki call hai...signals ki prob hai shyad yahan....mein abhi ati hoon...
Tusshar:tum bahar jaa kar baat karloo...mein tab tak bill pay kar k ata hoon...
Kashish(forced a smile) : OK....[she moves out towardz the parking lot]
Rajeev:tum arahi hoo k mein andar ayooon
Kashish:arahi hoon...na...tum subah tak wait nahi kar saktay thay...aise kya baat thi jo abhi karni thi...
Rajeev:tum ayoogi toh bata doonga...[disconnects ]
[ He sees Kashish cumming towardz..him a smile appears on his face ]
Rajeev:Hii
Kashish:kya baat hai ?
Rajeev:woh Tusshar kahan hai ?
Kashish:usko choro tum bolo kya baat karni hai ?
Rajeev:interestin itni betaabi meri baat sunay k liye...
Kashish:jee nahi....asa kuch nahi hai...
Rajeev:isliye apnay honay walay pati ko chor kar u r with me
Kashish:tumehin yehi sab kehna hai toh mein jaa rahi hoon
Rajeev:tumhein kya suna hai...?
Kashish:Tusshar wud be here any min i m goin
Rajeev:acha rukoo
Kashish:hmm bolo..
Rajeev:mein jaanta hoon meray bar bar kehnay say koi fariq nahi paray ga....par mujay tumsay ek bar suna hai that u don't love me
Kashish:not again
Rajeev:itna toh tum meray liye kar hi sakti hooo mein toh samjh gaya par yeh dil hai k manay ko tayyar nahi aaj bhi isko tumharay dil ki dharkan sunai deti hai...sirf ek bar meri ankkon mein dekh kar bolo k tum mujsay pyar nahi karti...
Kashish:mein asa kuch nahi keha rahi....mein Tusshar say shadi kar rahi hoon
Rajeev:mein yeh nahi poach tum kissay shadi kar rahi hoo kis say nahi....mera simple sa Qs hai u just answer it
Kashish:Rajeev dad nahi manay gay....
Rajeev:na hi tumharay Dad na hi Tusshar na hi koi aur...bas mein aur tum...tum ek bar kahooo k tum meray liye kuch feel nahi karti khabhi tumhein mujay pyar nahi kiya...meri takleef say tumehin fariq nahi parhta...tumhein meri parwa nahi hai...tumhein meray honay ya na honay say koi fariq nahi parhta....humnay Paris mein jitna tyme saath guzara woh mein zindagi mein khabhi nahi bhool payoonga...kya tumnay sab bhula diya...ek bar kahoo mein tumhein palat kar bhi nahi dekhoonga....
[Kashish is all silent...]
Rajeev:Kashish....mujay bus yeh jana tha...k tum mujsay pyar karti hok nahi....aur tumhari khamoshi nay mujay woh jawaab day diya...
Kashish:humaray beech ab koi rishta nahi hosakta....jo tha woh ab nahi
Rajeev:tumnay mana toh kuch tha...aur tumnay kaha ba humaray koi rishta nahi...lekin hai dard ka rishta joo sab rishtoo say muzboot hai.....woh dard jo tumnay mujay diya woh dard jo mujsay door raha kar tumko mila
Kashish:mein tumhein khabhi dukhi nahi karna chahti thi i m sorry....
Rajeev:jinko dukh ka ehass hota hai woh dukh ki waja nahi bantay....
Kashish:theek keha rahay hooo bahut buri hoon mein
Rajeev:haan bahut buri hooo par kya karooon...bahut pyar karta hoon tumsay....phelay pata hota toh na karta
Kashish:Rajeev...kya tum sab bhula kar...
Rajeev:tumhein bhoolna itna asan hota toh kab ka bhula chuka hota
Kashish:NAHI KARTI MEIN TUMSAY PYAR yehi suna chahtay thay.....keha diya....ab jayooo....meri zindagi say chalay....jayooo....please....leave me alone.....
[Just then Tusshar cums out...Kashish sees him n moves towardz him....as she was taking each step...Rajeev cud feel his love.....going 4rm his handz....da pain was visible in his eyes.......Kashish wanted to see back once but she knew if she saw Rajeev she won't b able to control herslef.....Rajeev keeps on standing there...]
Kashish:chalein....
Tusshar:ek sec [ he..comes to Rajeev...and seeing him cummin towardz him Rajeev wipes his tears ]
Tusshar:App ????
Rajeev:Mr.Shergil
Tushar:arghhh ! i forgot ur name again
Rajeev:dats good...mera naam toh apko roz kisi k annkon mein nazar ayega kisi k dil par likha howa milay ga...acha hai apko yaad na hi rahay bahut takleef hogi
Tusshar:matlab ??/
Rajeev:kuch nahi...app ki samjhnay ki baat nahi hai
Tusshar: mein samjhna bhi nahi chahta...
Rajeev:mein samjha bhi nahi raha
Tusshar:fyne toh app yahan
Rajeev:kyun yeh resturant apka hai ?
Tusshar:nahi i mean kisi kaam say aye thay...
Rajeev:haan Kashish say milnay....
Tusshar:wht ???
Rajeev:ofcoure not kisi ka intezaar kar raha tha
Tushar:toh woh aya
Rajeev:nahi....woh khabhi nahi ayega ab...bahut dayer hogayi...
Tusshar(confused):nyce meeting to u again..miltay rahegi ga...
Rajeev:apsay phelay bhi kaha tha meetin u isn't nyce for me toh agay say na hi milay toh acha rahega....[saying Rajeev goes towardz his car ]
Tusshar:tum is Rajeev k saaath kya kar rahi thi....Kashish lagta hai..tum sab bhool gayi hoon......humari shaddi honay wali hai....
Kashish:ohhh plz......tum mujay yeh baar baar yaad dala kar kya sabit karna chatay hoo.....
Tusshar:mujay woh insan passand nahi tum ainda ussay baat nahi karogii....warna
Kashish:warna kya....meri marzi mein jissay baat karoon aur Rajeev say baat kar rahi thi...shaadi nahi kii....[Tusshar get annoyed]
(Rajeev....is sittin on his car and drinking heavily thinkin abt his and Kashish conversation.....)

(SONG AT BACKGROUND)

Tanhaai, tanhaai
Dil ke raaste mein kaisi thokar maine khaayi
Toote khwaab saare, ek maayusi hai chhaayi
Har khushi so gayi, zindagi kho gayi
Tumko jo pyaar kiya maine to sazaa main paayi
Tanhaai, tanhaai, milo hai phaili hui tanhaai - 2

(Khwaab mein dekha tha ek aanchal
Maine apne haathon mein
Ab toote sapnon ke shishe
Chubte hai in aankhon mein) - 2
Kal koi tha yahin, ab koi bhi nahin
Banke naagin jaise hai saanson mein laheraayi
Tanhaai, tanhaai, palkon pe kitne aansu hai laayi - 2

(Kyoon aisi umeed ki maine
Jo aise naakaam hui
Door banaayi thi manzil
To raste mein hi shaam hui) - 2
Ab kahan jaaoon main, kisko samjhaaoon main
Kya maine chaaha tha aur kyoon kismat mein aayi
Tanhaai, tanhaai, jaise andhero ki ho gehraayi
Dil ke raaste mein kaisi thokar maine khaayi
Toote khwaab saare, ek maayusi hai chhaayi
Har khushi so gayi, zindagi kho gayi
Tumko jo pyaar kiya maine to sazaa main paayi
Tanhaai, tanhaai, milo hai phaili hui tanhaai - 2
Tanhaai, tanhaai, tanhaai, tanhaai

(Wen he reaches home...Veena is worried to see him like this...she understand for wud hav happened...she decides not to talk....abt it to Rajeev )

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NEXT DAY
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Gerewal Office
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Employee:May i come Sir !
Rajeev:Yeah
Empolyee:Sir i arranged ur meeting with...Mr.Aluwalia....aaj presentation hai....so u gotta be there...
Rajeev:aaj presetation hai aur tum mujay abhi bata rahay hoo Kavya ko andar bhejooo
Empolyee:Ok Sir...[he leaves and Kayva enter after a whyle]
Rajeev:Kayva yeh Ahuwalia's wala project humein kisi bhi kimat par hasil karna hai....itz the biggest project of the year....aaj tak humnay humaray India k business par itna dhyan nahi diya...so here is a golden oppournity to avail...
Kayva:mainay sab details ready karli hain we are all set for...the presentation...
Rajeev:gr8...then we must leave in half an hour....
Kayva:sure....
[Itz a well decorated conferance hall....all are sitted...waitin for Mr.Aluwalia..he comes and the presatation starts.....all represents there...company...frm Gerewal Kayva..gives the presentation Rajeev is v sure dat they wud get the project but still one presetation is left...itz Miss Natasha Aluwalia]
Kavya:how can she be considerd she is applying for project in her own fathers company
Another guy : she is a indepent women...she owns her own company....Natasha...Enterpries....she is best at her work....
Kavya:interesting....
[She enters the hall room.....all are stunned by her looks....she has a dusky...complexion....she is looking like hai sweet girl at the same tyme a sharp bussiness women ]
P.A[ of Mr Aluwalia ] : Mam u r late
Natasha:i m not i m not bound to waste ma tyme by listenin to others presentations i m just here to give mine...
Kayva(suprised):baat hai bhai...
Natasha:so may i start...
P.A:Sure...
Natasha:so i m not goin to tell wht i can do....i think yahan par jitnay bhi loug bethay hain....yun mein say jo meray rivals hain...they are Gerewals....they are best in this field....but i m not far behind....Gerewals got gr8 men power ma company got latest machinery.....Gerewals...got...good image...i got potiental.....they got experience....i got new ideas....so we aren't less than them.....so itz all abt...deciding whom u r goin to give chance
Kayva:Bro yeh toh seedha humsay panga...
[ Rajeev was just smiling all thru....and busy with his laptop his didn't he didn't even looked up once at Natasha..]
Kavya:yeh project toh gaya....
[ Rajeev stands up he is really loooking dashin for the 1st tyme he looks at Natasha ]
Rajeev:so r u done Miss Aluwalia
Natasha(confused): Yeah
Rajeev: yeh shoppin mall jis area par construct karna hai wahan ki 20 % property is mine wich means that if Miss Aluwalia wud do this project it will cost u more jab ki hum same project less expenditure mein aur same quality mein kar saktay hain...now decision is urs....
[Natasha is impressed by Rajeev's personality....]
P.A:Hum is project ki annoucement...1 hour mein karay gay...tab tak u ppl enjoy urself...lunch is arranged for u
[All of them proceed to the other hall...and sits on table...Kayva..goes to get sumthing for Rajeev and him...Natasha cums there ]
Natasha:excuse me !
Rajeev:excused
Natasha:May i sit here
Rajeev:sure [ he standz and is abt to leave wen she sits ]
Natasha[gritting her teeth] : itna attitude why am i here to talk to him [she stand up ] i wanted to talk to u
Rajeev:me....????
Natasha:i m a big fan of urs....u r a business tycoon....u r the best....but apk baad sab say best mein hoon.....
Rajeev:ahaan
Natasha:it wud be gr8....agr hum dono saaath mil kar kaam karay....like partners...
Rajeev:mein akelay kaam karta hoon i don't need partners...
Natasha:think abt it
Rajeev:i m not interested...
Natasha:we wud rule..this industry...agr hum saath howay toh...
Rajeev:Nah ! i like to rival more than partner....[saying this he leaves ]
Natasha:ajeeb insan hai....[ she is angry and confused at the same tyme at his behaviour ]
[Rajeev get this project and Natasha is disappointed ]
Natasha:Congralutions !!!! Mr. Rajeev
Rajeev:thanks...
Natasha:socha tha yeh dono project hum dono saath karay gay...but yeh project token samjh kar hi lay jayen...in future i wud surely work with u
Rajeev:i surely wait for that day to come Takecare[ he leaves ]
Natasha: u too
Kayva:we are throwing a party...2day u r invited...hope u wud be there....
Natasha:thanks i wud be there
( Natasha is very much impressed with Rajeev....for her it was love at 1st sight.....she is unable to take her mind off him....Rajeev left her all shaken up )

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COFFE CAFE
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Angad:wht yaar...tabsay i m waiting to hear i love you frm u ?
Kripa:mainay bhi toh itna wait kiya tha
Angad:so u taking revenage
Kripa:Nah ! just
Angad:kya just ???
Kripa:tumnay mujay abhi propose hi kab kiya ?
Angad:I love you bola toh aur kya karoon
Kripa : tumhein nahi pata
Angad : nahi....
Kripa: good
Angad: wht do u want shud i get on ma kness
Kripa(giggles) : i don't mind that
Angad(nervous):yahan...sab k samnay....
Kripa:kyun tumhein sab k samnay kehnay mein prob hai
Angad:Nahi...woh...Ok theek hai [ he gets on his kness and holds her hand ] Mujay nahi pata k mein kab say tumsay pyar karnay laga par ab itna jaanta hoon tumharay bina nahi raha...sakta....bahut pyar karta hoon tumsay...apni puri zindagi tumharay saath guzarna chahta hooon....bolo kya dou gi mera saaath rahoogi....meri ban kar.....I LOVE YOU Kripa....
Kripa: i love you too.....[ they both hug ]
(SONG AT BACKGROUND)

tere aane pe gungunane pe yun khul ke phir muskurane pe I am in Love
hooo
hmmm tere rooth ke manane pe na jane kis bahane pe
I'm in love
sadiyon se maine kiya intezaar
hayo hayo rabba i'm in love hayo hayo rabba i'm in love

inkaar se ikraar se na jane kis takraar se I'm in love
hmmmm
woh bhul se anjaane se kiya aaj se ya zamane se I'm in love
sadiyon se maine kiya intezaar
hayo hayo rabba I'm in love hayo hayo rabba I'm in love

you are my dream my love my life
I just wanna spend my life with you
you are the one that makes me smile
I just wanna spend my life with you

hoo tum joh ab aaye ho ankhon mein chaye ho
main toh jagoongi ab raat bhi aa
in fizaon mein hoon teri baahoon mein hoon
mere hone ka kar le yakeen
woh din mein ya raat mein aur aaise hi woh baat mein I'm in love
hooo
woh dhoop mein barsaat mein na jaane kis mulaqat mein I'm in love
sadiyon se maine kiya intezaar
hayo hayo rabba i'm in love hayo hayo rabba i'm in love

you are my dream my love my life
I just wanna spend my life with you
you are da one dat makes me smile
I just wana spend my life with you

hoo teri aankhon ka rang aasmano ka rang badal baante reh reh de mujhe
taaron mein kheli hai chaand ki saheli hai badal banke chupa loon tujhe

Tere aane pe gungunane pe yun khul ke phir muskurane pe I'm in love
hooo
hmmm tere rooth ke manane pe na jane kis bahane pe
I'm in love
sadiyon se maine kiya intezaar
hayo hayo rabba i'm in love hayo hayo rabba i'm in love

inkaar se ikraar se na jane kis takraar se I'm in love
hmmmm
woh bhul se anjaane se kiya aaj se ya zamane se I'm in love
sadiyon se maine kiya intezaar
hayo hayo rabba i'm in love i'm in love i'm in love
i'm in love i'm in love i'm in love

you are my dream my love my life
I just wana spend my life with you
my life with...........you

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PARTY TYME
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Itz a gr8 party.....everyone is very happy......this party is for Angad-Kripa and Kayva-Anjali engagement .
Rajeeev is looking really handsome in black suitKashish and...Tusshar are also there at a syde...talkin and Rajeev is constantly lookin at Kashish...and drinkin........

(SONG AT DA BACKGROUND )

Kashish
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Aye dil, dil ki duniya mein
Aisa haal bhi hota hai
Baahar koi hansta hai
Andar koi rota hai
Aye dil, koi pehchaana nahin
Kisi ne yeh maana nahin
Kisi ne yeh jaana nahin
Kisi ko bataana nahin
Dard chhupa hai kahan
Aye dil, dil ki duniya mein
Aisa haal bhi hota hai
Baahar koi hansta hai
Andar koi rota hai

Rajeev
******
Tune mujhse vafaa nahin ki
Tujhko kaise vafaa milegi
Tune mujhko dard diya hai
Tujhko kaise davaa milegi

Kashish
*****
Seene mein uthte hai armaan aise
Dariya mein aate hai toofan jaise
Kabhi kabhi khud hi maajhi
Kashti ko dubota hai
Aye dil, dil ki duniya mein
Aisa haal bhi hota hai
Baahar koi hansta hai
Andar koi rota hai

Rajeev
******
Kaante chunkar tera daaman
Phoolon se main bhar jaaoonga
Isse badi sazaa kya hogi
Maaf tujhe main kar jaaoonga

Kashish
******
Hogi kisi ko pehchaan kaise
Pyaar mein hote hain qurbaan kaise
Humko yeh maaloom na tha
Pyaar bhi ek samjhauta hai
Aye dil, dil ki duniya mein
Aisa haal bhi hota hai
Baahar koi hansta hai
Andar koi rota hai
Aye dil, koi pehchaana nahin
Kisi ne yeh maana nahin
Kisi ne yeh jaana nahin
Kisi ko bataana nahin
Dard chhupa hai kahan

Cg: May i have ur attention please....mein aaj ek bahut imp annoucement karnay jaa raha hoon.....mein apnay beeton ki shadi karnay ka fasla karliya hai i wud like to call them on stage....Angad-Kripa and Kayva-Anjali..please give them a big hand
[ They all come on the stage...and exchange rings....
All are called at dance stage Angad and Kripa and Kavya and Anjali start the dance...love is in the air.....]
Tusshar:Lets dance
Kashish:nahi mera man nahi hai
Tusshar:but mera toh hai...come on [he almost drags Kashish to the dance floor..]
They start dancing...itz a very close dance....and Kashish is very uncomfortable....
(SONG AT BACKGROUND)

Sholon si sholon si
tere ankhon ki yeh roshni
kiske liye hai kiske liye hai
chandni chandni, tere chere ki yeh chandni
kiske liye hai kiske liye hai
tera muskurana nazar yun jhukana
tera muskurana nazar yun jhukana
mere liye hai bas mere liye hai

sholon si sholon si
tere ankhon ki yeh roshni
kiske liye hai kiske liye hai
chandni chandni tere chere ki yeh chandini
kiske liye hai kiske liye hai

Rajeev leaves the party...he is goin out...wen he hits sumone and falls on her....itz Natasha...
Rajeev:Sorry [ he gets up ]
Natasha:tumhein dekhta nahi hai [widout lookin at the person wen she looks it Rajeev ] Itz Okay !
Rajeev :Oh Hi...Miss...Shergil
Natasha:Hi Mr.Gerewal...sorry i m late
Rajeev:not really.....and u can call me Rajeev
Natasha:Hmmm ok...u shud call me Natasha then deal
Rajeev(smiles): deal....
Natasha:so may we go in
Rajeev:sure...
Natasha:so apnay partnership k baray mein kya socha
Rajeev:kuch nahi socha abhi toh kuch aur soch raha hoon
Natasha:like ???
Rajeev:u r really looking pretty....yeh kahoon k na kahoon
Natasha(smiles):ab toh keha diya....anyhow thanks
Rajeev:we can be partners...
Natasha(shocked):Gr8....u r not dat bad
Rajeev:i didn't get u
Natasha:i mean ur attitude
Rajeev(smiles):asa hi hoon mein
Natasha:i like u
Rajeev:every SHE likes me...
Natasha: Ahan...liked ur confidence too..
Rajeev:May i dance wid u
Natasha(surprised):Sure
[ Rajeev hold her hand and they both go on dance floor Kashish is noticing Rajeev wid Natasha...and she is feeling jealoused...]

(SONG AT BACKGROUND)
(Tinka Tinka jara jara
hai roshni se jaise bhara) - 2
Har dil main armaan hote to hai - 2
bas koi samjhe jara) - 2

(Dil pe ek naya sa nasha cha gaya
kho raha tha jo khwaab vo laut aa gaya) - 2
(Yeh jo ehsaas hai jo karaar hai
kya issi ka hi naam pyaar hai) - 2
pootche dil thumke jara
Tinka Tinka jara jara
hai roshni se jaise bhara
Har dil main armaan hote to hai - 2
bas koi samjhe jara
Tinka Tinka Tinka Tinka

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Here the part endz

Commin up : Rajeev prosping...Natasha....Kashish marrying...Tusshar....and....much more...

This part is dedicated toh MEHREEN

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Adil

Edited by Adildagr8 - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago

#327

gr88 part adil !! 👏 loved it !! but me want to see S-K together.. 😛 😛 😛but i like natasha and rajeev's jodi too....but not for long... 😆 .....btw the was parft fantastic juzz like u !!!👏

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Posted: 18 years ago

#328

adi dekh tune story post kar di aur main aagayi apne comments lekar....adi yeh part was a bit sad but then this part was surely needed to take the story forward.... the first scene jab rajeev kashish ko dhamkatha hain asking her ki whether she is coming out or should he come in... kashish ka rajeev par irritate hona... she telling him ki tum kya kal subah thak wait nahi kar sakhthe... phir rajeev ka usse aur bhi iritate karne ko kehna ki tum apne hone wale pati ko chod ke mere pass ho.. phir rajeev ka kashish se poochna ki u don't love me.. kashish ki majboori..uski bebasi... rajeev ka confident attitude... woh jaantha hain ki kashish sirf usse pyaar karthi hain.. phir he telling her not to think about anybody else but just their lives unka pyaar... phir yeh kashish madam ka kehna ki she does not love him.. rajeev ke dil ka tootna.. rajeev ke aasoo... phir correct time par us khwaab mein haddi tushaar ka aadhamak na.... kashish going away from rajeev.. rajeev ko ehsaas hona ki uski zindagi usse durr jaa rahi hain.. kashish ka bhi dukhi hona par she not turning back , even though she wants too... kashish ki takleef.. phir tushaar ka rajeev ke pass jaana.. rajeev ka usse jawaab dena.... rajeev ka tushaar se kehna mera naam toh apko roz kisi k annkon mein nazar ayega kisi k dil par likha howa milay ga...acha hai apko yaad na hi rahay bahut takleef hogi... hye..hye...super coollll.. kya baat boli hain rajeev ne.... phir rajeev ka usse kehna ki hum phir na mile tho ho achcha hain.. tushaar ka irritation... he taunting kashish sarcastically.. kashish ka usse mooh thod jawaab dena... tushaar ko ghussa aana uski bisti hona.. veryyyyyyyy nicee..... ab dusari taraf rajeev ki tadap... uske aasoo....he is drinking... i feel bad at his state.. well yahaan thak ke scene mein pehle mujhe hasi aayi thi way rajeev was irritating kashish.. then i felt bad for both of them... phir tushaar ko joh jawaab mile rajeev aur kashish se mazaa aagaya... then veena seeing rajeev's condition & understanding...... very nice....in all a perfect scene.. with all the masala mixed in proper proportions.. na kum na zyada... toooooooooooooooooooo goodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
keep up the good work going......
😕 ab coming to the way angad proposed to kripa... this scene was really very cute.. it was indeed very sweet... angad going down on his kness & telling his feelings for kripa... very very very very very sweetttttttttttttttttttt......... liked it very much........ 😳 rajeev & kavya have gone for a project presentation...aur wahaan entry hothi hain natasha kii.. she is very out-spoken , independent & has loads of attitude.....then rajeev gets the project.. natasha tries to talk to him but rajeev is very cold to her... well good going rajeev...aur yeh kya natasha has fallen in love with rajeev.. yeh tho achcha nahi hua.. pehle hi kya rajeev , kashish ki zindagi mein kum pareshaaniyaan thi ki ab yeh natasha aagayi...
tho ab angad-kripa , anjali-kavya ki sagayi hain... and rajeev is there standing staring at kashish who is with tushaar..then this tushaar forces kashish to dance with him.. mujhe tushaar pe bada ghussa aa raha hain.. kis kisam ka insaan hain woh... uff..jab kashish dance nahi karna chahthi tho uspe apne interest touptha hain & takes her to the dance floor... me getting very ghussa on him..... 😡 ab atlast rajeev ke sabr ka baaan toot jaatha hain & he starts walking out.. aur woh natasha se takra jaatha hain... now just to make kashish jealous rajeev gets natasha to the dance floor & dances with her.. & rajeev ki yeh chaal worked kashish madam ko jalan hone lagi hain... yeh rajeev ke dimaak ki tho main dhaat dethi hoon..... uska dimaak aise cheezo mein bada taiz hain... his plan is working.. & this is very coolll news for rajeev kashish ka rishtha.... simply marvelous , fantastic....
tho next part mein rajeev proposing natasha... & tushaar , kashish ki shaddi... intresting....very intresting... in baato par main yeh kehna chahoongi ki joh kuch bhi hotha hain us mein kuch na kuch achcha zaroor chupa hotha hain.... ab is shaddi , proposal sab mein bhi zaroor koi achchayi hogi....this is what i think.... tum kya sochthe ho adi ????? 😉 😉 ab please continue soon..me very eager , curious , anxious to read the next part..... 😃

Edited by sun_423 - 18 years ago

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Adnan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: lklk
gr88 part adil !! 👏 loved it !! but me want to see S-K together.. 😛 😛 😛but i like natasha and rajeev's jodi too....but not for long... 😆 .....btw the was parft fantastic juzz like u !!!👏

Hey...Surbhi...yeh meri thread par apka ana...kaisay howa....glad to see ur comment....yaar..missed u loadz....and yeah i like Natasha and Rajeev jodi...but R-K ko abhi thori aur judai bardhast karni hogi....😉 milan abhi aadha adhoora hai 😆

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Adnan

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Posted: 18 years ago

#330

Originally posted by: sun_423
adi dekh tune story post kar di aur main aagayi apne comments lekar....adi yeh part was a bit sad but then this part was surely needed to take the story forward.... the first scene jab rajeev kashish ko dhamkatha hain asking her ki whether she is coming out or should he come in... kashish ka rajeev par irritate hona... she telling him ki tum kya kal subah thak wait nahi kar sakhthe... phir rajeev ka usse aur bhi iritate karne ko kehna ki tum apne hone wale pati ko chod ke mere pass ho.. phir rajeev ka kashish se poochna ki u don't love me.. kashish ki majboori..uski bebasi... rajeev ka confident attitude... woh jaantha hain ki kashish sirf usse pyaar karthi hain.. phir he telling her not to think about anybody else but just their lives unka pyaar... phir yeh kashish madam ka kehna ki she does not love him.. rajeev ke dil ka tootna.. rajeev ke aasoo... phir correct time par us khwaab mein haddi tushaar ka aadhamak na.... kashish going away from rajeev.. rajeev ko ehsaas hona ki uski zindagi usse durr jaa rahi hain.. kashish ka bhi dukhi hona par she not turning back , even though she wants too... kashish ki takleef.. phir tushaar ka rajeev ke pass jaana.. rajeev ka usse jawaab dena.... rajeev ka tushaar se kehna mera naam toh apko roz kisi k annkon mein nazar ayega kisi k dil par likha howa milay ga...acha hai apko yaad na hi rahay bahut takleef hogi... hye..hye...super coollll.. kya baat boli hain rajeev ne.... phir rajeev ka usse kehna ki hum phir na mile tho ho achcha hain.. tushaar ka irritation... he taunting kashish sarcastically.. kashish ka usse mooh thod jawaab dena... tushaar ko ghussa aana uski bisti hona.. veryyyyyyyy nicee..... ab dusari taraf rajeev ki tadap... uske aasoo....he is drinking... i feel bad at his state.. well yahaan thak ke scene mein pehle mujhe hasi aayi thi way rajeev was irritating kashish.. then i felt bad for both of them... phir tushaar ko joh jawaab mile rajeev aur kashish se mazaa aagaya... then veena seeing rajeev's condition & understanding...... very nice....in all a perfect scene.. with all the masala mixed in proper proportions.. na kum na zyada... toooooooooooooooooooo goodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
keep up the good work going......
😕 ab coming to the way angad proposed to kripa... this scene was really very cute.. it was indeed very sweet... angad going down on his kness & telling his feelings for kripa... very very very very very sweetttttttttttttttttttt......... liked it very much........ 😳 rajeev & kavya have gone for a project presentation...aur wahaan entry hothi hain natasha kii.. she is very out-spoken , independent & has loads of attitude.....then rajeev gets the project.. natasha tries to talk to him but rajeev is very cold to her... well good going rajeev...aur yeh kya natasha has fallen in love with rajeev.. yeh tho achcha nahi hua.. pehle hi kya rajeev , kashish ki zindagi mein kum pareshaaniyaan thi ki ab yeh natasha aagayi...
tho ab angad-kripa , anjali-kavya ki sagayi hain... and rajeev is there standing staring at kashish who is with tushaar..then this tushaar forces kashish to dance with him.. mujhe tushaar pe bada ghussa aa raha hain.. kis kisam ka insaan hain woh... uff..jab kashish dance nahi karna chahthi tho uspe apne interest touptha hain & takes her to the dance floor... me getting very ghussa on him..... 😡 ab atlast rajeev ke sabr ka baaan toot jaatha hain & he starts walking out.. aur woh natasha se takra jaatha hain... now just to make kashish jealous rajeev gets natasha to the dance floor & dances with her.. & rajeev ki yeh chaal worked kashish madam ko jalan hone lagi hain... yeh rajeev ke dimaak ki tho main dhaat dethi hoon..... uska dimaak aise cheezo mein bada taiz hain... his plan is working.. & this is very coolll news for rajeev kashish ka rishtha.... simply marvelous , fantastic....
tho next part mein rajeev proposing natasha... & tushaar , kashish ki shaddi... intresting....very intresting... in baato par main yeh kehna chahoongi ki joh kuch bhi hotha hain us mein kuch na kuch achcha zaroor chupa hotha hain.... ab is shaddi , proposal sab mein bhi zaroor koi achchayi hogi....this is what i think.... tum kya sochthe ho adi ????? 😉 😉 ab please continue soon..me very eager , curious , anxious to read the next part..... 😃

No thanks.....Suri...ur comments are just too...goood...aur...Rajeev nay jo bhi kaha....woh toh kool hona coz he is super kool anyhow wud try to continue soon 😳