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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
Wow. .
Superb update. . . .
Di,do pm me wen update the nxt part. . . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
one mre nw..??
bt seriously luved d strt...update soon..!! 😊
an last mein rey ka dialouge...!!
waiting eagerly 4 d next part..!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
lolzz . . . Ek aur story 🤪
par darr kyun rahi hai . . . . Teri stories padhne ke liye to hum vaise hi bekrar rehte hai 😉
but confusion sirf yahi rehta hai ki agla part kiska demand karein 😛
whoa . . . . Seems like u are watching 'agent vinod' & 'ek tha tiger' types . . . . Tabhi to agent type story 😉
wid the flavour of superhot dance & dress
apna naam itna zyada pasand hai wildcat 😃
I guess the man entered atlast have killed the other man & sana . . . . . . But not sure 😳
inki starting aisi hui . . . Kisi ka murder kar ke
fir to story puri wild hogi na 😈
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
Ek aur SS 😲...
Deetha g apko itne sare ideas kahan se ate hain ...
Aur ap jo bhi likhti ho woh Awesome hota hai 😉...
Yeh SS bhi Superb hai 👏...
Kya attitude hai "Miss. Wildcat" ka 😎...
I think yeh KR SS hai 😳...
Plz continue soon...
N thanks for the pm 😊.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
awesome concept..
loved it...
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
One more deetha... U r serious... I really wanna ask frm where do u get such ideas...actualy grt ideas... Loved d update nd plzz pm me whn u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
qsn: who is Mr.Honey???

ans:

when kriya joined...she went on enquiry abt the man who was killing persons ...so in her enquiry she met a girl who claimed she saw him and he spoke to her...

k: tumne dekha????

g: haan toh...

k: then come with me explain his features and help us making his sketch...

(girl is of 16 yrs)

g: arey mujhe utna yaad nahi ki mai sktch keliye keh paun...

k: uch bhi ho bolo...

she took her to the office...
but the girl was not even a inch was being able to tell it...

g: mujhe wo sab nahi pata...but wo dikhne mei bohut cute tha...aur handsome bhi...aur woh bhaag raha tha aur mujhe dhakka diya...even though sab use chase kar rahe hai he came back lifted me up said sorry and ran away...he is sooo sweet..just lyk honey!!!!!

she said dreaming...

so kriya use mention karne keliye use honey bulati hai...and mostly with each part his name would be changed



kriya's hair style...


http://www.newsofandhra.com/wp-content/gallery/ileana-devudu-chesina-manushulu-hot-photos_1/ileana-devudu-chesina-manushulu-hot-photos-1.jpg



bikes...kiska hai baad mei bolungi bas dekhlo..

http://t3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQyqDjB4-i9IPhKkbAxYLtTuSUy6DiqfCRPNCZSEC37b0gJX9pDJg

http://www.motorbeam.com/wp-content/uploads/Hero_Honda_Karizma_ZMR_Side1.jpg




part -2


"WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON IN THE CITY???? aap ko sharam nahi aati aise sar jhuka baitne keliye..."the CBI head commissoner shouted...

it was a meeting in the conference .he was shouting at his top voice...all were just looking down...

"dekhiye...hum koi mamuli police nahi hai aur naahi ye ek normal choti city hai and most importntly its not a easy case...aur uss aadmi ki death hoke 5 din hogaye...she said lost her faithful assistant too... " he was cut

officer: sir aapko use bhejna nahi chahiye tha...hum me se kisiko bhejna chahiye tha...u know ek ladki aur...

com: ohh please...do u even know that she is the topper of her batch...and according to the records Tiger
ke baad performance list mei usi ki naam aati hai...that means aap sab se jyaada...she is new and a girl isiliye use kam mat samajna...she cat blow ur skull out of ur head...

waise...Tiger kaha hai??? he is not yet arrived...


"aapne itni laad jo diya use toh kyun aayega"someone comented...the com glared at them and they shut up...they heard the foot steps...


a handsome man in his well fitted uniform ...for sure a girl would just wanna throw herself at him


" REYAANSH SINGHANIA reporting sir!!!!!!"he said saluting...


all gave a look of "aagaya doosra...ab tak ek ladki ki suno ab iski dekho" mostly all envied him as he was too young but at higher position...


"good morning my tiger."the com said proudly...


he gave one of his mesmerising smile while his hands at back and stood perfectly with respect towards the officer clearly visibly through his position and looking directly into the com's eyes indicating his character...never to fear...


"hmm...kaash aapki spine ka koi problem na hota toh ye case mei aap unke saath kaam karte..."


"kiske saath sir.??"he asked...


"oh...fish..maine tumhe kaise nahi bataya...kk officers u can go now...i wanna talk to him..."the com announced...


all went out leaving the two...


"hmm toh tiger mai KRIA MOHAN (:P) ki baat kar raha hun...wo jo case thi na dark man ka...wahi case solve karne...aapko bolni hi bhool gaya"he said...


"kria mohan????!!!!!! ahh the one who topped 3 yrs back over the male trainees too??? "rey asked...


"yeah the same...u know her?????"he asked.


"no sir i just heard abt her...it would be nice if i can meet her...i wanna appreciate her directly..."rey said...


"y not...when i told her that u were abt to take this case first she was excited she said she always admired u and ur skills...she too wanted to see u...and bad luck she didnt see u..."he said...


"haha...no probs sir .aap kyun dukhi ho rahe ho??? waise i m sad that i cant take on this case ...sir please i wanna take over this...if wanted we would work together..."he said


"no tiger...u should take rest...rinni warned u remember????"he said


(ps: rinni is a doc for the cbi...now treating rey..)


rey: sir its just a spine problem not a big deal i cant sit quite seeing these all around me...


com: tiger..i know ur too sincere infact love ur work...but plzz ...its my order...waise bhi u are gathering the info ri8???


rey: oh yeah...he was
disappointed'''.yes sir im'..waise sir'..i have some info'.

Com: kya?????

Rey: according to my sources aaj sham ko cannaught place ke paas ek murder hone wala hai'..i mean wo material transfer and murder at a tym shayad'..better I will go to help her sir''

Com: shut up rey'..we dnt want to loose a officer forever like u'..do u remember what rinni said'..

"ise yaad kyun hoga sir???"both turned back'

"rinni???"both said'

Rinni: (at rey) tu baat mat kar'..(at com) hey dad kal subah dekha aapko maine'

She hugged him'.after a short hug she turned around'.

Rinni: rey I said not to work ri8??? Karna hai toh karo par yaad rakho if u work nw after 2-3 yrs u can never work''.khud ki help bhi nahi kar payega'..bed pe hi rehna padega rest of life so now shut up'..

Rey: whatever he rolled his eyes''

Rinni: kk dad mai iske saath luch keliye jaake ni8 ko aapko miloongi'.seedha lunch ke baad iski ghar jaungi''

The com nodded and saw the two besties walking away scolding and fighting with each other''..soon he took his phone and called''.

Com: kria????/

K: yes sir???

Com: sources ki info hai ki''''

He said her'..she was now on action'no one till now escaped from her chase'.but he did'.she was hell angry'she is one type of a stubborn girl'.if some one dnt spit the answer straight then he is a dead cockroach under her heel''.she was a girl with spark in her eyes'..strength in muscles'attitude all over the body and a doll dipped in sincerity and dedication ''never cares anyone'except the com who was himself a very pure and good officer''


she wore her actual usual work dress...she never wore a uniform...if the seniors who envied her pointed she used to cut answer...


"mujhe jo pasand aur comfi mai wahi pehnoongi...jo uniform mei comfi feel nahi karoongi aur jo meri kaam ko effect kare i wont wear it...aapko meri kaam se matlab ri8???????"she used to answer...


as she was a perfectionist the higher officers never had any objection...


im giving kriya's dress...just imagine her dress...it was her uniform always when she works..


scroll down for her top...u will find it in shravani's i mean poppy's cmnt


and a leather jacket...only black jacket..on top of this...

and a black leather skin tight pant ans the same shoes as in 1st part...and black leather gloves for hands...(see 1st part for pics...)



it was evening...


she went to the office to greet the com...he spoke with her ...then finally as tym was abt to near she started of...she was supposed to be taken till her destination by karthik...her assistant...but he was late as always...she cursed herself for giving her bike for servicing the same morning ...she waited for im impatiently .. she was fuming...no doubt karthik is gonna be dead...


it was planned that she would reach her destination and then her team which was alloted to her would join and they would lead to the CP ...she was waiting and cluthing her revolver ready to take and shoot karthik as soon as he would reach...and to her surprise a black bike stopped exactly before her with a screech...


biker: lift??????


kria ri8 now wanted to reach the meeting spot so she nodded and got on his bike...he was totally in black too...black jacket ,black bike. black helmet...on the way he looked into the mirror...her hair was blowing she left it open ...


"wow "was the only word he could think..she directed him and finally got down...on the way she got a call...she switched on her blue tooth...


k: hello????


ka: hello mam its me karthik...aap kaha ho?? mai pohunch gaya...

k: u ba*****d tym sense nahi hai kya???????

ohh then u know hindi?????? aww my dear wildcat...

ka: sorry mam ab aap kaha ho??/

k: better reach the place 1 in 5 mins...bloody fool...

ka: so...sorry mam...

k: saale bluetooth use karte waqt bikeride nahi karsakta kya??/ start the bike now dammit and reach there fast...

wow!!!!!!! grt atti...y know...after all she is my wildcat...and yeah should say dear u have a sweet voice

ka: s.sorry mam...

k: be there on tym or else ur encountered...

bechara 😆

ka: kk mam...🤢

she ended the call...

finally he dropped her and gave her a flying kiss .she glared at him and walked towards a corner...

he just turned his bike and stood there raising the bike...he looked back..

5 days...i missed seeing u wildcat

as soon as she reached the corner she got a call...he was looking at her as smile+smirk formed on his face...

soon she turned to him in shock...he smirked getting that she got to knew he was her Mr.Honey...she glared at him...he raised more...and then itself karthik stopped before her ...got down and removed his helmet quickly to appolizise...the team was late too...she just snatched the helmet pushed him and got on his red bike ...karthik was shocked...in his one blink tym the chase started...he was left no where,...he stood waiting for his team...

the black and red were gng on the same track...beside each other...looking at each other...she was glaring and he was smiling at her...he looked at her...her waist was clearly visible...

oh my f******g go...she id damn sexy!!!!

they were on their way when he took a sharp cut...she too followed but he took min of two -3 quick cuts that she missed track ...

s**t subah ek baar poora place ghoomna chahiye tha...i dnt know shortcuts...

but she was not in those who would accept loosing...

she quickly drove to the CP...she was sure he would complete his work...she was at a long distance but could see a man with a bag standing far at her end of sight she was sure he is the victim...she raced fast to him but when she was 10 feet away HE entered throught the shortcut sntched the bag and soon passed a bullet into his head with his another free hand...

f**k

she pulled her revolver from her shoe and shot at him...as if he was watching her he bent down ...the bullet passed over him...if he would be secs late he would be shot right at his cenral nervous system...he looked back and gave a flying kiss to her and took a sharp turn and once again left her in missing track ...she came to a halt...

she removed her helmet and moved her head making her hair flow from one side to another...

k: damn!!!!!!!!! she punched the petrol tank...

she was damn fuming now...never eve anyone missed her shot...she is a specialist in encounters...

k: ur gonna pay for this Mr. Ninja...

she said...and looked straight and hot a bullet into the road ...

k: u have challanged me now...i m not gonna leave u...

she pulled of and went back to the office while crowd surrounded around the body...she didnt give a damn abt the dead soul...

"mai bhi wahi toh chahta hun ...hmmm...maza aagaya...my dear wildcat...now its more intresting..."he said rubbing his hand on his chest looking at her back which in secs dissappeared...


kaisa hai??????????/

nice???????

kk kaisa bhi ho just review and let me know...

and if any doubts aske me...

haha another note...

the title is gonna be changed ...

yeah guessed ri8...

Miss .Wildcat and Mr.Ninja (name of the bike he used)

so plzz cmnt and lyk...



precap:
haha...new name...😆

love u all/...

deetha(wildcat😉)

Edited by deetha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
]OMG Di...😲

Yeh kya tha????

Apne tho poora ka poora hila hi dala...

Humne Jo aassume Kia tha... Waisa kuch bhi nai hua...

Not fair Di...

Cumin 2 d update...

Only 3 words...

M I N D - B L A S T I N G and damn C O N F U S I N G . . . ! ! !

Hayeee...

Rey ka intro...

Me toh totally LATTU ho gai...!!!

Hamesha ki tarah...

But who d hell is dis NINJA nw???

Arh!!!😡

Kit na suspense rakhte ho Di aap...

Kit na tadpaoge Hume haan???

Hw bad Di...

And den kriya's discription...

Hw HAAWWWTTT!!!

Lolzzz...

Bechari...

Kaus rahi hogi khudko...

N d karthik Walla part...

Roflmao...

Hehe... Can't stop laughing on dat poor soul...

Please update soon Di...

Pleaseee...
Edited by Born2Dance - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
btden ki tu kab unres karegi... 😛
Vaish24 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
have a feeling..

black wali kriy ki and red rey ki..

hairstyle mast hai...

goes with the character... and mereko kriy pe aisi hi hairstyle pasand hai

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