KR OS : Actual Blind Date

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Puja

@puja_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Awesome OS!!!
Loved it...
Beautifully potrayed rey's eagerness n d way he was guessing kria's actions...
Both were blind...muje to last mai pta chala...
N u included shakti also in it...dats gr8...
Very well written!!!

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Asha

@Zehnaseeb.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

umm, so another brilliant writing piece from u.. hats off👏

i guessed that Rey was blind, but Kriya would be blind also, was not expected.

n it's a request, never, ever doubt on ur writing skill..

p.s. when r u updating ur FF??

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Snigdha

@Arsha1994

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Awesum
vry well ritten
diffrnt nd unique
keep ritin mor

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21Neha21

@21Neha21

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

loved it..

earlier i thought that only rey is blind but kria's blindness i got to knw in d end..

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annie mathias

@anniemathiaskr

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

it was awesome loved it
it was amazing

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

awesome os n i did not realise they were blind until the end

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Awesome os amy...

I recognize at the end...

Loved ur writing and u had beautifully protrayed it...

Rey was sensing her... That was best part..

Keep writing

it is pleasure to read anything which is written by u...

Thnx for pm