KR OS : Actual Blind Date

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Yamna

@..-Chabhilal-..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

This is the most sweetest OS I've read
I knew rey was blind but kriya iswell... U made me emotional
It was beautiful
Thnx 4 da pm

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Misha

@Born2Dance

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

u really r a fab writer di...

trust me u r splendid in giving suspenses...

seriously...

loved d os 2 d core...

🤗

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Sheetal Rajput

@sheetal_arsha

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Loved it!

I guessed right in the middle that Rey was blind..

But I came to know that Kriya was blind just 2 lines above where you mentioned..!

Loved it to the core!

A very different OS

Your writing skills are just perfect..!

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chetna

@crazysky

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

it awesome
n beautiful
i loved it

well i first doubted wen u wrote
I waited if someone would sit in front of her .. but didn't hear any other chair being pulled and also she didn't talk to anyone ..unusual
as wenever rey sees kria in any of the ff or os then all mostly described her beauty specially eyes...but u didnt mentioned ...n i guessed it rey was blind n ur topis of ur os helped me a lot...

n its not that u failed to write as readers guessed but i loved ur creativity to write such os...
loved it

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Aashi

@aashi_arsha

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

A cute little OS !

I likd it vry much !

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Awww . . . Dat was light & amazing 😃
when rey was sensing her actions . . . . I was thinking that why he's not looking at her . . . Is he blind? 🤔
but kriya ke bare me,, I really had no idea . . . . . As dance seekhne me prob hoti hogi na aise 😳
their convo was so cute . . . . . & so as both of them
I thought kriya would be rude as she could think he's a stranger & flirting . . . . 😕
but he was very polite & complimented her wid heart 🤗
lolzz . . . Shakti mohan 🤣
awww . . . He wanted to feel her soft hands & most importantly wanted to knw her eyes colour 👏
thanx to ajay who worked as an intermediate . . . . . Both are same . . . . Thats why they must have felt connection of hearts

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Jeeya_Angel

@Jeeya_Angel

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Another lovely OS from you Amy. I really enjoyed reading your work. Coming to this one, i came to know about Rey blindness when he said

'She must have paid the bill .. because I could hear her take her purse .. remove something and then keep it on the table ..'

As for kria it was in the end.

Nice story

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@Black_Stone

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Amazing OS

luvd it

about ur ques i came to noe dat rey was blind wen kriya left nd u he said he was blind nd kriya at the ending wen she was wearing sunglasses nd den wen she asked ques i became sure

it was then i knew bth were blind until then i thought they were normal