Th#1 ArHi SS: Destroyed*AWARDED*

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smarty94

@smarty94

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#301

res.

*EDIT*

just found this frm ur pm, once again thank u so much fr the pm😃

*gulp* itna dark although u r writing it fr the first time, u look lyk a professional writing *THIS* stuff

poOr KHUSHI😭 i feel bad fr her, all her dreams have been crushed and i have a feeling ARNAV will be regretting it HEAVILY once the truth is out in the open😕

take care and update soOn😊

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huddy

@huddy

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#302

Hey...I love this piece of work, I think it is awesome...you are a really good writer, till date this is the most intriguing and best SS I have read, I absolutely love it sooo much...I hardly respond to posts but reading this wonderful SS I had to convey that you are very talented writer and would like to see more stories like this...please please do continue this magnificent piece of work and make it a long one 😉 ...Thank you and really looking forward to read the next chapter...much love x

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#303

Why would we hate you?!!! this was fantastic!!! but...ya know...dark...thanks for the PM!!

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Varisha sheikh

@vari3241

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#304

Nobody can hate u ... Coz u give us amazing stories 😊 loved fire with fire ending 😊 n looking forward to destroyed 😊

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#305

it's an interesting premise... wouldn't mind giving this different offering by you a read as I like your writing style, though am not a fan of dark stories!

can understand arnav's desire to avenge his sister but hope he'll destroy shyam too rather han just focusing on khushi... does the fact that he doesn't look at the photo have any significance? hope he'll be able to recognise his wife when needed 😊! looks like khushi has been sold to arnav for her family's financial security... poor kid, all her dreams have been shattered... don't like this arnav much especially as what he's doing to her is marital rape... waiting to see how this story unfolds!

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soulstarspirit

@soulstarspirit

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#306

feel bad for khushi.i hope arnav soon finds the truth or whatever the reason is.Really looking forward to the next chapter.
But plz can u make the chapters little longer..pata hi nahi chalta kab khatam ho gaya 😆

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#307

the title of this SS itself is scary, Zehra

what is this guy upto?

thx for ur pms

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Bewakoof

@Bewakoof

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#308

Arrr... Whats wrong with him???
Poor Khushi...

uske saare sapne mitti me mil gaye 😭

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Sarah

@Crazy_1001

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#309

Oh wow short chapter but yet so powerful the broken dreams of an 18 year old, I really don't wish this upon anyone.

Pssht I don't hate you, keep writing darker please! :)

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Jennifer

@Jennymyola

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#310

i won't hate you coz i'm in a state of shock! Poor khushi!
Angry arnav always thinks backwards. Instead of punishing khushi, he should be punishing shyam, as he's the one who is already married and cheating on his wife while khushi is unmarried and ignorant of shyam's intentions.