Th#1 ArHi SS: Destroyed*AWARDED*

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Anupama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Wowjj ! Ye ss to bahute badhiya h.hello hi kare ka padi.. ;)

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shree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

I hope you don't torture Khushi the way CVs are doing in the show currently.
And I am happy with your new SS but with hope that you will complete the other 2 sooon..

Best of Luck for the new genre.

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fffan123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Interesting concept. 👏 👏 👏 Though you have mentioned that this is a Dark SS, I hope for happy ending for ARHI.

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Lord Voldemort

@You.Know.Who

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

wow its completly a different and dark story pls update soon

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Mariam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

this is a different concept...

and I love it...its pretty dark

I'm wondering why he didn't want her to contact her family?

it was very well written..

do continue soon...thanks for the pm...

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.x-bumblebee-x.

@.x-bumblebee-x.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Res.. Ill read it later ... I will edit later .. !! :)

Edit:

hmm interesting .. !! Looking forward for the story to unravel .. :)

Edited by .._sonii_.. - 12 years ago

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Arina Raizada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Uh oh!! ASR is on a mission and ASR never fails.

So is Khushi cheating his sister in awareness that Shyam is her husband? Or is it like the show??

And I'm not liking Shashi right now. I mean he literally just sold off his daughter!

Anyways since Shashi was so ready to give Khushi away and also break all contact and ties with her is she adoptive in this SS too?

Anyways even though I'm not a fan of angst type stories this is really intersting! Can't wait to read more.

Thanks for the PM and update soon!

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Daspayel

@Daspayel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

Yes the destruction has begun
but the destruction is of ASR' hatred
nice start

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Yuks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#149

You know I love dark stories. There's only so much of sunshine and roses I can take before I need something to taint it with.

The world is not sunshine and roses. It is a dark dank place and I love stories that reflect it.

I'm just one of those people I guess.

And this was perfect. I loved it. I loved how Arnav was almost like an emotionless robot in this and how it was like Khushi just never meant anything.

What Shashi did for need.

I know it can be hard to write something dark, angsty, serious. And you have done a wonderful ob here. I loved it!

I hope you update soon

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Fuj

@-ElmoFuj-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#150

I just read this. Damn! Why do i ALWAYS have to be this late! 23 pages late, do you kmow how late s that?? 😭

Okay enough of my dukhi kahani 😆

I love this already Lazy. Arnav seems like a very very very dangerous man. And whyyy did Shashi give away his daughter like that? I no like him! He practicaly sold her off!! 😡

And khushi has 2 sisters? Cant wait to get to kmow about the third one. And why isnt khushi protesting? Why no asking khushi? Why no dialogue between khushi and arnav 😲

Im scared. Has she been blackmailed? I am dying to know the story behind khushi. Please please please updateee soon!