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Posted: 12 years ago

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A PARALLEL LIFE






PART 3

He looked at the date ….. 24 th august 1912……and same mirror…… but something was changed he had seen exactly same in an antique galary two days back…but the design was opposite and the sun rays that were hitting the mirror here in the room were from west direction …..but sun always rises from east and he also had a mirror in mansion and clearly remember that it was the same sun light rays falling on that mirror from east in mansion..…..

Maan was confused how can sun rays ….nature can never be like this then why this…moreover he doesn't know where he is …..the things here seems too old….the language that here is has heard is some kind of that he doesn't spoke in his entire life…so soft ….simple…. then something striked his mind…

Maan: OPPOSITE WORLD………… I am in parallel world……. And 100 years back that too in a parallel world…….

Maan: how it can be true …??????..NO!!!!! it can't be what rehan said can't be true….i can't be in opposite world…..and that to in past….ohh god….what is this ….how can I be here…I clearly remember my car fell from the bridge…..then…what happen…and where's my car…

Maan was trying to comprehend what is going on…where he is…why and how he came here …when suddenly remembered something….

A WEEK AGO

Maan the young and dynamic maan singh khurana was sitting in the conference room listening to the latest ideas presented by his chief architects nayan and surbhi…..the girls were good but sometimes are a big headache for maan…..

This time they were quite successful in impressing their boss but still one thing they can't do that is to finalise the best location…. Maan went to his cabin and saw his best friend rehan mehra was sitting….he hadn't seen rehan from past one week and the odd behaviour of rehan that he hadn't even picked his calls….he seemed to be oddly missed …. And now looking as if something drastic has happened……

Maan came infront of rehan and tapped his shoulder….

Maan: hey….mr.philosopher….where are you lost ….rehan suddenly came to his world from his thoughts and hugged maan as if meeting him after ages….

Maan: hey…hey buddy I know you love me…but please this PUBLIC DISPLAY….you know….i am MSK…atleast behave accordingly….

Rehan only gave him an angry glare for maan's mocking ….

After talking some random stuffs….

Maan: where were you dude….from last week no message no phone calls….

Rehan: maan I want to show you something….

Maan: sure ….what is that …that you are this much tensed…

Rehan took out an envelope from his pocket and give to maan…

Rehan: open it…

Maan without any further question open the cover he didn't ask about it and looked at the photographs…

Maan: (with amused face…) ohhh..so MR.PHILOSOPHER is interested in history I didn't knew that…from where or prisely which museum I should say these photographs are taken…

Rehan snapped the pics from maan and showed him the date …1912..written on the photos….

Rehan: maan see the date written over there …

Maan saw the date…

Maan: I saw that that's why I asked which museum dude…

Rehan: maan seriously how can you be so dumb…you know that my camera gives the dates on the photographs taken….

Maan: you mean…

Rehan: these are real…

Maan: are you kidding me….look I have many other works …don't want to hear your nonsense….

Rehan: maan these are real pics…from 20th century believe me….

Maan: look rehan I know you want to play pranks…but this is not the right time….

Rehan: maan keep them with you …and believe me I was in this place from last one week….i am joking around….and this is not our past it's a opposite world….

Saying so he left maan with those pics….

PRESENT

Maan was standing on the same place looking at the pics intendly… he again looked at the date on the pictures 17 august 1912…. A week ago …same place he could now recognize the places ..he had seen them while coming along with his mother….

Maan : mother….she is not my mother…my mom left me when I was four…and he couldn't complete …when payal entered with a glass of water…he was not amazed to see the glass…but it was combination of silver and gold…..

Payal: bhaiyya ye lijiye pani….

She sweetly smiled …maan couldn't resist to show a brotherly affection towards this adorable girl…however maan is the only child of his parents..but probably here the person who existed as him has a family including all the relations….

Maan wanted to look around the place but first need to tell the family who is he from where he belong….

Maan : payal maa aur daadima kahan hai..mujhe unse milna hai…

Payal: jii chaliye…when they were about to go…a snap fell down…payal picked it up and exclaimed…

Payal: bhaiyya ye kya hai….aur geetakshi isme kaise..

Maan looked at the snap in her hand and first time cursed his destiny ….and then he noticed a girl smiling in the picture nearly in her early twenties wearing a sari like payal….sitting near a river….. the girl was having something like a magnetic pull that he couldnot withdraw his eyes from her….

Maan : Mishty..a sudden reply a whisper came from his mouth….

Payal: bhaiyya ye geetakshi hai….koi mishty nahi….

Maan was shocked listening to her name…GEET..his geet….she is here….he can see his geet here….that means his geet still exist here…..

Maan: Geetakshi….????? Maan asked with a questioning gaze…..

Payal: aise mat dekhiye ki aap inhe jaante nahi…aapki sabki badi dushman….aap bhul gaye….

Payal giggled innocently….

Maan was not able to get what payal was saying..

Geet "his enemy "how can his love be his biggest enemy …..he was still in a trance…..and was desperate to meet her……

Maan: payal can I meet her….

Maan again used English….and quickly asked again…..

Maan: kya main inse mil sakta hun…..kahan milengi ye…..

Payal: geetakshi sara din uss talab par hi rehti hai ..raat ko hi ghar jaati hai…..aap toh jaanye hi hai….

Maan was surprised with this new piece of information and made his mind to meet his geet and to find out route to his world…..

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome maan to meet his geet in past
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia

interesting

plz update sooon




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Posted: 12 years ago


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Originally posted by: shri12

Awesome maan to meet his geet in past



thank u so much...
i m glad that u like it...yup he will meet her

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow!i m loving ds concept...
truly amazing..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

wow!i m loving ds concept...
truly amazing..



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