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Arshi86

@Arshi86

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#891

Originally posted by: shreyasonia
Yikes!!!! Am I the first? Yay me ( happy dance)
Fab update.
Indeed let the fireworks begin.

Sorry to burst your bubble but I was first 😆

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#892

I will whine today Naina! That was cliffhanger ... 😭 I will have a tough time waiting for the next update. LOL .. their first fight and that too just after the first date and none of them is easy.

Hope you manage enough time to update during the busy week .. you are doing a fab job 😊

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Newbiesoapfan

@Newbiesoapfan

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#893

Nice ... their first disagreement/fight!! Interested in seeing how both handle the relationship dynamics now.

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ISensedYou

@ISensedYou

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#894

tats not fair!!!!!!!! 😭

cliffhanger!!!!!

well yes let d fireworks begin😉

eagerly waitin for their first fight...

they both r strong minded people

their convo will b very intrestin...

awsum update...

tanx 4 d pm...

continue soon

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tibs09

@tibs09

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#895

@ naina ...i really love the way you have built up these two characters who have integrity as their middle name ...i like them pitted together and against each other ...

and I for one have never found the story boring ...it is realistic and any ambitious , educated girl will give her life and limb to get a partner like this Arnav...

well done and looking for more...

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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#896

I really love this story...such a wonderful portrayal of how two people who are poles apart work hard towards their relationship!!! do pm for the next update

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Viji

@-Viji-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#897

Their conversation was very good...😛

Arnav was trying to control his temper..And even khushi...😉

thy bth are very stubborn...😆

So lets c wat happens nw in the office...😊

thanks for the pm😛

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#898

awesome update. really wonder how would arnav react, fireworks r gonna start.

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tennismaniac19

@tennismaniac19

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#899

Hey there Naina!

I just read your entire story and I must say, WOW! It's really brilliant! The whole mentoring concept is a new one and I thoroughly enjoyed the angel-devil interactions with Arnav 🤣 And Arnav and Khushi's relationship just gives me happy goosebumps every time I read about it. 😳

You have a very nice style of writing and you've really progressed this story beautifully! I'd love to read more of it. Could you please PM me when you update?