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Bells.E.cullen

@Bells.E.cullen

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#1031

Wow yaar...
Wat an amaxing superb mindblowing update...
It was incredible...
Luved d update...
Update asap...

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Gr8tyms

@Gr8tyms

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#1032

Loved the honest open communication. Kushi scared and apprehensive at first but then the feelings taking over. Arnav understanding Kushi perfectly and seeing themselves as equals. Please pm me when u update. Tks

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#1033

Damn good update. even through it all, the anger, the passion, the confusion, they always manage to communicate. I loved how she made herself be heard...and it took him a bit, but he got it, and respects her more for it!! 😛

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1034

loved it very romantic and sweet

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naina

@warriorprincess

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#1035

As always... thank you for all the love and amazing feedback

🤗

naina

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1036

Ahhh! Beautiful. Much, much better than I expected. I was a bit afraid about what might happen. But this outcome sounded the most logical and mutually equal. I didn't feel that either of them got the upper hand (unlike the reel life where he ALWAYS gets the upper hand!) And after reading I feel quite satisfied. This scenario is quite different than that of the reel thing. At least, here, they are talking and communicating like two adult and mature human beings!! I love that!

Now to see what happens about her job!! Has he explained to her why? I hope she doesn't get mad at him. Wonder what'll happen to her Jalebi Junction?? OK, seriously, I cannot wait for the next update. tfs😃

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Mallika

@malkasub

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1037

super...just the dose we needed

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aditi07

@aditi07

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1038

Fabulous Update 👏👏
loved every bit of it, how he took her to a place more private to have this conversation, how he made a coffee for her, how removing the initial barriers of nervousness & fear, khushi stood up for herself, her say in their matters, her role in decision making & the Kiss...wow...so intense, passionate & Hot 😳😳😳...you left me asking for more!!
really enjoyed reading it...continue soon dear 😊

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tamanna

@Tamaru

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1039

arnie is so cute "can i plss hav ur phone no."
heehehe:)

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S003

@S003

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#1040

Hey ...

I have to ask this ... you said this is your first OS ... but are you like a creative writer full time or something... because damn girl...

Ok so yes ASR and KKG are reacting differently than the show but by God they fit the characters that we know and love... the reaction is what I would have loved to see in the actual show...

loved loved loved it...

thanks for the PM

waiting impatiently.

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