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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Vaish-

secret admirer...


kaisa hona chahiy??


Dashing of course. Good hearted too. Aur pata nai. Tu hi select kar le 😛 Aisa waise toh tu dhundegi nai
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Posted: 12 years ago

t h e d r a m a t i c r e t u r n . p a r t 2
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Exiting the stage, everyone hovered around Kriya; hugging her, showering her with their love and gazillion questions. She replied back with smile, trying to pay attention to all of them but she was highly distracted. Their voices were audible for her. All she wanted to go up to him. The wait had already stretched long. She had waited long already. Even after being in the same city, she hadn't showed herself to all. All because of the damned misunderstanding.

Vishakha finally came to her rescue. "Guys, give her a second to take a breath at least." Kriya blinked to look at Vishakha and was surprised to see her next to her. Apparently, as seen, all of her undivided attention was on Rey who looked back at her with a look in his eyes that she couldn't quite pin point. It held mixed emotions... as if he was fighting with his emotions.

Kriya opened her mouth to say something but was interrupted, "That's all you care about?" She turned back to Rey, not really surprised at the accusation. Though, she really didn't want to have this ugly conversation with him in front of everyone. She eyed others who looked completely confused. Swayam and Sharon looked as if they wanted to be anywhere but here. Other bore similar expressions.

"Rey..."

"No. You don't get to talk. Not this time. That's all you do isn't it? Just show up when you want to and leave. Just like that. And then move on as if nothing ever happened. How can you be so selfish."

"Rey..." Swayam tried to interfere.

"Swayam please. Don't defend your best friend again. This is between me and her."

"If it is, then go talk privately! We don't need to hear this." A new voice, Sharon, spoke for the first time since the group strolled down the stage.

Both Rey and Kriya flinched a little at her tone but nevertheless, Kriya was thankful for that act. They really did need to sort things out. It was high time. She continued.

"It's almost time for the results to be announced. Let's go guys." Everyone left but Rey and Kriya. Vishakha passed one comforting look to Kriya before leaving. One thing Kriya noticed was the grim look on Taani's face when she walked past her. Kriya couldn't help but feel guilty somewhere deep down.

"Rey... let me explain..." her voice, pleading, came when they were alone. Rey turned his back on her.

"Why are you here now? Can't you let me move on with peace? I can't believe I ever loved such a selfish person like you! Who comes and goes as she pleases for her own fun."

Kriya felt a stab in her heart at his words. Yet, she continued her attempt to explain things. "You can. You have every right to move on. But please... just let me explain once. Then the chain is all your's."

"5 minutes." Rey spoke. She understood she would only get 5 minutes of his time. She decided to make the best of it and get straight to the point.

"When you called that day... Mom was talking about Naina... a friend I made after all the time. It wasn't what you thought. I've loved you and I will always love you. Even if you love someone else, I can never stop loving you. I don't think there is anyone or anything in this world that can make me stop loving you. I know...Me just leaving like that and telling it to you through a letter wasn't right. I should have confronted you. But at that moment, it was important for me to keep my mother's trust. And I was hoping you'd understand me... I can't blame her for what she did. She was only protecting me."

"From what? Me?!"

"NO! She was trying to prevent history from repeating itself." Kriya shot out without realizing what she was saying. Then she quickly changed the topic before he had a chance to catch on to what she slipped out. "I came back a month ago... Just few days after you called. I even came to meet you at the basketball court. But that day... when I heard you say such things about me to that girl... I just couldn't. I didn't know any better. I ran away... For that, I'm sorry... I let the misunderstanding continue... I have no right to flip your life around again like this... So I just hope you'll forgive me and remember our good memories... No matter what happens next."

She choked the next words. "I – I love you."


-T h e E n d -

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L o o k b e l o w 😆😳

Edited by *Khushii* - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

-E n d N o t e -

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First off, THANK YOU for so much love and support on this OS. I had never thought I would receive such a huge response on this idea!! 116 today is just WOW for me. Thank you thank you thank you!!!


Secondly, apologies for taking almost 6 months in posting part 2. Two reasons: 1). There was just too much going on 2). I was waiting for things to catch up in Guzarish so readers, you guys, are actually reading something in suspense as to what happens when Kriya and Rey face each other. If I had posted this part shortly after part 1, everything would have been ruined 😳


If any new readers want to read Guzarish to see continuation of this OS, PM me and I shall give you the link!!


And about the ending on this part, you guys surely didn't think I'd be that nice, right? 😉 🤣 I want you guys to tell me... Will Rey realize what he's done and try to fix that or will he go on to explore the new feelings he has been developing for Taani at this point?


And yes, I promise to bring this part in Guzarish ASAP so that you aren't waiting forever again 😛


With that, I end this here and let it continue in Guzarish! I hope to see at least 100 likes here 😳


With Love,

-Khushi.


Edited by *Khushii* - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Vaish-

vaise who brought 116 liked bata toh..


main bhi laungi apne mein... 😎


Vaishali ne toh like kiya. Par ek casper ka bhi toh bantaa hai na 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
i toh so knew ki aisa hi kuch karegi ulta seedha...

varna thodi na tu aise hi OS post kar deti...🤣

so i loved kria flipping out...

lekin as u know...

tu zara MUs ko change toh kar..

me fed up 😒

jaldi jaldi... tu ek baar rey ko fir realize karvane wali process pe laade.. 😃
Edited by -Vaish- - 12 years ago
Vaish24 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: *Khushii*


Vaishali ne toh like kiya. Par ek casper ka bhi toh bantaa hai na 😉


??????? 😕
Vaish24 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
u changed the name to return intentionally or naam fit nhi ho pa rha tha???
Vaish24 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: *Khushii*

^ Chod. Tujhe samaj na aaya


am a tubelight😆😃

bata nah...
Vaish24 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
just a sec...

i actually liked that OS???

my tab worked??

when... how... kaise???

i don't even remember hitting it...

mereko khud ko jhatka laga... 😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
wasn't fitting so shortened it.

lol. tubelight *shake head*

yeah. You did 😛 I was shocked too but it was long time ago.

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