Os ~~swaron in Village~~ prt 5 updated - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
Nice start himani and i thank you giving us something positive something which can make us smile 😊

Thanx for PM update soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Himani its sure a very new and a nice start.
Looking forward to read this one :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
nice concept and update soon
plz pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Awesome concept 😊

Swaron n village 😳
yaaar mein tak chuka huu swayam n sharon ki fight.say..show mein bhi or ff mein bhi lagata tum sabko unki fight kuch jayada hi achiii lagati ...y/n😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
hey nice concept swaron in village..
super exiting plz Plz send me Pm whenever u update.😊
hope Palki mam aapka ye padh le do something lyk dis in real story of D3...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great concept
Looking forward far more romance n mastilagata hai sabako swayam say kuch problem hai saari ki saari tention swayam kooo ..y...yaary y y y plz tell me😊n waiting...next chp.in village tc guys😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Isse koi update karega yaa nhii?!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys first of all thank you'.. Thank you'' thank you so much seriously I didn't expect this much response, it's really overwhelming'..thanks a lot once again.🤗

Here's the next update just hope to come up with all your expectations!!!

At night Swayum standing in front of Sharon's house in a deep thought "jaun ki na jaun patanahi kya sochegi, and waise bhi she is in her diva mode right now'.kya karu'let me go in jo hoga dekha jayega..."

As soon he enters the room saw his angel sleeping "she looks so damn beautiful and calm while sleeping, I wish jaagte hue bhi aisi hi hoti..." swayum said, and he was loud enough to awake his angel.

"What the hell you are doing here?" Sharon screams.

"What, WHAT" bechara majnu to gaya.

"Ye kya what...what laga rakha hai?? And why the hell are you doing here so late and what does it mean "she looks so beautiful and calm while sleeping, i wish jaagte hue bhi aisi hi hoti" i m not beautiful??" Sharon in full fighting mood.

"You hared that!!! Um..wo i mean ..wo me yeh keh raha tha ki...I mean you are beautiful indeed but jab calm rehti ho to aur bhi beautiful lagti ho" Swayum tries to justify.

"What!!! tum muje itni raat ko ya batane aaye ho ki me calm rehti hu to...arghhh!!! Swayum you are impossible"!!!

"Correction I m possible" grinning like a kid

"Now stop grinning like that Swayum, jab tume mere saath hona tha tab to tum apne team k saath the, after that tum relationship ki baat karte ho"? Sharon was really hurt and upset.

Swayum try to console her "Sharon listen, I know tum naraz ho but mene tumhare samne kuch nai kaha, it doesn't mean I m not with you; I and always be with you'.har baat bata k jahir nai ki jaati sharon, kuch baatein sirf dil se samjhi jaati hai" (philosophical Swayum)

"Oh please! Itna philosophical hone ki jarurat nai hai ok, tum jao yahan se and let me sleep."

"To tum ab bhi naraaz ho, ok I'll manofy u"

"What?"

"Umm nothing'nothing you want to sleep naa than go and sleep, good night and Swayum dreams...I mean'.I mean sweet dreams" closed both his eyes as soon he realized what he just spoke.

Sharon smiles at his words "god I don't like him anymore, I love him!!! Pagal"

While coming out of Sharon's home Swayum to himself "my dear Sharon, is tour ke end hone se pehle tum muje I love you bologi, aur agar aisa nahi hua to'.to'to kya, arey bolegi don't worry I'll make sure"

Next Day @ railway station

Swayum booked a compartment which they going to share with some school children and a bend who are going to participate a competition.

Everyone was there except Swayum, whole gang start panicking 'Rey tried to call him infinity time but all in vain.

"Where the hell he is man, use pata tha na that train is on time so where he is?" vishakha broke the ice

"Ha re wo to kabh bhi late nahi hota, to aaj kyu?" Bharat joins vishakha.

"Neha tensioning"; "are don't worry kagu me hu naa"

"lekin u are not Swayum, wo nahi aaya to?? Waise bhi yesterday he was upset, kyunki kisi ne usse kal achche se baat nai ki" glared at Sharon.

"Agar wo seriously nahi aaya to'.n...no wo aayega; raat ko to normal tha'agar nahi aaya to'why its effecting me too much, kyu nai after all we are in relationship'oh god where the hell are you Swayum agar tum nai aaye to me is stupid se tour pe akele kya karungi '.kahan ho tum?" her chain of thought broke by loud whistle of engine.

Train departs from the station; everyone sits quietly in their births

"Ab to no chance, it's really strange Swayum booked tickets and he himself not in time, I mean he is not a person who ran from his commitments"rey exclaimed

Some children start singing from the other side of the compartment'.suddenly a familiar voice sings along them yes he is none other than our majnu boy; all the disappointment and sadness turned into sudden joy and excitement rey, Vicky, nil, bharat, and amar runs towards the direction from where voice is coming and what they saw Swayum yes Swayum sitting with kids and playing with them.

All the kids want Swayum to sing a song for them

Kid "Bhaiya please sing for us"

"Are no'. nahi I can't sing"

All the kids start hooting

"Swayum bhaiya sing''"Swayum bhaiya sing"'' "Swayum bhaiya sing"

A cute soft voice caught his attention "please sing na"

That's all for today will update tomorrow, till than have fun and do comment and hit like tab.

Edited by Luvsd3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Himani, super..u updated.
A very sweet and cute sa update.
Swayam and his philosophical talks and an angry Diva..are nice combo...loved their cute tiff and convo. Looking forward to read this train journey of SwaRon.


Edited by Sudha-SK - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
This was such a pleasant update. Awesome. Loved the SwaRon coversation. It was sweet and cute. Waiting for the next part with hope that the sweet voice which asked him to sing was of Sharon.

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