My OS: ArShi's Married and One.. (Final Part Done) - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
ohh beautiful
loved the way u written
dammit snake shyam
i m sure its dadi who is there with him on terrace
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Arshi Fans...

Today is indeed a big day for all of us... Finally the awaited day has arrived... we logged to celebrate this moment probably from the day IPKKND started... We witness them fighting, making up, hating, loving, concern, worried, satisfied, happy, confused, laughing, crying... all emotions have been brought before us...However, today we are going to see all of it together... They are finally becoming one... They were one from beginning but today they will officially get family blessing, society legal stamp and most important each other's vows of loving and living together forever...the phere...

WARNING!!!!!Before you all start reading the OS... do me two favours please...

1. Plug in your speakers and increase the volume...

2. Scroll the entire OS... wherever you see the song bar...PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PAUSE THE SONG... You should hear it as you read that specify part... Its going to be slighty messy... I agree but thats the best i could come up with...

Its a long update as it is the MAHA EPISODE as promised...

Thursday's Episode Re-cap: NK narrated the entire incident at Gupta House to Payal, Anjali and Arnav.Anjali told Arnav she knows the real reason behind the first marriage as she ran it in Khushi's diary. Both Anjali and Payal apologizes for their behaviour on that day. However, Anjali still believes Shyam and feels all these is a big misunderstanding. Arnav didn't want to hurt Anjali as she has finally started smiling again. Khushi replied Arnav text message which made him smile and think that he can't stay without her. At Gupta House, Garima became emotional seeing Khushi's childhood socks. She couldn't believe her daughter is so grown up. Buaji, Garima and Khushi shared a motherly moment. Arnav was restless as he hasn't seen Khushi since their sangeet. As he head down to go and visit Khushi, he felt her presence in RM. Khushi who had just stepped in with her family felt Arnav's presence too. As they were about to see each other, Payal stop Khushi whereby NK stops Arnav. Naniji told Payal to be with Khushi and Dadi ordered her to ensure Arnav and Khushi does not meet before marriage. Arnav was listening to these from the wall nearby. As he was about to enter he heard Khushi telling Payal of her wedding dream becoming complete but the baraat possession will be missing since they were getting married in RM. Arnav told everyone except Payal they shall bring the baraat as it is Khushi's dream. All the Raizada's were surprised at Arnav's action thus he dismissed them by asking them to get ready. Khushi had a flashback of the journey of their love whereby Arnav remembered his promise to Khushi of spending the night counting stars. They both confessed their love to each other...


Friday's Episode

Episode starts with us hearing their confession **(click the play icon below)**


Both smiles at the same time and holds their heart as though they heard each other. Khushi and Arnav couldn't believe finally their dream is coming true.. They are going to be one just like they wished. No more contract, no more distance, no more family drama, no more rituals... Just them two and their love...

Arnav was standing at the stairs looking at all the arrangement when suddenly he heard a girl saying... NK nooo... nooo... stop stop please...

Lavanya?? thats her voice.. and what is that NK doing with her?? 😡 He quickly walked out to kill NK if he was misbehaving but instead found them playing with colours as though its HOLI... Arnav's anger turned into a lovely smile as he remembered his moments with Khushi during the passed holi...


He remember praising her to Di and Nani when she was happily dancing like a child...**(click the play icon below)**



Arnav was so lost until he didn't even realised when Lavanya and NK had gone... Ting!!! Ting!! Arnav looked at the clock on the wall strikes... Its 5pm. Their marriage is in next 2 hours. Khushi had just taken her shower... Her long black hair dripped water from the bathroom till the mirror where she stood smiling at her reflection... "Aaj hum aapki dulhan banke sajenge" (Today, I'll dress-up as your bride)... she spoke to her imaginative Arnav...

On the other side, Arnav just had a hair cut and looking hot as always...
(gals... stop drooling...😆)
He looked at his Green Sherwani and asked himself.. 'Ermm this or suit..? If i wear this... hopefully my pyjama (Sherwani's pants) doesn't come off...😆"

Everyone else is getting ready too... Payal and Aakash shared a moment thinking about their marriage... "Payal.. hum bhi firse shaadi kerle... Fir se suhaag raat karne (Payal.. should we re-marry again and have our first night again) ? 😉 Aap bhi naa... Kuch bhi kehte hai..(Don't speak rubbish)😳
Payal answered with shyness...They both hugged each other as Payal expressed... I'm so happy today, Aakash.. Finally Khushi is getting all the love, respect and happiness she deserves... and Arnavji... he is finally changing to his original self.. the funny, mischievous and happy brother of yours. "You are right Payal, happy days are back again in Raizada Mansion... May Devi Maiya never let any evil eyes on our happiness.. Aakash thought...

Aakash was unaware of the evil eyes that was already in the house's terrace...
**(click the play icon below)**
Shyam was shown on the terrace of Raizada Mansion... He mumbled to himself that as long as he if alive, Arnav and Khushi will never get married. Just as he laughed like the evil... someone held his shoulder. He quickly turned in fear but as soon as he saw the face, an evil grin had appeared on his face...

Maaf kerdijiyo damadji... hum late hui gaye.. (Sorry SIL, i came late).

Koi baat nahi hamari pyari MAMIJI... aapne bohot hi kamaal ka kaam kiya hai... Aapne Khushiji ko dil se aapne ke jo natak kiya hai usse ab pura Raizada Parivaar aap per bharosa kerne lage hai... Aap toh janti hai Khushji bas yeh daulat chahti hai aur aap sab ko ghar se bhar phek dhengi jab woh saari property aapne naam kerlegi... Woh toh Aakash ka bhi hissa nahi choregi... aur toh aur unhone Saale Saab ko bhi kaha pyar ka natak kerne keliye varna woh hamari Rani Sahiba ko...
(Its alright my dearest MAMIJI... you have done a fabulous job.. Since you acted to accept Khushi with open heart, the entire Raizada Parivaar will trust you now... and you are fully aware that Khushiji just wants the property and as soon as she gets that, she will you all out of RM... she will even snatch Aakash's share. She has also told my BIL to pretend to love her or else she would hurt my rani sahiba..) crocodile tears ran down his cheek...

Mamiji all these while was just shocked hearing Shyam saying all that... She couldn't imagine leaving RM and her son travelling in bus... She said Nahiii (Nooo)... Phatti Saari will never get victory for her plan... I will bring her here to the terrace and you take it from there on... Mami uttered in revenge mode...

Shyam again had his evil grin and said.. Yes mamiji,.. i always wanted the best for Raizada parivaar... thats why I'm doing all these.. to save Saale Saab's life, the property and for the happiness of you all. Anyways Mamiji... did you bring the things i told you? We better get started...

Yes Damadji.. I did bring... let me get it.. Mami went to get something...

Its been 8minutes, what is taking Mami so long... ufff...

HANDS UP!!!! Shyam heard as he also felt a poking item on his back... He looked on his left and saw 3 policemen surrounding him... He was shocked as he also saw Mami along them...

Itna chock mat jaiye DAMADJI... Hum aapka pillaning bohot ache se jante hai... Yeh sach hai ke hum phatti saari ko kabhi pasand nahi kiye aur shayed kabhi aapnayenge bhi nahi... Lekin Arnav bitwa hamare jigar ka tukda hai... Unki amma ke jaane ke baad humne unko aapne dil se laga ke rakha hai... Bhale woh hume maa na kahe.. lekin unhone humein hamesha ek maa ke jaisen pyar aur samaan diya hai... (Don't be so surprised SIL... i was very well versed with you planning... Its true that i never liked Khushi and might never accept her but Arnav is part of my heart... Since his mother died, i have lok after him just like a mother.. he may never call me 'Mother' but he has always loved and respected me like one.)

Hamare bitwa dil se pyar kerta hai phatti saari ko (He truly loves Khushi)...tears were rolling down Manorama's cheeks as the policemen held Shyam tightly so he doesn't escape..

*Flashback* (Scene where Arnav was talking to him mother -the star = https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3155512/my-os-arshis-married-and-one-final-part-done)

While Arnav was talking to his mother, Manorama was passing by from a floor above... She stopped as she heard Arnav saying:-

'She turned me into the Arnav I was before you had left us. She wipes off all my pain just with a cute smile on her face. Her tender hands squeezes all my tiredness from the rough days i have. She understand my silences so well... She is able to read everything that is in my mind and heart. You always wanted a D-I-L like her right mom? An obedient, well-cultured, beautiful, valued, religious and simple girl. Well... Khushi is certainly of all these but she has a few qualities that I'm sure you would laugh at knowing it. She is a little pagal.. no wait a lot & unbelievably pagal.. She falls all the time but I'm always there to grab her... Saying this he remembered the way she fell from the ramp stage in Sheesh Mahal, falling from the stool in the kitchen and landed in his arms... he chuckled to himself and said... But Mom, I Love Her... '

*Back to present*
Then i realise how much Arnav actually loves Khushi and everything you said was a lie... Then Anjali bitiya told us the reason behind their marriage... I was surprised to hear it.. You told me Khushi was blackmailing you.. To be very sure about the facts, I went to Laxmi Nagar (Khushi's housing area) to get to the roots... I asked a few people if they recognize you by showing your picture... they told me you stayed as a paying guest in Madhumatiji's house and got engaged to Khushi.. but after awhile.. disappeared... From there i knew you have always been lying... played with our emotions... but not anymore MR. SYHAM JHA... you are going to rot in jail...

Hahahahahaahahah mamiji... who is going to believe you? How are you going to make my Rani Sahiba trust you... she doesn't even trust Arnav, her brother, her world.. you think she will trust crazy mami like you... forget it mamiji... you can't ruin me in any way...

YOU ARE RIGHT!!!! (someone said as the voice became loud since the distance got less)...

If mamiji would have told ME... i would have never believe just like i didn't trust Khushiji and Chotte... but i heard it from you own mouth... do you still think i wont believe it?? Anjali has walked up to Shyam, held his collar... Kyu!!! Kyu!!! Kyu!!!😡😭 (Why Why Why!!!)... What didn't my family do for you... how much i loved you... day and night i prayed for you well-being.. just to see this today?? I'm ashamed of you... I'm disgusted by you..🤢... I HATE YOU!!!!

Policemen was tired of the drama going on...: Mrs. Anjali Jha... what should we do now?... Anjali looked at them with a shocked expression... she then looked at Mami who was holding her shoulder and back to Shyam... Anjali's tears were flowing uncontrollably😭😭... She wiped her tears and with a stern look... she reached to her Mangalsutra and in a split seconds pulled it off her neck... Mamiji and Shyam was totally shocked at the action...😲😲Immediately after that she wiped of her sindoor... Her eyes were still locked at Shyam's shocked face... Inspector... Anjali voiced out... My Name is ANJALI SINGH RAIZADA... take this man off my sight and make sure he is non-bailable... After my chotte's wedding... We will see what to do then...

As the policemen started walking away with Shyam... Anjali stopped them... she walked to them.. came face to face with Shyam...

Dishhh!!!!!!! She slapped him so tight until he couldn't stablize himself... This is for the betrayal... One more smack... This is for the lies... One More... this is for misleading me and mamiji...One more... this for hurting Khushiji... One more... this for snatching my chotte's happiness... one final slap... THIS IS FOR MY CHILD who unfortunately would have your blood... take him away inspector...

Anjali broke down and couldn't believe that she trusted such a cheap man... she didn't trust her brother and Khushiji... they always tried to make her realise the reality but she was so blind-folded... Because of her Arnav was kidnapped, Khushi almost died... Shyam didn't spare anyone... Mami consoled her and told her it wasn't at all her fault... she shouldn't blame herself... Just be glad that everything is over now bitiya... He is gone.. Look around... its all brightly lighted.. Its Chotte's marriage bitiya..whatever we snatched from him.. its time to return back.. lets get ready before anyone starts looking for us... Anjali wiped away her tears and walked toward her room. She promised to her child she will never cry for that SNAKE ever again... and she will ensure her child never misses the father...!!!!!

*****!*****

Everyone is shown dressed so well...


Hello Hi Bye Bye... Sab log kitne preetii lag rahe hai... ... Khoon Bhari tang... tum aaj aapne maternity side mein ho... Phatti Saari ki bhen... 😆(Everyone is looking so beautiful.. Payal, you are from the bride side as Khushi's sister),,, Goesss (Go in Mami style)...

Payal just smiled and nodded happily as she wanted to be from Khushi's side anyways... Everyone was so happy as finally the most awaited moment has come...

Arey.. Where is the DULHA?? Just as NK finished panditji came near them and asked for the groom as they need to tie the shera and pagri for him... Anjali just took a deep breath and told he panditji...

Chotte toh sherwani bhi nahi pehnenge... Pagri aur Shera ki toh sochne ki bhi zarur...aa...ttt...(Chotte won't even wear sherwani... pagri and sehra is too far too...)😲😲 Everyone wondered why Anjali was stammering and followed her gaze..They was absolutely stunned to see Arnav walking down in the Sherwani which Anjali had told him to wear and he had denied it the very moment...

NK bhai... Pinch me... No Di.. today you pinch ME!!!.. Aakash pinched both of them and said... come on guys... don't tease my brother now.. He goes near Arnav and whispered in his ear.. Bhai, you have tied it very tightly right..? Arnav's brow raised and gave a killer look at Aakash... Everyone just burst into laughter as Aakash wasn't as soft as he should have been.

Arnav went to his Di and held her hand...

'Di, my marriage has been your ultimate dream... I won't stop you doing from anything that you like... I will wear everything you say because its not just a special day for me and Khushi but its also for you... Today, mom will be very happy because you have fulfilled your promised... Anjali couldn't control her tears... She was too amused to hear her lil brother saying such big words... They hugged each other tightly and were joined by the rest of the family members...

Mamaji, Aakash and NK tied the pagri just as the panditji instructed while hyming mantras... Dadiji and Naniji "Nazar Uthare" for Arnav and blessed him... Mamiji put the tikka for Arnav and kissed his forehead... Anjali came with the sehra and tied it for her dearest brother... Tears of happiness just flowed down her eyes as she was seeing her brother... as a GROOM...

They all made their way out of Raizada Mansion... NK squad down to allow Arnav to climb the horse... The horse is also so beautifully decorated.. said a guest... Arey of course.. its ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA's marriage... replied another guest... Everyone just kept smiling happily...

*****!*****

Payal is helping to dress Khushi...

The Bangles

The Anklet

The Jewellery


The Bindiya

The Duppata

One after another... Payal helped Khushi to wear it... She looked absolutely stunning... As soon as Khushi was ready... Payal put a black spot behind her right ear...

"Kisiki nazar na lage meri Khushi ko... Aaj toh sach mein pari lag rahi hai... Teri mendhi ka itna gehra rang saboot hai Arnavji ke gehre pyar ka tere liye... Aaj teri maang sajegi... Mangalsutra pehnaya jayega... Aaj tu puri tarha se unki ardhangini banegi Khushi... Thori dher ke baad tujhe sab Mrs. Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada ke naam se jaanege... Tera pyar jeet gaya Khushi...(No evil eyes falls on you my Khushi... Today you really look like and angel.. The dark colour of your Henna is prove of Arnavji's deep love for you... Today you path will be garnished with vermilion, mangalsutra will be tied... Today, you will be Arnavji's better half... In sometime, you will be known as Mrs. Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada.. You love won all the odds...) Payal couldn't control her tears... Both sisters hugged and Khushi smiled with pride...

Garima came in along with Buaji and Shashi... All of them shared a wonderful moment... Khushi bow to take blessings from Shashi... Slowly but steadily he raised his hands to bless her... They all hugged.. Buaji told Khushi to wait as they will come and get her as soon as she is needed... Khushi sighed sadly as she is anxious to see her Arnavji...

15 minutes passed but no one came to call her... Khushi was nervous now...

Is everything alright outside... why Jiji hasn't come... Arnavji... Where are you... why don't i feel you around me...

Suddenly Preeto, Payal and a few of Khushi's other friends entered in her room... They started singing while taking Khushi out of the room but it wasn't towards the mandap... Khushi wasn't sure of what's going on...

**(click the play icon below)**


As they got closer towards the terrace.. Khushi heard some drum beats...
**(click the play icon below)**


She was much more confused and couldn't wait to see why are they taking her to the terrace...

😲😲😲

This was Khushi's expression as she reached the terrace... Everyone was dancing crazily to the drum beats... She saw her dream guy coming in her dream style...

Ghori, Band Baaja, Baarat, Dance, Lights... Just the way she wanted...

OMG... WAIT!!!! Arnavji in Sherwani???? Sehra??? Pagri???? Jiji...Pinch Me... Khushi uttered... all the girls started laughing and waved at the baraati...


NK too waved back and danced more to show off... Arnav tried to look up to see Khushi but he was too worried about the Pagri falling off... 😆

Mamaji comes to the very front of the Baraati dragging Mamiji along... he then starts singing and dancing...

**(click the play icon below)**


Dulha ban gaya hoi, Ban gaya saada barkhurdaar,
(Our son is now a groom)
Ghodi chadh gaya hoi, Chadh gaya chhadake motorcar,
(He went up the horse leaving his car)😆

Sehra saj gaya hoi, Sehra saj gaya jalawedaar,
(He is wearing sehra and looking amazing)
Dulhan dwaar khadi, saajan sang jaane ko tayaar,
(The bride is waiting at the door to go with him)
Nachaley hoi, Nachaley hoi, Ho yaara ho ho mitraa ho.
(Lets dance... Lets dance, oh my buddy)


Dadi, Nani, Anjali.. everyone is so amused... they are clapping and enjoying seeing both Mamaji and Mamiji dancing...

Khushi and Payal too were so happily laughing seeing them dancing... they looked adorable...

Arnav smiled to himself looking at Khushi and his Di so happy... He accomplished the promise he made to himself...to ensure Di and Khushi are always happy... He closed his eyes and remembered his parents... Khushi too on the other side closed her eyes, thanked both Devi Maiya and her parents...

Garima, Shashi, Buaji are at the doorstep waiting for the Baraat to come... As soon as they arrived at the door step... Arnav jumped down of the horse like a stunning hero...

He touched Garima's feet and she did his Aarti... Its a custom for MIL to pull the SIL's nose... Garima tried to pull but Arnav pulled himself back... she tried again but in vain... she did such a puppy face... Arnav moved forward and bent alittle so Garima could pull it easily... Everyone was so happy at his gesture...

He waited at the door as Khushi walked toward his with a garland in her hand... Anjali handed over Arnav a garland too but her was too lost in Khushi's beauty least bothered about everything around him...

Khushiji look beautiful naa Chotte... Arnav snapped out as he heard his sister whispering... He smiled blushingly and so did Khushi...


MORE COMING UP... BUT I NEED SOME REST FIRST 😳

Edited by hetalmkn - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Brilliant, well done mami and anjali, if not on the show at least in the story...loved all the details of how everyone was looking and the outfits. Could play the songs, no icons showed up...waiting for the next...thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
too good. lovely effort. can acually picturise
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Brilliant, well done mami and anjali, if not on the show at least in the story...loved all the details of how everyone was looking and the outfits. Could play the songs, no icons showed up...waiting for the next...thanks for the pm.


ohh it is? may be u don't have the pluggin or try using google chrome...
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG THAT WAS FANTASTIC POST DEAR,,,REALLY SPEECHLESS...
SMALL DOUBT ???R U A WRITER/???
JUST A FANTASTIC JOB...
OMG WE WOULD BE INFINITE HAPPY IF THIS WOULD HAPPEN IN OUR SHOW TOOO...OMG ARSHI R DAMN KILLING AND THE FAMILY IS SO LOVING...
OMG THE PERSON WHO SYAM MET IS MAMIJI ...THIS IS THE BIGGEST TWIST DEAR..ALL THOUGHT DADIJI..
ANYWAYS I ENJOYED AND LOVED IT////BUT I COULD NOT PLAY SONGS SOME PROB WITH MY LAPPY...BUT SURELY I WILL HEAR IT LATER
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: misscrazyfan

OMG THAT WAS FANTASTIC POST DEAR,,,REALLY SPEECHLESS...

SMALL DOUBT ???R U A WRITER/???



Nope not exactly a writer... but I'm a Public Relation Officer and we write alot.. but not script type of course... I'm just a very romantic and imaginative person myself... and being in love with many odds surrounding helps better in writing such epic...

*My boyfriend is 40% like ASR... i had never seen him in indian outfits until it was my cousin's wedding who is his close friend too 😆 by then i knew him for a year already.. lolzz

My version of ASR is workaholic, vry possessive about me and my tears... if a tear drop.. he can kill that person..

Once my aunt had slapped me as i was rude to her... He found out about it... The next day my aunt called my mom and apologized.. We were amused coz she never says sorry... When my mom asked.. she said if i don't say sorry Hetal's boyfriend will kill me...

Lolzzz so yaa.. having an ASR just by myside and me alot crazy like Khushi... helps me loads in writing hahahaha but yaa thank god we dnt have SNAKEWA in our story... or Traffic Signal DADI 😆



Originally posted by: misscrazyfan

OMG THE PERSON WHO SYAM MET IS MAMIJI ...THIS IS THE BIGGEST TWIST DEAR..ALL THOUGHT DADIJI..


Yaa i realised everyone was walking with the flow of original IPKKND... and i have been writing something different that the real wans.. so since Anjali and Dadi was too common and easy to guess... i went with another option :p

Edited by hetalmkn - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
What a brilliant start to the grand finale 👏 I could feel each and every emotion and the BG musics did wonderful job. Take lots of rest but do update soon. I am smiling after reading this update of urs. Thanku so much for writing this beautiful OS. I would also like to request u to pls don't stop after the wedding is over. I understand u wanted to write on a week's episodes but may I request u to write a sequel to this story as I am kinda becoming very greedy after reading ur works. They are all very nice. Thanks again. Waiting for more from u :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh god is it true
plzz pinch me hetal
am i reading arhi's grand wedding wow

oh mamiji u r the best i love u hello hi bye bye
u r the best one
anjali di u have waken from ur long sleep wow amazing
superb slaps i think 4/5 fantastic

shyam ah ah ha in ur face ha ha twitchy creep that served u well go and rot in jail ha ha
u snake should have kept ur tail to urself
arnav y u should turn suddenly into this sweet charming and dreamy prince
u r always hot
green sherwani sehra and pagri
i am dead and am swooning
khushi u r the lucky girl and angel down to earth and only for arnav singh raizada
queen of beauty and kindness
true love always triumphs
arhi heart beats to get united forever
for u hetal
i am spell bound yaaar
waiting for the continuation




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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: risat

What a brilliant start to the grand finale 👏 I could feel each and every emotion and the BG musics did wonderful job. Take lots of rest but do update soon. I am smiling after reading this update of urs. Thanku so much for writing this beautiful OS. I would also like to request u to pls don't stop after the wedding is over. I understand u wanted to write on a week's episodes but may I request u to write a sequel to this story as I am kinda becoming very greedy after reading ur works. They are all very nice. Thanks again. Waiting for more from u :)


Wow... thats now a huge compliment...

Thank you very much honestly... its really amazing to see how people like your work.. im truly amused... thanks vry vry much..

well i might not continue this OS... but will come up with a new wan as the real IPKKND progresses... you know we have loads to go..

Haldi, Mendhi, Sangeet (I wrote on that already), Khushi's Muu Dikhai...

So yaa will surely continue writing... lets see how things goes on... but yaa will post up the next part of the wedding tomolo...


Originally posted by: devishree

oh god is it true

plzz pinch me hetal

for u hetal





Haaa lolzz pinch.. ahahahah sure sure...

well thanks very much for such a wonderful comment... thank you for da lovely congratz...

Will continue soon surely...
Edited by hetalmkn - 13 years ago

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