Two chapters, a teaser and about 50 pages worth of comments late.
Here comes my whit of a comment!
Chapter 14
The entire update belonged to Arnav. He stole my heart away, literally. Where should I start about this chapter? Because I know that once I start its not gonna end soon. :D Arnav's possessive side and his caring side juxtaposed made a brilliant picture. I can understand his fear, his helplessness at knowing the probability that Khushi might take his child away. A child he already has hopes on and loves like a dear father. My heart goes out to him.
Arnav's birthday. Yipee! And Anjali and Arnav's convo. Beautiful
What confuses me is why does he want a girl child? Maybe he wants to cherish his younger sister in the form of his daughter. He wants to shower all his love on his child hoping that it would redeem what he did to his sister. Just a guess.
Another intriguing bit is- Why does Arnav think that Aarti and Arjun had a relationship going on when that clearly isnt the case? Curious. Hmm Guess our questions have to wait.
There is question nagging me. Was Shyam killed by his own father? Because Sandeep is Shyam's brother right? I didnt understand that bit. I am sorry if you had mentioned it in the previous chapters. I have lost touch on the previous chapters, a bit. And I dont have the time to read through again though I am planning to do that during the vacations.
Now to the next chapter!
Chapter 15
"Awww.." Now that is what I exclaimed when I read that he had his arms around her waist. <3 Even in deep slumber. Arnav- The Protective Hubby. And realisation hits me with a bang. He loves Lavanya too, Dammit. Why deeps, why?? :( And Lavanya is his ex now? Wow.
When will he accept, dammit that he loves Khushi too?? :( And if my comment seems highly silly and disjointed then just a note that I am simultaneously reading and writing to cover whatever crosses my mind at that moment. :)
I am glad Arnav made the right decision. At least he is letting Khushi know in his own way that he wont hide anything from her, from here on. And I am scared for Lavanya. Her heart is up for a serious damage. She is gonna be crushed.
Anjali and Arnav. Brother- Sister bond redefined. I dont think anymore words other than mentioned can extoll their relationship further. Nani is being harsh. Maybe I feel this way because I am a tad bit partial towards Arnav. I hope she reconciles with him soon. Cant see him so hurt like Khushi. <3
And the second realization- Khushi loves him, Dammit! But I understand her love. It must be so difficult to convince your mind that you love the person who hurt you even though deep down you already know it. Kudos to her. I am happy that she wholeheartedly accepted it. And this marriage has some hope after all.
Ahh, I feel like slapping, Arnav. Not coming back home to your wife! Very bad Arnav! Khushi calls him an idiot! That is hilarious. I am sure she is the only one who can call him so and we wont hear a single curse from Arnav's mouth on hearing it. :D
Nani and Arnav are so alike on many different levels. Both mock. Both have a huge anger problem. And both love wholeheartedly. Flows in the genetic pool for the Raizada family I suppose. And Khushi trying to amend Nani and Arnav's relationship proves her love for him. But I know a vast pool of hurt and uncertainty is still lingering in her heart which might take a long time, which I hope not, to heal.
And that is the best gift that Arnav has probably received in his whole life. A small glimpse into his child. I can feel the excitement bubbling from him. To see his child. To hold his child. Brilliant! His last question stole my breath away. His question- so innocent yet so poignant and profound. Again Khushi is building a fort around her heart to avoid the same pain she faced earlier. Oh how I wish, she gives into her feelings. Such a day shall come.
And now, I realise that is comment has gone super long. Guess it makes up for my late comment :D Hope you dont doze off reading it. Waiting, as usual, eagerly for the next update. Since I covered two chapters here which has gone this long I am gonna skip commenting on the teaser for now and comment on it directly during the chapter :)
With lots of love, (ps: update soon! :D)
Sweta
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HOW DID I FORGET TO COMMENT ON THE KISS PARTTT?? Ahhh.. my eyes are playing tricks on me. Even my mind. You stopped there??!?!? There?? Whyyy?? I so wanna know her reaction. Their first kiss after the whole chaos. I am waiting. :D
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