ArSha FF-daNce 2 thE rhYthM oF lYf #2 Link#3 pg152 - Page 44

Originally posted by: GayatriJethani

Wow...
Double updates...
Awesome work..
Liked kriya's dress
loved it
nd update soon
thnx for pm

Originally posted by: SanjArShi-ASR

Wow awsome Double Updates...Loved it...Shakti ki farewell party was awsome...aur sab milke Truth and Dare khel rahe the...poor zarchi dare le liya aur kaha phas gaya...Aha Amar ne sabke samne shakti ko kiss kiya,...haha Shakti aur baki sab girls ne kya seductive dance liya...Amar toh pura latoo ho gaya ho gaya hoga phirse...lovely update...waiting for next update...

Originally posted by: shalini_arsha

awsimm update...

game is grt...

lovd it...

thanx 4 pm

Originally posted by: aishu3003

wowww read all d parts now

it was amazing

loved it very much

waiting for d next part

Originally posted by: little.princess

Loved da updates.. Nicely written..
Thanx 4 da pm..

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

..First of all a very very warm congrats to you for your second thread..

..Here comes a decoration for your thread from my side..

You are most awesome writer ever Manu

..LOVE YOU..

Originally posted by: Nxt_rockstar

Now My review for update-17

Yumilicious update...

Shaku Jealous..hmmm...It was so beautifully written Manu. You expressed her state so perfectly. The way she is jealous of every female fan of Kunwar...Perfect!!

Then came beautiful and sexiest dance ever...

They started up dancing and ended up almost kissing...m dead...

Kunwar said it on her face that she was jealous..brave boy

Their chit-chat while dancing was so amazing...I loved it totally..

and then came suicide bomber...read and suicide...

Their expansion in boundaries of "surrender"..ufff...hard core hawt...

You explained it so beautifully..I was getting chills as I get while watching haye rama...

It was hawt...

They were about to kiss..but dance ended...huh..

How you could you it..

Kunwar's inner turmoil was beautifully written...His calculation about friends and Shaks...awesome..

You are an intelligent writer..

Superb awesome blossom update..

I am tortoise...will reach the update 24 before you update next this time..

Love you..

Originally posted by: kuhu_Arsha

awsummm update,,,,,,,,,,,,,i m loving it

thnkx 4 double update

Originally posted by: crazysky

it was januable

loved it

Originally posted by: khusbooluvarsha

Ahhh...

wht a hottt update...loved shakti's dress

amar wanted to spend time with shaks but ye friends beech me agaye... poor amar and then comes the farewell party and amar comes in his naughty avatar😈😎 ...the entire dance sequence was hot

super awesome update ...will be waiting for the nxt update😈