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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for all ur comments...my hand is completely fine now...so here is d update hope u lyk it...😊
~~PART 1~~
At raiprakash mansion...in a room...a girl was sleeping...when her mom enters and opens the curtains..and went to her...
Mom-Sharon beta you will get late for college!!!...utho...
The girl was sharon...and her mom smriti!!...
Sharon-Mom thodi der na please...
Smriti-Noo...chalo utho...
Sharon woke up and smriti went...she went and freshened up...while in another room...a sweet princess was sleeping...with a smile on her face...with noone to disturb her...after about 10 minutes her dad came in...
Dad-Arre angel abhi tak aap uthe nahi??...
He went to her and gently woke her up...the girl woke up...
Girl-Good morning daddy!!!...
Hugged him...
Gautam-Good morning angel...get ready...swayam tumhe pick karne aa raha hoga...
The girl was none other than kria...
Kria smyled...gautam pecked her forehead...
Gautam-Bye beta...mein office ke kaam se kuch dino ke liye jaa raha hun...
Kria-Kay!!!...bye daddy...
Gautam went...downstairs...sharon making a fuss of everything...
Sharon-Mom...where is my car keys???...
Smriti-Wahi par honge na sharon...dekho they are in your hand...
Sharon-Whatever...
Gautam *in mind*-Kaha kria...and kaha sharon...isska kuch nahi ho sakta!!!...
Gautam-Bye beta...
Sharon-Bye dad!!...
He went...kria came down from her room...and went to the kitchen and takes out juice pours it in the glass and was drinking...
Kria-Mom...
Smriti-Kria tumhe jo chahiye...khudh dhundo...i dont have time...
Kria was hurt...she just wanted to say good morning to her...the bell rang...ramu kaka opens the door...swayam came in...sharon stops fussing...
Sharon-Hey swayam!!!...
Swayam just gave a cold smile to sharon...
Swayam-Shona...*he calls kria shona*...chalo...namastey aunty...
Smrit gave him a smile...kria took her bag...she was lost in her own thoughts...they went...
Sharob-Bloody b***h khudko samjahti kya hain...swayam mera hain!!!...
She also went to the college...in college swayam went for some work...kria was walking when she clashed with rey...swayam returned at that time...kria was about to fall but rey caught her...they have an eye lock...rey makes her straight...kria was lost...
Rey-Umm...kria...voh i needed to talk...
But he was cut by swayam...who puts his hand around kria's waist...
Swayam-Shona chalo...
Rey was jealous...kriyam went...
Rey-Yeh swayam samjhta kya hain khudko...how dare he even touch my kria...woah wait a second my kria???...yeh my kaha se aagya...and why the hell am i getting jealous of them!!!...
Sharon came...
Sharon-Hey rey...kaha khoye ho??...
Rey-Kria ko sorry kaise bolun!!!...
Sharon-Uff!!!...for god sake...why the hell are you thinking about her???...and you dont need to say sorry to her!!!!...
Rey-Sharon agar tum guilty nahi ho...toh that dosent mean ki mein guilty na hun...aaj hum dono ki wajha se she is so lost...aaj hum dono ki wajha se she dosent dance...and yes i will say sorry to her...bas yeh swayam waha se hat jaaye!!!!...
Sharon rolls her eyes...
On the other side...
Swayam-Kria...reyaansh se door raho!!!...he isint worthy of your attention...
Kria-Swayam tum usse aur di se itna nafrat kyun karte ho???...
Swayam-You dont need to know kria...accha chal na rehersal hall mein...
Kria-Nooo..
Swayam-Yes...
And drags her to the rehersal hall...now a girl saw swayam taking kria to the rehersal hall...she messaged every one...all surround it...even sharey got the message...
Simmi-Omg!!!...kria wapas dance karegi thats sooo cool...
All went to the rehersal hall...but sharon was fuming...
Swayam-Dance...
Kria-No swayam...mujhe nahi karna!!...
Swayam-Try karna shona...mere liye...
Kria-Theek hain...
The music starts...kria starts dancing...*i dont now how to describe the dance sry*...all smiled...swayam had a huge smile...rey sighed in relief and sharon was fuming with anger...but suddenly kria closed her eyes...and stopped dancing...and fell down...swayam ran to her...she hugged him...and burst out crying...
Kria-I cant dance swayam...i cant...
Swayam just stroked her hair...
Hope you all lyked it...😊😊...for pms add me in ur buddy list...and please suggest a name!!!...
Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing update 😊

Loved it 😊

Kriyam bond s amazing 😊

Y s smriti behaving lyk dis to kriya 😕

And y s kriya not dancing 😕

Waiting for d next part 😳
Edited by kaba3003 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
amazing update.
thanks for pm
update the nxt part soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
amazing update.
thanks for pm and update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow. . .
Awsome start. . , . .
Hw sweet of rey n swayum. . .
I jst hate dis sharon. . .
Jst wondrng the reason behind kriya. . .
Nxt update jaldi krna. .
Egarly waitng 4 it. . . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
loved it...

wanna know the past
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start...kyu smirti kriya ke saath aisa behve kar raha hai...thanks 4 the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!!
nice concept
n nice update

do update next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Wonderful update
loved it
eagerly waiting to know the reason behind y kriya's so lost
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Nice ff i really wanna knw the past
Plz pm the mext part

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