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How do u manage to surprise me everytime wid ur excelent riting...loved dis update to da core...Every dialogue n scenes were bang on..true to da characters n situation...even da real Arnav Khushi r going on a romantic date on da show n ur cement pile n lattu r going on a date too...I hope dis date takes dere realisation a step farther n increases dere knowledge abt da flying files n evolution in da stomach...Khushi's behaviour on finding out Arnav is downstairs n mite see her in a haphazard condition was so like a girl in love,so natural...I realy love da paralel tracks of ur story...Anjali-Nihaal n Akash-Payal incidents never bored me...I must say U handle paralel tracks beter dan da show's cv's ...Plss update soon...n make it a longer 1

ahhh such along time ...such nice update ...really good saucy...keep it up👏

dis was such an amzin chpter... nd yes i dont mind but love it wen u give a really long update... dis stry is damn entertainin dat i cud evr get enough of it..;);) Nd regrdin d chptr... its was damn cute...:):) evolution in khushi's stomach...ROFL... Nd both rnv khushi followin a differemt plan to get away from each other but UNEXPECTDLY EXPECTD they cum together kyk always.. also luvd d cute lil updates of Payash nd anji...

Woww...its superb SABI loved each n every line of it...fantastic update..am laughng lyk a idiot in d middle of my cls n dat 2 b phy...n yeah,am jz seeing thru my phone if there is any PMs and i literaly jumpd seeing ur PM...n all r luking at me lyk dey r seeing a ghost..hahaha
so am cmntng thru my phone...
Cming 2 d update..khusi is wat a gal,man!!seriously elephants n creatures in stomach n lastly zoo..hahaha
nd d theory no talking,no meeting n no comnunication 4 khusi m its reverse 4 arnav..hahaha..
Akash n payal convo was adorable..akash is such an stupid..hahaha
so evry1 caught anjali alongwith arnav...N my god Nihaal..i mean pic u shown he is perfect 4 her..
The last part was superb..
Thx 4 d pm..lov u sabi..
*a tight hug* muwahhh
hey,its nt over yar...listen u jz made my day...<3

awesome update ...
thanks 4 d pm

stress busters update yaar and thanksfor the pm dear. loved it

awesome update.
khushi nd payal convo was amezing.ur update r lyk stress relife.tom nd jerry as usual rocking.waiting for their diner date.keep updating

Originally posted by: daljeet

first of all thanks for nihaal's pic.may i knw who he is actually?Actor?

oh man that was amazing :D:D:D

Khushi couldn't believe her ears..was this some