KahaniYehPyarKi -my ff ~ Last Part pg 28! - Page 25

rubina ajj to sach mein rula diya...it was such a beautiful ending and i agree it was happy sumtimes u have to look at a happy ending from a different angle a happy ending isnt always them living together in love and peace...it was awsome but yet sad...lol tears are still comin out....it was cute tha way kashish wanted a bed time story eventhough she 19....awe nice to know i encouraged u...so now u mite know that i want u 2 rite another ff!!!!and this time dont make me cry!!!

Awesome and beautiful ending ruby dear! It was very touching!!!
The little poem at the end was nice!
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aww that was dad. but the 4 lines of ending it were incredible. i loved it. GREAT JOB!!!

shaheera

omg ruby u again made me mad n emotional u aunti wasnt the one hurtness enough 2 broke my heart u again broke*yell*just kidding....anyways i would like 2 say i really luved ur fanfic n the last part was very well written ......u gal how did u got brains 2 write sucha an awsome fanfic???????i must say that was an fantastic amazing brillaint fanfic.....gr8 job my jaanuu auntiii!!!!!!!!i would luv 2 write more but i dunt hav time c ya later aligater babyee

Ruby here sumthing 4 u

Red for rose

Rose 4 heart

Heart for luv

Luv 4 u

n thats absolutely true!!!!😳

Another

Kill me

Kick me but dont forget me!!!!

Ruby yaar after writing this whole fanfic u stole my heart mera dil chura liya now poor adee is left stolen😆!!!!!!!.....Do write another if u hav time.....hugs n kisses 2 u darling

Isha said if she was a producer she would hav selected u as a writer in her story!!!!!😛

ur luver

Iqra😳

be my friend forever...i will b grateful 2 u if u b mine😉

that waas a great ff. u have me in tears 😭 😭 😭

awwww ruby 😭 that was a very touching part i loved itt it made mee cry cause i could feel the pain angad nad kripa were going thought 😭 😭 😭 but that's life pple come in life to live but one daii that person has to go no matter wat which make our life miserable but thats life the unfair life 😭 i loved the sttoorie and will alwayss remeber itt and alway keep it in my heart , ur ff rock i told u that everyone would like itt it was so sweeeti noe i can't get over wat happen at the last part 😭 that was the most sad and lovey and swweeti ending i've ever read awwwww. u noe wat ruby ur ight :

There is no enemy but there is pain of life
There is no fighting but there is crying of pain
There is no hatred but there is seperation of lives
Still no anger but there is breaking of the hearts

that iss soo truee soo true that is wat goes on in the wrold i loved that ppoem itt's soo swweeti but i'll always remeber itt alway, to tell u the true when ever i read thiss poem it make mee cry noe that i think about ur ff. I LOVEd UR FF ur ff was number one and the most thing i loved about ur ff was that all this came ight from ur heart (u noe wat am saying 😭 ) aaaawwwwww keep up the good workk andd hope u start a new ff
and yaa if i said something wrong am sorriee 😳 😳 but i said wat came out of my heart 😭 😭 😭
loved ur ff and i hope u had fun reading my long comment :P lol
CONGRATSS FOR FINSHING UR FF WITH A LOVLEY, SWEET, SAD ENDING 😃
LOVE U LOTSS ALWAYSS 🤗
oo yaa IF i also found a best forever freind which iss u and will alwyass bee 😳😳😳
ur sweetheart (always 😳 )
=:kashish

awwww it was such awesome ending i really loved ur fan fic.WELL DONE 👏
u made me cry ur ff rockssssss!!!!

that was sooooooo good
but very sad
made me cry
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it was awesum! i just read it all and i adore ur ending. i jst ended my ff high school, but ur ending is soo good!