'Abhinav frowned quite clearly Madhura said she had been troubled, though the emotions emanating from her were saying otherwise, like it was a happy memory for her.'
Does this mean something? I just thought I sensed a tinge of light jealousy from Abhinav's side. Or I am misinterpreting.
Liked that little conversation between Madhura and Abhinav where he questions her if he was that bad an impression. I could imagine how cute Abhinav might have looked while questioning her.
Ah-huh i know you love Abhinav, like me. That's why you get him so well. However jealous isn't the right term, he was intrigued. Madhura feels something but her face has another story to tell. He is trying to read her. So in that way yeah he is very much interested in her. Cute again, Pooja also called Abhinav cute in a prev review. I didn't realize i am making him cute. That's a good thing though, yes that's a very good thing! :D haha
Now you will know what i mean in the next chap, m sure i will qualify as bad for this 😆
Sanaya doesn't miss any details does she? She immediately questioned Barun when he talked about Abhinav being considered Mr. Arrogant.
She doesn't, she's smart. I think you mistyped, Barun said, he was considered Mr Arrogant nto Abhinav :)
I see Abhinav is in a dilemma between the girls. It's definitely going to be a difficult task for him to choose between the two.
He doesn't get to pick. What matters is Abhinav's pov here, he prefers to have to pick Madhura over Sanaya.
Poor Barun. You wrote the change in him so well, I could so vividly imagine him going through all that pain. And he is mad at Abhinav again. Well, I don't blame Barun this time. I am sure Barun wanted to keep a few things to himself and not let anyone else know about Shilpa.
Yes we all feel bad for Barun, but he has been through the worst, things are easing up now, don't you think? :)
You understood Barun really well, perfectly said. He wanted to keep it to himself but Abhinav had pretty much of an emergency situation. He didn't want to lie, he wanted a cover, he went with half-truth.
Madhura still feels guilty considering Barun. She's a sweet and caring girl.
True Madhura is a very affectionate person, she has taken care of Sanaya for a long time now, the void of Mrs Irani has been filled by Madhura in Sanaya's life. She has a tough exterior though.
The conversation between the boys and Mr. Irani had me on my toes. Mr. Irani's anger is justified. And Barun is right...Abhinav is too good with people. Well, Abhinav has already cast a spell on poor me. Thanks to you. Hehehehehe...
Yeah it was a Dad out there, what can be worst for the boys? 😆 Jokes apart, Glad you understand Mr Irani. Abhinav is a charmer in that sense, given his powers. It's not easy to fall for him Manal, you did. I was worried people might not understand Abhinav in the beginning chapters and look what i get! You falling for him! Could there be anything better? Absolutely not! ⭐️
I can't even begin to tell you the effect the last part had on me. Sallow skin, smoke-like slaves, razor sharp teeth, dark black blood and that diary. I am so intrigued and so much in awe at how brilliantly you wrote that part.
Thanks a million, i did this part separately, i tried to get inspiration from Voldemort's coldness 😆 And also made sure i had my checkpoints ticked. Crazy, Gaunt, Hollow, Obsessed, Mysterious.
My fear was that- what if Bohra didn't actually seem all that important and scary 😳 😆
So yeah thanks for assuring me about the same :)
Chapter 11
Phew! That was one hell of a chapter! Gosh! I loved it! The truth, the experiment, the war, the good, the bad, the Slaves, the Guards...
You are a pure genius! This series is an epitome of awesomeness and pure geniusness!
I can't get over how brilliantly you have written this chapter. Brilliant is an understatement. Abhinav and Mohit's narration, Barun's curiosity, their dialogues, the story, the past...you carved it all perfectly. Perfectly!
I am glad there is no rift between Barun and Abhinav and that all's OK.
Gosh! I can't get over this chapter! I just can't! It was B.R.I.L.L.I.A.N.T!
LOVED IT DAMMIT!
OMG for a moment i felt you said it all in one breath, oh hang on i read it all in one breath 😆 I can't think straight 🤣 *Okay Zee breathe! Calm down*
Okayy back to your review...How do i begin?
I am deeply overwhelmed, am rendered speechless actually. This means much coming from you, i mean you are one of my fav writers! Can't begin to tell you really! Thanks a million! 🤗
Yes All of it does come together, the Summary makes sense now. The series, really i just planned the plot chapter-wise, i guess that's why it falls into place so well. I am really satisfied that i could give clarity in the chapter, i mean my worst fear was that i might have confused you guys even more.
Abhinav and Barun have reached a moment of understanding, you have understood them really well :)
I am just thrilled, okay i don't know what to say, i am grinning like an idiot over here, Thank You! I don't know what to say!
I am so sorry for the late comment ZJ. I really am.
LOVE YOU DAMMIT!
Don't be sorry, It's okie, i just need to know that you will come back to read, you can take your time :)
Manal <3<3<3
Luv you too 🤗
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