The Unnatural: Rise of the Army Against the Si-ah - Page 23

Originally posted by: -vrshn-

I like the friendly Barun! : )

Abhinav and Barun's scenes are more nice when they're being friends rather than teacher-student :D

Is there a possibility that both Sanaya and Mad are Unnatural?!

So, Their Father knows their secret...? hmm...

Waiting for the next chapter :)

Originally posted by: additive_monaya

awesome update zee

so both of them are adopted

who is unnatural madhura or sanaya or both? i think both

mr irani is a typical father

barun-abhinav scene was nice

Originally posted by: -Manal.A-

I choked on my popcorn like Mr. Irani choked on his food! The girls are adopted?! And they don't know. Mr. Irani definitely knows something.

Oopps watch out i will keep dropping bundles of surprises :) Yes the girls are adopted, they are real sisters. Mr Irani knows about their adoption that's All, he doesn't wanna tell the girls about it.

Who was that man? Ripped into pieces? *is pulling hair* I am turning bald! Save me!

I am on it! Hang on buddy! Instead try virtually strangling me 😆
I can give you hints though, The man has black blood, who has black blood? One of the kind. He was locked away. Yet remember their basic powers- hearing range and excellent eyesight. He knows, He knows who is behind all the mess, he knows the one who wants to kill those like him. He knows of the plan and he wants to tell Vaishnavi about it. When he reaches this place, it is deserted, where is everyone? -At the headquarters. But he has no idea about it. As he said he had heard they lived here. He was locked away, even he doesn't know for how long. He thinks it's going to be repeated. I don't think you can guess as of yet as to what is going to be repeated. but Just know this fact. And lastly he was killed, all that he knew will never reach Vaishnavi or the ears of those who Need to Know. Killed by whom? You know the answer to that too- Who is the enemy? By whom are they threatened most at the moment? I am here to help you out, so don't hesitate when it comes to posting your theories/guesses, you can PM me if you like :)

Sanaya definitely is the smart one. She has a sharp memory and is a very keen observer. Wonder if she will be the chosen one. *pulls another strand...pluck!*

Yes Bang on right, i wanted to show the stark contrast, Sanaya's first meet with Abhinav was a blur from her end, because she got excited seeing the cars, but she is not blinded. Chosen one- Can you tell me though, whom would you like it to be?
Sanaya's failing nerves? My heart's stopped beating here! Abhinav...Abhinav...Abhinav... You created him to kill me with his charisma, didn't you? The man is perfect. Formal pants, chestnut brown shirt, copper black eyes, that smile. This man is a living charmer.

Trust me it's Abhinav through and through, am just having my fan girly moments writing him 😳 Have you seen him in Survivor India? You will definitely know what i mean then He is, He is a charmer

And Barun is the cute one. Casual and laid back with that boyish charm. Me likey!

Yeah he is for young hearts i shall call it. Abhinav and Barun are two contrasting characters. I enjoy writing their scenes <3

I liked how everyone participated in the conversation. Glad that Barun didn't hold himself back. Also, I am happy that he has grown more understanding considering Abhinav. I knew he would.

Yes much ado to Abhinav's powers too, Barun is going back to being himself, I am glad you are liking the change :)
Power to communicate through the mind? Super interesting! I am eager to know all the other powers that these people possess.

Ooh thank you! :D Glad you liked it. Feeling like Barun aren't you? ;)

I have sketched all the characters, their powers, history and future, am excited to introduce them to you guys :DD

Great chapter! I thoroughly enjoyed it!
Thanks for the PM.
LOVE YOU DAMMIT!
You made my day! I have a big smile on my face after a very tiring day, All thanks to you 🤗 Luv you too ! :D <3

Manal <3

Originally posted by: SilverFairy

Mr. Irani Is A Pretty Cool Chilled Out Dad. Who's He Played By??
The Dinner Went Well. Nice To See The Boys Relaxing For Once.
Are More Characters Will Be Introducted Or Is All Of Them??