The Unnatural: Rise of the Army Against the Si-ah

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AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: monaya_sajan
2 good yaar!!!!!! get mohit in dis soon!!!!!!!! plzzz wanna see monaya!

Thanks a lot :) I will give you Mohit soon, Now don't forget they are not meant to be together in this series!

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AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: -Manal.A-
I am gonna say this again- I am hooked!
I absolutely love the flow of your writing. It is neat and easy to follow.
New characters introduced I see. And I am already loving them.
Loved the way Sanaya teases Madhura with Abhinav. Hehehehehehe...
Abhinav is arrogant. Agreed. But I am sure there is a strong reason behind that attitude.
I really liked that you began with Barun's POV. It gave us a deep insight to his character and his thoughts. So, he dislikes Abhinav. Hmmm...
Barun clearly doesn't want to be part of all that Abhinav wants him to be part of. He wants to be 'normal'. What 'mission' is Barun talking about? What happened that 'dreadful night' that 'changed everything'?
So many questions! Only you an answer!
Please update soon!
Thanks for the PM.

Manal <3

Thanks Manal, it cheers me up when i see your review :)

Glad to see you have been coping well, it's nice to hear about them from your pov

@Bold- How abt you check the title of Part I - once again ;)

You will see- i will get to it soon, Keep Reading 🤗

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AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: soho19
Awesome update, and I'm so sorry for vanishing but I just caught up with this .. prep leave is torture ... brilliant story, and awesome update ... if you can't PM, it's fine, I'll bookmark it. But amazing concept, love! 😃

Thanks and It's okie not a prob, take ur time :)

Prep leave, talk abt it- i certainly don't miss those days of my school life 😆

I am doing PM's, just gonna make the buddy list short, it's a mess doing them so often. Plus i intend to make two updates in a week, seeing that i have to make sure i can send in pm's quick.

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AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: SanjArShi-ASR
Sorry fo late comment...Awsome Update...loved it...

It's okie, take ur time, as long as u haven't abandoned us(Me and Series), i will survive 😆

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AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: Hot_Indo_Chilly
Seems that Braun and abhi have lots of secrets to unfold! What's dhrasti's role? It keeps getting more and more interesting!

Yes, we all have secrets don't we? Small or big, that depends :)

You noticed Drashti ! :D You will see, Keep Reading ! 😳

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AnotherAdmirer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

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priyanka/pari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

awesome part zee 👏👏

loved it to core

waiting for the next part for mohit's entry 😳

thanx for pm

Edited by additive_monaya - 13 years ago

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sai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...can't wait 4 mohit's entry...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm

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arhifrvr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#149

baruns a wee bit weird... Isn't he..?? =P

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soni_md

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Posted: 13 years ago

#150

Very cute, babe, awesome update, and thank you so much for the PM ... I love the concept, the integration of characters, and the clarity with which you explain positions ... damn, this is a whole new Sobti ... it's gonna take a while for me to picture the low slung jeans, backpack, and t-shirt 😆 And thank you so much for adding me to your PM list ... I won't let you down again. I for one am not going to complain about the speed of the updates, Anne and Munchy cured me of that fatal flaw long ago 😛 Brilliant as always!

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