The Unnatural: Rise of the Army Against the Si-ah

mishti_17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Sorry I cant like the chapter.. Such an amazing one.. We are at college and well someone seems smitten by Barun and someone is pissed off at Abhinav.. 😆 Loved Karan, Nia and Akshay.. They are a riot and Sanaya included too.. 😆 So we also know whats going on in Barun's mind.. Waiting for his entry, hope Sanaya doesnt faint.. 😆
And yeah... I have been following "Arjun" Nice show and like you said, Sana is as charming like always.. ❤️

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arhifrvr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

barun is changing...????? Woah.!

Loved the intro of the 3 new characters... =)

Aaand waiting for the 'not so pleasant' update... =P

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meenaluma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

awesome updatewaiting for the new entry

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sai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Hiii
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved nia,ashkay n Karan
Kinda feeling sad 4 Abhinav
Can't wait 4 more
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm

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Silvy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Zee Don't Remove Me Iam Reading Your FF.
It's Really Good.
So After This FF Is Over You Will Leave IF???

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chavvi16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

HUH NEW CHARACTERS COOL
SO WHAT HAPPENED WITH BARUN BACK WHERE EVER HE IS FROM
HOW DID HE GET THESE POWERS AND WHY IS HAVING THESE POWERS BAD
AND WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON
WHY ARE THESE GUYS TRAINING THERE MUST BE SOME REASON WHICH EVEN BARUN DONT KNOW
WONDER WHATS HAPPENING
WOW THAT WAS ONE LONG AND INTERESTING UPDATE
INSIGHT INTO OTHER CHARATERS POV AND WHAT BARUN THINKS ABOUT ALL THIS TARINING
CHEERS FOR PM

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monaya_sajan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

2 good yaar!!!!!! get mohit in dis soon!!!!!!!! plzzz wanna see monaya!

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Manal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

I am gonna say this again- I am hooked!

I absolutely love the flow of your writing. It is neat and easy to follow.

New characters introduced I see. And I am already loving them.

Loved the way Sanaya teases Madhura with Abhinav. Hehehehehehe...

Abhinav is arrogant. Agreed. But I am sure there is a strong reason behind that attitude.

I really liked that you began with Barun's POV. It gave us a deep insight to his character and his thoughts. So, he dislikes Abhinav. Hmmm...

Barun clearly doesn't want to be part of all that Abhinav wants him to be part of. He wants to be 'normal'. What 'mission' is Barun talking about? What happened that 'dreadful night' that 'changed everything'?

So many questions! Only you can answer!

Please update soon!

Thanks for the PM.

Manal <3

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soni_md

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Posted: 13 years ago

#129

Awesome update, and I'm so sorry for vanishing but I just caught up with this .. prep leave is torture ... brilliant story, and awesome update ... if you can't PM, it's fine, I'll bookmark it. But amazing concept, love! 😃

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