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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the pm and awesome update :D

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Meesocute

whn will u update...pls update soon...pls pls pls pls pls


sorry dear it will take a little time..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry for late comment...

Awesome part...
Loved it
Viha date was nice
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want more kriyansh...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cute update ..!
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Hey guys I'm back with the update. I've written this update in a hurry so don't know how will it turn out. I hope you all like it. Enjoy.

Chapter 14:

Rey was waiting outside taani's house. He along with kriya and taani were going to the new disco opened a little far away from his house. He was waiting for taani from the past 20 minutes but there was no sign of her. He was sure if he got late kriya won't spare him. He knew handling these two together was not easy. Its going to be the toughest job of this evening. He just hoped he could make both the girls happy. He wished himself good luck since he knew he would need it.

Finally Taani arrived wearing a short, tight and revealing dress with high heels. Rey was actually shocked seeing her this way. The were going to a disc and obviously they will dance and she has worn a dress which is skin hugging and difficult to move properly. He had a doubt on her intentions that why was she going there along with him. On seeing rey stare at her in amusement taani thought he was attracted towards and she patted herself for doing this. But poor girl didn't knew that rey found her weird and didn't like her dressing sense. As a formality he complimented her saying " you look pretty". Both of them got into the car and drove towards kriya's house to pick her up.

Taani didn't like the plan of kriya going with them. She wanted rey for herself. They reached kriya's house and on hearing the horn of the car kriya, with in few minutes came out. Rey was standing outside the car and on seeing her he was awestruck. She was looking so damn gorgeous. She had worn an off shoulder blue dress which ended a little above her knees and matching heels. She had done a little make up keeping herself simple and beautiful enough to make boys drool over her. As she reached near him all she could hear him saying was "stunning" which made her blush adding sparkle to her beauty.

Rey opened the back seat door for her like a perfect gentle man. On seeing taani sitting in front with rey, kriya felt a prang in her heart. Ignoring her feelings she stepped inside. Rey adjusted the mirror inside the car in such a way that he could see kriya properly. They soon reached the pub. Seeing the crowd outside and the way they were behaving made kriya a little uncomfortable. Every guy was staring at kriya with an awe and their girls were envying her. Taani thought that those guys were staring at her and she tried flaunting more. Here on the other hand rey felt like breaking the teethes of those guys. He could sense that kriya wasn't feeling comfortable so he stepped a little close to her and gripped her waist. At first she was shocked but then felt good. But but but taani wasn't liking it. There were a few girls near the entrance and the came near kriyansh and one of them complimented them saying "u guys look perfect together" to which kriya blushed and rey smiled.

They entered inside and saw that it was nearly filled. They found a table near the bar. With in no time taani pulled rey to dance floor. On being asked by rey kriya refused to come since she didnt feel like dancing. Taani was so close to rey. Rey himself wasn't comfortable with her but just plastered a fake smile on his face. Taani was trying to seduce him. Kriya was confused on the other hand. Seeing rey and taani so close to each her, she felt a pain in her heart. She tried distracting herself away from them by talking to the guy who was trying to get her attention. But her eyes automatically moved to their direction. Rey was observing all this. Finally kriya became frustrated and ordered for 3 tequila shots and drank them in a go thought she didn't like its taste in the begining. Rey couldnt watch this as taani want allowing him to do anything.

Suddenly the lights went dim leaving every one confused. Music started playing and the spot light drifted towards the center of the dancing floor. A girl was there with her back facing everyone. As the music proceeded she turned around and startec dancing. Rey was very much shocked on seeing this side of kriya. Kriya was doing some sexy moves making every guy go gaga over her. She beautifully portrayed her moves along with seducing every guy including rey who were watching her. Rey was very much jealous on seeing this. He wished he could take kriya in his arms and shout that "she is mine". Through out her dance kriya kept ignoring rey. Rey wanted kriya to dance this way but only for him not for these nobodies.

Finally the song ended and every one cheered for kriya. Kriya got down the stage balancing herself. Now rey understood that she was drunk and it was a big problem. He quiclky rushed towards her pushing the crowd in between. By the time he reached near her she had drunk nearly 3 shots and was drinking the 4th one. On being asked by rey, the bartender replied that she had drunk 7 tequila shots in all. This left rey shocked. He himself had not drunk more than 3 and this girl managed to drink 7 so quick.

Rey some how managed to get her out of the club with taani following them and cribbing at the same time that she doesn't want to leave so soon. On seeing that her tries were useless she went and sat on the front seat of the car. Seeing this kriya started crying. She wasn't in her senses.
"Arrey kya huya??" Rey asked surprised by her behavior
"dekho na taani aage baith gayi...mujhe aapke saath baithna hai aur vaise bhi abhi meri turn honi chahiye" she said innocently
Rey was lost in her cuteness, but her fake crying brought him back. He looked towards taani pleading with his eyes but she denied and kriya started crying even more. All his tries to stop her failed. Frustratedly he picked her in his arms and went and sat on the driving seat with kriya in his laps. Taani was shocked on seeing this, she was burning with jealousy and here kriya was enjoying. She was irritating him, distracting him by pulling his cheeks, pinching his nose, ruffling is hair etc etc.

They dropped taani first and then they were proceeding towards kriya's house but she interrupted.
"rey mujhe ghar nahi jaana" she said cutely
"What!! ghar nahi jaan toh aur kahan jaana hai??"
"long drive par"
"kriya are u mad itni raat ko tumhe long drive par jaana hai"
She pleaded him so cutely that he couldn't deny. On their drive kriya saw an ice cream van and shouted like a kid "Ice Cream!!". Rey smiled at her childish behavior and stopped the car. they ordered 2 ice creams and kriya was enjoying her ice cream like a five year old would to. Some of the ice cream was near her lips. Rey with his finger wiped it off. Both of them felt current pass through their bodies and were deeply staring in each others eyes. Rey inched forward and so did kriya. They were about to kiss but the thundering of clouds brought them back to present. The alcohol effect was still there on her.

Rey looked around and found no clue of where there are. He guessed that they have reached the outskirts of the city. Soon it started raining heavily and due to this rey thought not to dive back since it wold be risky. So he decided that they would spend the night in the car itself. He sent swayam a message that kriya was with him and was safe. Before rey could tell kriya anything she slept. He hands were around his neck and she snuggled into the crook of his neck. He could feel her shivering, so he lowered the AC and with out disturbing her pulled out his coat and covered her with it. Rey was unable to control himself and her beautiful face, their intensity and closeness and her thighs weren't helping him either. He managed to control himself and drifted to sleep.

It was around 3 am in the morning and kriya woke up with her head spinning. She was shocked on seeing their position and cursed herself for this as she remembered a few things that happened last night. Her eyes fell on rey who was sleeping peacefully holding her in his arms. Unknowingly her hand reached his lips and she gently rubbed them. She slowly inched forward and pecked him on his lips. As she pulled back rey woke up. She lowered her head as she was feeling embarrassed. Rey himself was shocked at this. Unable to control his desire her made her look at him and kissed her. She responded back with same passion. Both of them were drowned in the passion of love. Due to lack of breath they pulled apart and rey started planting kisses down her neck and shoulders. She arched her neck back giving him more space. As he was about to pull her strap down realization hit him. He didn't want kriya to feel uncomfortable and pulled up the strap and kissed her lips once again. Kriya thanked him through her eyes. He lifted her up in his arms and made her lye on the back seat and covered her properly with his coat. Both of them smiled to each other and drifted in to each others dreamland.



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Posted: 12 years ago
res
un res
yeh le mannu unres kardiya tere liye... sorry kal tym nahi tha... but gtaa say super duper awsome and finally u updted yippe am the 1st oine to cmmmnt and likrr lyk always lol..., cant wait for the next part..
this taani is really annoyng but i luv it wn she gets jelouss.. but kriya itn jelous hogayi that she drank so much😆 hehee aur saath mein sach bhi nikal gaya😳
loved how u ritte this parrt and quikly mke kriyaansh cnfess and take this stupid taani out shes buggng lol😡👏
Edited by aishasully - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome..

KRia tulli and pooor rey sambhaling her...
it was funny and cute alsooo...
loved it
update sooon...
Edited by K.R_ackraal - 12 years ago

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