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rev4eva

@rev4eva

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#921

Just read all the parts and it was amazing gal... Looking forward for the next part

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Itu

@simi58

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#922

Hayeee awesome update.. u made hottie cry.. well he deserved this.. But u know what um sure thr's no ashutosh at all.. or else why wud khushi adorn the A in her mehendi? in her mind its arnav always unless the A stands for kushi kumaaari guptaaa.. :P Well finally arnav came to get his bride..

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khusharnav

@khusharnav

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#923

Hello... Just read all the parts. Very nicely written. I really enjoyed the plot so far. Looking forward to your next update!

Thanks!😃

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Shifa Khan

@chulbuli94

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#924

I read part 3-5 in a go n really felt like watching a MAHA EPISODE😛...IT was awesome but sorry to say I cannot sympathise with a much experienced Arnav.he does not believe in marriage.ok.but he has not any problem in having sex with random models&business associates.it was not a great deed that after meeting khushi,he discontinued his series of physical relationships.😡 Ihope u'll not glorify ASR's deeds😃

Edited by chulbuli94 - 12 years ago

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#925

hey.,starting with this one now. . .
will try to read as much as possible tonight,and the remaining i will read tomorrow. . .
will comment after each chapter. . .
😊

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#926

done with part 1. . .
oh k,so 1st toh i thought ARSHI is married,but no i am wrong,great!
but no, who is this aashutosh!
😕
and ya,what a passionate kiss,great descriptions. . .as always. . .😉
loving this fiction as well!
😊
now,is Khushi really going to marry someone or is she faking it so Arnav agrees to marry her,wait,let me read more. . .going to part 2. . .

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#927

done with part 2 too!
feeling pity for babyji. . .but the driver is really sweet. . .😳
ah,you don't know how much i love ve possesive side of ASR,his angry,just love it . . .😉😛
the Prakash brothers terrified of ASR , .🤣

He would mutter a
few "What thes" and
"Unbelieveables" in
between but never stopped
her. so touching!

their first kiss,wow!
very well written. . .

my heart skipped a beat at this-
"It is incorrect to call up
another man's to-be-wife
so late"

and on this-
It
was a good decision on part
of Anjali to not replace the
television. ..i was 😆
good update.. .
waiting to read more,so i will move on!
😳

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#928

OMG,part 3 was too intense. . .
my brain is not working to type any comment. . .
is Khushi really getting married?or is it Payal's wedding,May be!
well,the way you described ASR point of they,was awesome. ..
moving head now.. .

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#929

just read part 4,which was from Khushi's point of view . . .. .
There were
many such instances
where he had fulfilled her
small/big, voiced/unvoiced,
serious/not-so-serious
wishes.
so good yar . . .its so generous,cute and touching feeling to read these lines. . .

hmmm,
"He wasn't, at
least before her, like how
he was portrayed in the
media"
these lines make us readers think,that yes,it could be that Khushi changed Arnav from ASR!or he was always Arnav,but media made him look like ASR. . .quite not able to decide,but am happy with this confused state of mind of me . . .😉

and and and,
he has never told her the 3 letter word,i guess your saving it for the last,right?
😳

and yes,again,this as a very touching chapter too,but now from Khushi's side. . .
awesome drafting!
i am really looking forward to read more. . .so,am moving on. . .
😳

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#930

dammit,again you starting the chapter in such a way,that my heart is trembling. . .
Damm Arnav's father. . 😡
am very angry on him to accuse Arnav like this. . .

loved it how Anjali consoled Arnav and encouraged him to get his Khushi back. . .😳

and yes,its Arnav Singh Raizada who decides his fate .. .i just love that line. . .😃

and Khushi has an "A" in her hand done by mehendi?
and Arnav's entry with a bang. . .great,what a cliff hanger!😕
very well drafted. . .moving on to part 6 now. . .
😃