*Completed* Th#1 ArHi SS:Fire and Fire

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Hehehehhehehehehehe "Do come"... Ur OS are always a delight to read :) I really hope u have a second shot for this

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Sharmini Segari

@Chimpsy

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#82

That's it! Kick some good-looking ass, Khushi! 😳

What? He thinks his kisses will cause you temporary blindness? 😡

Stay focused... When you've cornered him, make him sign a pre-nup or something... This tiger needs to be on a leash!!! 😈

LL, very nice! 👏

Good job!

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Lily2011

@Lily2011

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#83

amazing os dear. plz cont wid d 2nd part.

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Harshita jain

@HARSHU246

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

I loved it like anything...i luved khushis attitue..amzing
and the ludo one ROFL 🤣 khushi can do anything and lazy leaves aka zehra can make d characters do anything 😉. But plse dooo continue... asap plse plse ...i oved it...amzing !

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naina

@warriorprincess

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Whoaaa that was interesting. i could actually picture his expressions. Great writing.

naina

Edited by warriorprincess - 12 years ago

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desilover101

@desilover101

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

wow amazing, i think a pt2 is need though :)

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priyaganesan

@priyalovely

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#87

wow superb yaar...dono hw u r writing dis...loved it very much...it was quite enjoyable wen i imagined arshi in tat place...keep writing...tfs..thans for PM...

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Loved the update.. how kushi asked arnav to select her wedding card...

r u gonna continue it???? thanks for the pm

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

I loved it! And the bit that made me laugh out loud was 'What do you want us to do on our wedding night then? Play ludo?' Ahaha please continue this OS; as much as i like to see this fiery, confident Khushi... i like them together.. always :)