Swaron FF: No Ending..

Hi guys,

I am an active reader of a lot FF, SS and OS (most swaron related 😉) in this forum, and based on the writing standard that I have seen here, I have too give this disclaimer "Please bear with my poor writing and poor storytelling ability.😃 "

Its the first chapter of this FF, so please do let me know if I should stop it right here or continue.

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"So how is it ?" she asked him. She was standing two steps in front of him, looking around with self satisfaction and proud.

"It's a bit small I think" he replied. Hearing that she turned around a bit slowly, directly looking at him with a raised eyebrow.

He couldn't help, but seeing that a huge grin had automatically plastered on his face.

"We bought our first house out of our savings and all u got to say is it's a bit small, u rich spoiled brat. Wait there I will kill you". saying that she started chasing him. After a bit of chasing in between through the unorganized furniture she got him, and was holding her hand around his neck, bending him down.

"Now, say how is it?" she asked very dominatingly.

"It's awesome and huge as a palace. I was just kidding earlier." he said still grinning and trying hard to loosen her grip on his neck, but suddenly he felt that her grip just got loosened. He can clearly say what was in her mind even without looking at her. He was still in the bend down position and her hand loosely was around his neck, he didn't waited much and just swept her off her feet, literally. He just looked directly into her eyes and said.

"You are such a drama queen. You know I was kidding and still you got mood off." He said that giving her a peck on her cheek.

It was her chance to grin, and she was grinning really hard.

"My poor baby, you always fell for my mood out prank na, so sweet of yours" saying this she started laughing and was trying to bury her head in his chest. He was just looking at her face without saying much.

Seeing his reaction she knew he can see the mood off behind her eyes which was trying to hide by laughing and that stopped her laughing.

"The house is perfect, and you know why?" she didn't even spoke anything and was starring at his big eyes. He continued.

"coz its ours". A smile just crept on her face, and she just sighed and placed her head back on his chest.

"And FYI, I'm not gonna say these kinda cheesy lines again. This month's quota for cheesy lines are over, so don't even think of having another mood off again"

She lifted her head from his chest and said.

"What would I do without you? If you hadn't had happened to me, I would have been a complete mess."

"Oh yaar, stop being so philosophical. Btw you ok?" he asked her in concern.

She said with her eyes closed and big smile on her face.

"Couldn't be better"

"Great, coz now my back is aching. I must say you have really put on weight." Saying that he just dropped her on the bed.

"Aww Mr Rajeev Shikhawat, you are so dead. You are going to pay for calling me fat." Saying this she started hitting him.