IPKKND OS - Beneath the stars updt chap 04(16/08)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi guys and gals of IF!

I am back with another OS, which I think is growing, by the looks of it. :P

I am gratified by the support you guys 've shown a newbie and I hope that this one too, is enjoyable reading.

So without further ado, lemme present to you, my newest ArHi fic,

Beneath the Stars

Part 01


Arnav Singh Raizada had never been the kind of man who worried about things. He was a man of action, a man of few words and even fewer emotions... or at least, he had been, before one Miss Khushi Kumari Gupta had tapko-ed into his well ordered and peaceful life. Suffice to say, she was Khushi Singh Raizada now and his life was nothing but a riot of colors, emotions and words coming at him so fast that they jumbled over each other. Yes... That was what his Khushi was, a complete storm of colors, of ever present smiles, a million words and mercurial emotions. And somehow, ASR wasn't feeling anything but happiness.

It was a testament to how much love and the right woman could change a man. Make no mistake, he was still the much feared and extremely respected ASR when at the office, the adored Chotey around his Di and Nani, the respectable Bhai to Akash, the slightly overwhelming Jethji to Payal, the irritated Nannav to his idiotic cousin, the dreaded Arnav babu to the assorted Prakash's that roamed about Shantivan, and mortal enemy to Lakshmi the goat.

Around all these people, pretty much nothing had changed about him in the months following his kidnapping, subsequent return to Shantivan, and the drama that had followed. It was only one person, who had seen, heard and felt the change that had taken place inside of Arnav Singh Raizada. Because she had been the cause of the change and she'd be the one who would feel the effects of it.

Arnav wasn't the kind to admit to feelings and emotions being a part of his world, but after the whole kidnapping drama, he'd been more than ready to open up his heart to the one woman who he knew completed him in ways he'd never even known existed. But of course, she was Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada... and she would never make it easy for him. And she hadn't.
Khushi was the kind of person who never did anything by half measures. If anything had to be done, she would jump in with both feet, not even bothering to check the depth. And here he was, the kind of guy who would probably sit down and develop a blueprint of his plan of action, taking into consideration every damn variable before he stepped into the fray.

It was why Khushi was the front man (woman) in their relationship and it was also why Arnav had saved her shapely backside so many times. He looked, she leapt. He stayed quiet while she poured her heart out. He stood strong while she bent with the strength of her emotions. He thought with his mind, while she felt with her heart.

It was why they clicked. It was also why they'd had such a difficult time adjusting to each other in the beginning. They each stood for all the things that the other hated in a person. His reticence, arrogance, cold calculativeness... all of which Khushi had loathed, had all transformed into qualities such as quietness, pride and a strategic mind, when she'd come to know him better. And they'd helped her in times of trouble. He'd stood calmly as her pillar of support, something she could fall back on, someone she could depend on.

And the things he'd at one point of time thought he hated in her - her loudness, her perpetual good cheer, her non stop chattering and her unshakeable belief in things that had no contact with reality. But once Khushi Kumari Gupta had successfully formed a place for herself in Arnav's hardened heart, he'd found himself enchanted by her vitality, her beautiful smile, her mellifluous voice and her strength of character. It was what had made the days after their forced wedding remotely bearable for him. The fact that he was continuously discovering new facets of his wife, always something surprising, always something new. She kept him on his toes and he loved it.

Even though they'd almost never acknowledged it, even to each other, they knew that it was these differences that made them click as a couple, as a team and as a single entity. It was these differences in thought and action that had led to the successful unveiling of the man behind the whole kidnapping drama in the Raizada family.

Of course, there was one less permanent member at the Raizada Mansion now, but no one liked to talk about that. Anjali Di had made her peace with Arnav's actions regarding her husband when she'd seen and heard the requisite proof of his unsavory actions regarding both her and Khushi. He hadn't told most anyone about the extent of financial ruin that one Shyam Manohar Jha had caused the Raizadas. It wasn't something that would benefit anyone by their knowing it, but he'd needed to vent to someone and who better to do it to, other than his wife.

So till now, Khushi was the only other person who knew exactly what that snake in the grass had done and what he had been about to do, when they'd foiled his plans. Arnav had had to spend literally days locked up in his office with his lawyers and accountants to try and figure out a way to get back most of the money lost by his crazy brother-in-law. Even more difficult were the bad faith suits that AR Designs had to face due to Shyam using the company's name for a lot of transactions that he'd made money from.

It had taken a long and painful two weeks for all the proof against one Shyam Manohar Jha to come to light. Even though the rest of the family didn't know of it, Arnav had at Khushi's behest, put a couple of private investigators on his tail, and they'd struck gold in Mumbai, where they'd found him busy spending the money he'd fleeced off of AR. He'd also been in the process of roping in another woman with his sob stories of a controlling wife who cheated on him, and her heartless family.

With the whole case against the man coming to a head, even being the halfway decent lawyer he was, Shyam couldn't do much more than plead guilty for a lesser sentence. To Arnav and Khushi's satisfaction, it had been one of close to ninety years rigorous imprisonment, compounding all the charges he was facing. Shyam would never be a free man while they lived and that, was enough for the Raizadas.

With the shadow of Shyam gone from their lives, most of the Raizadas had returned to life as they knew it. Except two... Anjali and Khushi. Anjali Jha, or Anjali Singh Raizada as she called herself now, was a changed woman. A much more mature and much stronger person than before, she had become what the others thought was a mellower version of her Chotey. While Arnav was all volatile temper and furious questions, Anjali was unshakeable and calm but always on point.

But due to the effect of having Khushi and Payal always by her side, Anjali hadn't lost her cheerful, softer side. She'd become a lot stronger, even her brother, who'd coddles her before understood that now. Anjali Raizada knew that she would have to be strong, if not for her family then at least for her child, which would be coming into the world in just a couple of months now. The child that had done nothing wrong and would know nothing other than the fact that she was his or her mother.

While Anjali had changed for the better, Khushi had done quite the opposite. Once the whole Shyam fiasco was done, she'd become a lot quieter and seemed almost pensive some days. Most noticeably, the ever present smile on her face, that lit up any room she was in, was becoming more and more of a rarity, coming onto her face only when she was around Anjali or her Jiji. It was something that bugged Arnav more than he cared to admit, and Arnav Singh Raizada was nothing if not a man of action.

This time, whatever he did would have to be carefully planned out. Khushi wasn't an easy person to mollify, especially because gifts and things that usually made other women squeal in joy had no effect on her. His one of a kind wife, had absolutely no respect for brands and would appreciate a single rose with a thought behind it, more than a diamond necklace bought without one. But first, he'd have to find out just what the problem was, before he went barreling in to correct it. Looked like Khushi had started rubbing off on him in their six months together. But then, he'd always been the hotheaded one when it came to one Mrs. Khushi Kumari Gupta Singh Raizada.

Wait. What?!

Maybe that was it. Who was he kidding?... Of course that was it!

That had to be it... the goddamned six month contract that he'd thrown in her face after their horror of a wedding ceremony... during the time when he'd possibly lost all of his brain cells. All he'd been thinking about on that day was the fact that he had to protect his Di and that he couldn't let Khushi become someone else's. Plus there was that unfortunate sight of Khushi in Shyam's arms running through his mind as if on continuous loop. It was that more than anything, that had prompted a completely disproportional reaction from him, making his react like a spoilt child whose favorite toy had been snatched away. He'd thrown a temper tantrum, and completely spoiled any chance of him and Khushi ever having a normal life.

Things might've changed in the intervening six months, but Arnav knew that Khushi would never even think of outstaying the contract. She was his certifiably crazy, one-of-a-kind, stupidly generous and highly principled wife who he loved more than he'd thought possible, one who would not even consider breaking the stupid contract he'd held her under.

She might've stayed back before for fear of his trying to destroy her sister's marriage in the beginning. But now, now that all those misunderstandings had been swept away, now that she knew in every cell of her being that Arnav, though he might've used it to threaten her before, would never break up Payal and Akash's relationship, she was still planning to honor the six month clause because it was part of the contract he'd made her sign.

It bewildered him as to how she'd managed to survive in this sort of a materialistic and power hungry world till she met him, what with all her outdated ideas of duties and antiquated values of honor and commitment. Though he wasn't about to complain about that now. It was exactly these qualities of hers, coupled with her generous and loving nature that had led to her honoring the stupid piece of paper that put a restriction on the longevity of their marriage. And for that, Arnav couldn't start to mention just how thankful he was.

If his stupidity and hotheadedness had let her walk out of his life then, he knew he couldn't have forgiven himself for the rest of his life, and he would've ended up making a lot of people miserable for a very, very long time. She was the saving grace of his sorry existence and if he had to thank some higher power he wasn't quite sure he believed in for that, he was wholeheartedly ready to.

But for the moment, he had to figure out just what to do, to make sure Khushi understood the fact that the six month contract was a huge and really sick joke which was about to become extinct. And it had to be done in a fashion that would reassure her of her permanency in his life... in their lives.

He had to show and tell her just how much he loved her, make her understand that even the thought of her leaving had him dying just a little bit and that if god forbid, she ever left him, he wouldn't be alive even to try and get her back. It had to be a big gesture, but it had to be something that couldn't be bought or ordered... those were really easy to do. He would have to work to get Khushi to forgive him... after all, he'd done something that wasn't worthy of being forgiven. It had to be a labor of love and for her, for his Khushi, Arnav was willing to go the distance. He would do whatever it took to make her forgive him completely and accept that he wanted to spend the rest of his life loving her to the exclusion of all else.

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Okay... so that was it for now. I'll be back soon with the next chapter. Till then, happy reading!!

And don't forget to comment. Buddy me if you want updates.

Oh and check out my other fics

Permafrost

and

Stronger



Love, Hugs and Cheers!

Genie

*Edit*

Chapter 02 is up, scroll down to read 😊 ... and don't forget to comment!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it,
thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: SanjArShi-ASR

Awsome OS...Liked it...😊



Thank you so much for the review... I will be putting up the next chapter of this and my other multi-chap fic soon. Stay tuned :)

Hugs

Genie

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: MISTIE

loved it,
thanx 4 d pm



I should be thanking you for being my steadiest reviewer. I love hearing from you and you don't know just how much it means to me that you take those extra two minutes out to comment everytime.

A heartfelt thank you from me to you for being so special❤️

Hugs

Genie

p.s. Will update soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello all you beautiful people!😃

I am back with the next chapter of Beneath the stars... read on and enjoy!

On and don't forget to comment. Buddy me if you want PMs on updates please

Oh, before going further, this update is dedicated to MISTIE, for being the most regular reviewer and supporter any writer could dream of... Thanks luv, you're a star!⭐️

Beneath the Stars - Chapter 02


Arnav Singh Raizada had never thought he would be on any occasion driven to thanking some higher power than himself, but that was exactly what he found himself doing just then.

Things had gotten shaken up quite a bit with his Dadi's surprise entrance into Shantivan... one could almost say that the Shanti that was trying to make it's way back after the distressing few days following Shyam Manohar Jha's departure, had been driven away mercilessly. Arnav knew his Dadi very well, she was a stickler for rules, had a penchant for showing her palm to people and situations that didn't suit her, and was quite a bit of a hypocrite.

From their childhood, Anjali had always been her father's pet and Arnav their mother's. And Dadi had always made it clear just who her favorite was. While Nani had managed to treat both of them equally, Dadi had no troubles making it obvious that Anjali would always be more special to her because she was just like Dadi's son. Arnav was more like his mom and it was a fact that Dadi had always resented, as she'd never really liked her bahu.

The daughter of a rich businessman, Sunaina Raizada had always lived in the lap of luxury, never having to face the need or want of anything. Her upbringing had been relaxed and in consequence, Sunaina had learned to take life as it came to her. Sunaina Malik nee Raizada had never been what the pious Dadi had wanted as her daughter-in-law. Her modern outlook and easy going attitude, which had been the very qualities that had attracted Amar Malik to her, were just the things that struck his mother as being the qualities of an unfit daughter-in-law. It didn't help matters when Amar Malik had gone against his mother's wishes and gotten married to Sunaina Raizada. Of course, Dadi had reconciled with her son afterwards, but things had never been calm between her and her daughter-in-law, even up until the day Anjali and Arnav had lost both their parents.

That Dadi saw Sunaina Malik as being the reason for her son killing himself, had never been too much of a secret and in some sort of twisted blame game, she'd transferred all her feelings for her daughter-in-law onto her grandson, who'd at that time been a teenager of 14. With the ground just yanked out from under his feet, a young and unstable Arnav had turned to his grandmother for support, just to be spurned by her for reasons unknown. He'd never forgotten it and he was sure he could never forgive her for what she'd taught him then. That day had seen the birth of Arnav Singh Raizada, a fact no one other than he himself was aware of.

But now, with the situation already teetering upon the edge of a precipice, Arnav couldn't think of a worse time for Dadi to re-enter their lives. And then there was the fact that Arnav almost certainly knew that someone in this house, a person he could pretty much identify, had called her, which was why she was here at this point in time. It was slightly more disconcerting for him that his sister had thought to call the one other person who'd be able to affect him in such a way after Khushi, herself and Nani. To the three of them, Arnav reacted because he... loved them. But with Dadi, it was different. He didn't like or respect Dadi more than he had to and he knew that she didn't like him back.

That Anjali had thought to take Dadi's help struck him, showing him for the first time just how much she'd changed because of what had happened with Shyam. Arnav knew that Anjali still didn't believe whatever had come to light about that no good husband of hers. She might've made her peace with his actions regarding Shyam, but she'd nevertheless been quite depressed about it. Lately, she'd changed, looking like she had before any of this happened. She'd almost become his old toffee jaisi meethi Anjali Di again and in his preoccupation with Khushi, he'd neglected to think about the change in her. Yes, she had become mellower and more mature, but she was after all the same person still. She still loved her husband for the man she'd thought he was and being the Raizada she was, it was undoubtedly difficult for her to digest the fact that she could've been so wrong about him. So in a bid to find out the truth of the situation to her satisfaction, she'd taken this step.

To say the truth, it was obvious that Anjali was in denial about Shyam's reality and now, she'd resorted to bringing in her Dadi to help her diffuse the situation, to maybe help her bring back Shyam into the house, if they found out that he hadn't been to blame. But neither Dadi nor Anjali knew, it would never happen as long as he was alive. As long as Arnav Singh Raizada breathed, Shyam Manohar Jha wouldn't even be able to put one evil toe inside Shantivan's premises or plot to ever come back into their lives.

However, Dadi's coming had resulted in one singular good thing. Whatever Khushi had been worrying about, regarding their six month contract, had been pushed to the back of her mind, what with her needing to protect herself from the onslaught of Dadi's accusations. It had also given Arnav the opportunity to openly support Khushi in front of Dadi and the other family members, helping him make it clearer to Khushi as to where his priorities lay.

She seemed a lot better for it, having your husband stick up for you in front of the family would definitely do it, and that in turn had made him feel a lot lighter, as if for a change, he'd finally done something right. And this morning, Khushi herself had given him the chance to make things clearer to her. The incident with the baby picture of him had been like a boon sent down from Khushi's favorite Devi Maiyya herself.

Of course, having your wife see a butt-naked, completely embarrassing baby picture of you was not an acceptable situation to be in, for Arnav Singh Raizada. Neither was the chase that had followed, something that he would've indulged in, had he been the man he was before he'd met Khushi. But now that he'd dealt with the fact that he did love his wife beyond measure and was ready to do anything to make her feel that, he'd also learned to shed his ASR image around her more and more. Being just Arnavji around her was becoming easier with each passing minute and for some weird reason, he wasn't at all worried about the consequences of such an action.
After all, she was his wife, the woman he loved and the one who loved him back. She would never do anything to hurt him or his family... it was high time ASR took a backseat and let Arnav live his life free of the debilitating load of his past and present weighing him down. With Khushi by his side, all Arnav could see, was a colorful future filled with her gentle laughter, bright smiles and non-stop chatter. And he would do whatever it took to make that vision a reality.

Smiling at the opportunity he'd been given by Khushi herself, Arnav spoke softly into his blue tooth as he walked down into the living room, clad in a new light blue shirt that kinda matched his new brighter mood. The departure from his usual wardrobe had been noticed by the one person whose opinion mattered to him, and she'd gifted him such a bright smile that it had taken him almost half a minute to react. Of course, then there had been that unexpected hug from her later, followed by the baby picture.

He hadn't expected to have to break his bed to get it back from her, but again, it had given him this opportunity, and it had been a rare moment when his emotions had gotten the better of him. It seemed to become easier and easier to laugh when Khushi was around, and today, he'd laughed like he hadn't laughed in more than a decade. Even Khushi had noticed, innocently commenting on the fact, which had led to his old self regaining control for a moment. He'd tamped down on his laughter and snatched the picture out of her hands with a victorious smirk, telling her neither had the bed been broken earlier.

Now as he walked down the steps to where all of the family was sat, painting some lamps for Janmaashtami and chatting, Arnav couldn't help but smirk at the plan that had come together in his mind that morning. Under the cover of his bed being repaired, he could sneak in some more workmen and have then do what he'd wanted to be done to his room.

His heart feeling oddly buoyant with the success of his plans and him looking forward to their marriage becoming a real one in every sense, Arnav could help but choke slightly on hearing Mami's comments about their broken bed. He'd also noticed Khushi blushing crimson at Mami's words and trying to hurry out to the upper level of the house. It wasn't something he would normally do, but the new and improved Arnav Singh Raizada wasn't gonna be stopped today. He turned just a bit and winked smartly at his wife, prompting her usual rounded eyes, 'o' reaction for just a second, before she blushed heavily once more and fled the room, much to his amusement.

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So that's it for the moment... Will be back soon with another update.

To clarify : I always thought Anjali was the one who brought Dadi into RM... She's the one who's not so surprised to see her there, she's the one who readily accepts Dadi's help in the matter regarding Shyam and she is the one who is bound to have told Dadi about her suspicions about Khushi and Shyam. I know most people think it's Shyam who got her here, but I think it's more plausible that Anjali brought her in.

Tell me what you thought...

Cheers!

Genie

"Edit"

Chapter 03 is up... read it here

Edited by writergenie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i jus read all ur work in one go n i really liked it!! it is amazin!! dun wrry abt da PM's cuz i'll definitely b stalkin u now!!😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved u 4 dedicating such a nice update 2 me.
It means me alot 4 me that u r apreciating my comment.
Loved d way u have potraied that anjali is d 1 to bring dadi 2 RM.
What r arnav's plan?
Would love 2 read more of it.
Thanx 4 d pm sweetie. 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: winchfire

i jus read all ur work in one go n i really liked it!! it is amazin!! dun wrry abt da PM's cuz i'll definitely b stalkin u now!!😉



Awww... you're stalking me 😳 Thats the sweetest thing someone's said to me... ever. 😆

Thank you sooo much for the encouragement!

🤗

Genie
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: MISTIE

loved u 4 dedicating such a nice update 2 me.
It means me alot 4 me that u r apreciating my comment.
Loved d way u have potraied that anjali is d 1 to bring dadi 2 RM.
What r arnav's plan?
Would love 2 read more of it.
Thanx 4 d pm sweetie. 👍🏼



Of course I appreciate your comments... they're food for my writing soul. 😃

I always thought right from the beginning when Dadi showed up at RM, that Anji had called her. My suspicion became more solid when Anji blubbered about missing her all this while. Dunno if this is the way the CVs are gonna take it, but to me, it sounds the most logical way.

And Arnav's plan will come up soon, in the next chapter maybe... so stay tuned. 😉

🤗

Genie



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Originally posted by: writergenie



Awww... you're stalking me 😳 Thats the sweetest thing someone's said to me... ever. 😆

Thank you sooo much for the encouragement!

🤗

Genie


u kno i didnt request 4 PM cuz ppl expect replies n feedback!! iam a med student i barely hv tym!! so i dont really comment on stuff!! so dont b disheartened if u dont c a comment 4m me!! kno dat i'll alwayz read ur updates asap!!

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