OS in 2 parts: Rasams and Suhaag Raat (Comp)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

limitless

@limitless

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Beautiful beautiful. Loved the way how he managed both kushi's want for rasams nd dadi's anger

Quote

saba

@ASR6262

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#162

awesome os thank u for pm me

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#163

brilliant beautifully written awesome loved it wishing this happened in the show so want remarriage so that dadi and that snake won't through suspicions on the marriage loved the os beautifully done thanks for the pm

Quote

namedx

@namedx

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#164

You are amazing, like just AMAZING!!! I was ecstatic when I received your PM!! It feels like ages since I last read an update from you, and what an update you've given us! I'm so moved by your talent and ability in bringing to life such beautiful characters!! Seriously, words fall short as to how amazing your story telling is. I've bookmarked your previous work so that I can return to it when time permits, but for now, kudos!!

😊

Quote

Manal

@...manal...

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Another beautiful OS Smita!

Loved it!

Loved the way Arnav teased her, adorned her with his mother's jewelry and supported her against Dadi's taunts.

Thanks for the PM. It was a treat to read.

Manal <3

Quote

JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#166

This was amazing!

Thank you thank you!

I love it, and in the face if the promo with dadi, I loved this outcome!

Thank you for the PM!

Quote

sshh.. ;)

@momo121

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#167

SUPERB! plzz Continue

pm when u update the nxt part :)

Quote

Msserialfan123

@Msserialfan123

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Hey Smita!

I love the way he gifted her his mother's jewels and decided to marry her ti keep her honour in front of his Dadi.

And I loved it that they didn't have to wait until Teej / Diwali or the next auspicious Day!

Quote

tibs09

@tibs09

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#169

@ Smita i was seriously hoping that Arnav uses Daadi as a pretext to get married againg in front of the family before the family realizing what happened .. but the promo dashed my hopes ...thanks for living it here atleast in the OS and as usual you pen it so beautifully